Date: 07/21/08 09:59 pm Title: The Newcomers
no wait or is it lost? still stuck...
same person who left the review below vv
Author's Response: 10 points for you!
Date: 07/21/08 09:57 pm Title: The Newcomers
Your favorite show is prison break? I honestly have no idea...
I love the story
loved the chap. also by the way I wonder what's so special about bill...i mean "prisoner #815" XD
Author's Response: why does everyone say prison break? I've never seen a single episode xD Lmao. Anyway, thanks! And you'll see ;)
Date: 07/21/08 09:18 pm Title: The Newcomers
Really good start. :)
So many questions are going through my mind now though. >.< Can't wait to see what you have planned.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 07/21/08 09:11 pm Title: The Newcomers
i'm really excited to see how this one goes.
update soon! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad :) Thanks!
Date: 07/21/08 07:00 pm Title: The Newcomers
This is cool, I'm curious as to why little Billa's in prison.. ;D
Author's Response: ;) Thanks!
Date: 07/21/08 06:44 pm Title: The Newcomers
I like it! I can't wait for you to continue! Also, I really dont think that could be considered fast pased(I think Im spelling that wrong.) Anyway good job!
Author's Response: Aaw, thank you :D
Date: 07/21/08 05:52 pm Title: The Newcomers
Evil Bill?
I am intrigued :)
Author's Response: Evil Bill, yes :) We like him , don't we?
Date: 07/21/08 05:13 pm Title: The Newcomers
I LOVE this story so far, so you'd better continue and update it soon. I can already picture Bill in an ugly orange uniform, with a smirk plastered to his face...*shudders* kind of freaky.
But update soon, m'kay? And I'm sorry, but I really don't know a favourite TV show with "# 815" somewhere in it.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I can totally imagine it, too xD Very freaky, yes.
Well, the show is Lost :P Minus the #, 815 is used many times during the show.
Date: 07/21/08 05:12 pm Title: The Newcomers
Hey =)
I DO love your first chapter!
It's original and well writen ^^
I wonder why Bill needs another lock... It's hard to imagine him as a murderer or something like this x)
Hope you upload soon!!
Author's Response: Hey, yourself ^^ Thanks a lot!
Date: 07/21/08 04:53 pm Title: The Newcomers
ok someson needs to continue, dis story rocks
i do wonder y bill has an extra lock, is he a rapist for tom hehe
anyways i rekon ur fav show is prison break or lost sumdin in the lines of that i supose
Author's Response: 10 points for you! Lost is correct :D Never watched prison break, lol. Thank you. I'll update soon :)
Date: 07/21/08 04:53 pm Title: The Newcomers
:O i wonder if your favorit TV show is SCRUBS?
rofl.
:)
Author's Response: hahahahaha! Yeah, totally! X'D
Date: 07/21/08 04:48 pm Title: The Newcomers
OOH! What is it with that prisoner? What did he do? :O So many questions! Please update soon :D
Author's Response: *giggle* I'm glad you liked it! :D
Date: 07/21/08 04:46 pm Title: The Newcomers
Hmm, definately seems interesrtine, I think the first chapter should have been a little longer, but it was good!
I like the summary etc, and it kinda struck me, cause I've just started reading silence of the lambs... Meh
I look forward to more (:
Author's Response: Yeah, I think it should have been longer, too :/ But yeah :P Thanks, though! :D
Date: 07/21/08 04:43 pm Title: The Newcomers
I like. That description immediately hooked me and I'm glad I read. Nice and intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :)