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Reviewer: Lulaxth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/15 08:18 am Title: Partner in Crime

best story

Reviewer: inlovewithTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/15 12:56 am Title: Partner in Crime

This was absolutely one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I have honestly been non stop reading since yesterday and wow I just. I loved it. Even when I was crying a bit I still loved it

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/01/15 12:27 pm Title: The Newcomers

#815 reads like a book you just can't put down. I read the entire story in just 3 days. You write Bill and Tom in such a way you can't help but be drawn in. I found myself being pulled from one side to the other all the time throughout the story. Never thought I would "be on a murderer's side", but there I was.
I love how interesting you kept the development of especially Bill's character, revealing more and more but just bit by bit, you sure had the wheels in my head turning wondering about this and that in between reading.
Extra thumbs up for giving them a bittersweet ending, it fits so well.
This is going straight to my favorites. Nothing but love for this great piece of writing!

Reviewer: YBUZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/15 04:27 am Title: Partner in Crime

OMG this was amaaaaazing !!!! IT WAS THE FIRST STORY I READ UNTIL IT WAS FINISHED!!! I mean a story that had so many chapters was so intense as you said. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL :((((( I want to know what happens ..

Reviewer: Leana Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/15 01:30 pm Title: One Step Forward?

Hi !

I feel sooooo bad that I didn't let a review before :s
It's almost half of the story and I didn't say anything !
First of all ... Oh my God ... Oh ... I'm french and I don't usually read stuff in english but I started not long ago and everyone was talking about this fiction (you're pretty famous haha xD)and at first I was like "No ... not in the mood ..." like it's an excuse--' And so ! I started to read and you can see that I didn't really stop until this chapter, acting like a crazy at 2 am trying not to make much noise lol
Someone already told you, you're amazing right ? Because ... it's so damn true ... !
Even if I can't read it in frenh (I heard about the translating thing and I'm really sorry about it :/) I'm just so into it ...
And I don't even know which one I prefer even if Bill killed someone he may be some kind of Dexter and poor me I like Dexter even if he kills people x(
Sooooo, to conclude, you're great, your fiction is too and I, actually, am so impatient to know the final word of it and at the meantime I don't want it to end ... The struggle is real xD
Thank you for this amazing story ! I now go continue my reading !

Leana.
(does my english really suck ?)

Reviewer: Kaymar Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/15 11:19 am Title: Limbo. Part II

I haven't sobbed uncontrollably like that over a fic since I read Twist and Shout. It's so good. I have binge read this, and I was going to save my review until the end, but I just couldn't. I'm so incredibly overwhelmed.

Author's Response: Oooh, Twist and Shout, I read that ages ago but I don't remember if I ever finished it hmm. Thank you, I'm glad you're liking it this far!

Reviewer: teffkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/15 07:29 pm Title: Over

Oh nooooo!!! :'(

Reviewer: teffkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/15 07:19 pm Title: Actus Reus

oh my god ...I'm so sad

Reviewer: teffkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/15 03:19 pm Title: Silent Night

Awww oh my god!!! :') he put on the necklace :O i'm so happy

Reviewer: anja0xd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/15 02:54 pm Title: Partner in Crime

Okay, so now I realized I was reading something by a fellow Norwegian! But I'll be polite and take this in English for all the curious review-stalking people, lol.

So I finally finished reading this LONG story, haha! And all I can say is WOW! That was amazing.. Not the enting I had pictured, BUT i loved it!

It was nostalgia who made me come back to this site and continue my writing, lol.. Hadn't been in here for about 7 years, figured I might have to finish some of my work.

Once again, love love loved it! lol

Reviewer: anja0xd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/15 06:17 pm Title: Whatever the Case May Be

I'm totally love love loving this so far!! just stumbled upon this fic somehow yesterday, and started reading, and I couldnt't stop! And now I have to, to go to bed! Dammit, can't wait to get back from work tomorrow so I can read more!! :D

Author's Response: Oh, I remember your username from way back when, haha. Now I'm nostalgic. Takk skal du ha! :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/15 04:24 pm Title: Terror

Zomg, sorry, a few more XD For this chapter: but he shouldn't hang out with him should be but you shouldn't hang out with him

And then, erm, in chap 3, a word is missing: as 815 his left hand down onto the table

And in chap 20 also a word missing: However, he did a wet cloth and washed away [...] 'Get', I assume.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/15 11:56 pm Title: The Newcomers

Ah, it says yet black hair instead of jet. Lol, just a trivial thing, though.

Author's Response: Thank you, I fixed this too :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/15 11:55 pm Title: Welcome to Hell

Reading this again after a million years. (I don't think I ever read the rewritten first chapters! O.O) And I noticed it still says "four others" a couple times when it should now say "three".

that there were four men in the room and The other four in the room

Just for future readers ^^

Author's Response: Thanks, I fixed it! I was so sure I'd gone through it and changed it to the right amount, but apparently not!

Reviewer: Marilu1215 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/15 12:02 pm Title: Partner in Crime

OMG you made me cry like a baby at the middle of the previous chapter and at the beggining of this one.
I thought... OMG HE IS DEAD!!! NOO HE CANNOT BE DEAD! And then that happened.

I thought that he was completely inocent, that it was a suicide (Karina'suicide) and he was at the wrong time and place... but later you surprised me with those kilkings. His family? OMG kinda sick but I like it...
All that schizophrenia, those psychotic episodes were AMAZING.
Something I hate, is that they never said each other "I LOVE U" that made me crazy since I was waiting it from either of them... but I wish it more from Tom, I wanted to see all Bill's walls falling down because he was feeling, because he love him too.
I love the fic, and your fic reminded me one that is not finished from my own authored and that I want so badly to finish you made me love TWC again!
Thank you!!
Keep writing!

Reviewer: yellow-hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/15 03:21 pm Title: Over

All I have to say is NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

...

-continues reading-

Reviewer: HittingSasukeIsFun Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/15 09:33 am Title: The Newcomers

First I must note: If this is pink I’m going to kill you,” he said as he felt her dab a light brush across his eyelid.
“You wouldn't dare,” she said and switched to another brush, doing god knows what to his face.
THE IRONYYYYYY FFFFFFOR FUCK'S SAKE
Okay now that I got that outta my system... ^^ A friend suggested this story to me a few days ago and immediately I was like: if anyone dies -- if there's even a HINT of it -- I'm not reading this. Safe to say I read the whole thing even after I thought "...shit what if he got the death penalty" and EVEN after my suspicions were confirmed. Then I told my friend Tom better sell his stupid cadillac to save Bill and what did he do? He did exactly that mwahaha I'm kinda proud of myself I must say. x)
Anyway enough of that. This story. I don't think you understand how much it fucked me up. Let me quote it real quick: "fucking brain rape!"
It scares me how much this story has made me realize. I relate to Bill...way too much, it's unhealthy and frightening. Literally I think I need to see a shrink.
Honestly I'll never be the same after this. Never. I...don't know if I regret reading this, that's how fucked up I feel right now, even the day after. It was fucking amazing, don't get me wrong, but I don't think I'm even the same person anymore. You may think I'm exaggerating, well I wish I was! You fucking sadist I swear I have a love/hate relationship with you and your story. xD
Moving on! I saw in the reviews that you're rewriting it and I think that's great, good luck! (random: at first I imagined Tom with his black dreads and I kept slapping myself for it xD cause I admit I had a hard time imagining a 20 yo blond dreadlocked Tom. I was also so conflicted about Bill in my head, his appearance I mean, I just couldn't decide myself :P)
I also saw you were writing a sequel... Personally I think the ending was incredible as is and a small part of me thinks you shouldn't touch it...that's just a tiny part though. The rest of me is dying to see Bill happy. It's killing me inside. That reminds me actually I (like others) felt sick reading this quite a few times. Sometimes even I thought I was having a damn heart attack, no kidding! Also I don't know why I exploded when Tom suggested running away. Something about it man, I don't know, it just tore me like a fucking lion was trying to escape from inside me, clawing at me, ripping me to shreds. I managed not to cry anywhere else...I don't understand myself. XD Anyway I got sidetracked! Even just a little sidefic, just a little glimpse into their lives months later, some sorta epilogue...I want it so bad. Something else I want so bad is a drabble where Bill finds out Tom "cheated" on him. x'D Lord yes.
Sooo yeah I want to say thank you...but at the same time I want to say fuck you. I don't know which feeling is stronger. :)
Oh also I was really sad when any links you put were invalid or the fanart was deleted... :((( such a shame
Y'know, I have so much more to say but I don't want to bore you and this is definitely WAY too long already. x)
OH OH ALSO In Your Shadow. nuff said. actuallySOmanysongscametomindreadindthis
AH I KEEP REMEMBERING SHIT. It said somewhere Tom had to take off his piercing for work but several times you talk about him either playing with it or once, Bill touching it...maybe I'm just confused Idk. /headdesk/
One more question then I swear I'll shut up. Why was the ending in italics? It might be obvious but... ^^;
awwww how did Bill escape that first time since they had to put that second lock I HAVE TOO MANY QUESTIONS someone put me out of my miseryyyyyasdfghjklhgfd

Reviewer: xjuliaaax Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/15 11:48 pm Title: Partner in Crime

I put off reading this for so long. So I skipped to the end. Thank you for giving them hope, and another chance.

Reviewer: RiaMore Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/14 08:32 pm Title: Partner in Crime

Hi there, Brokenmirror. It's 3 AM here in Italy, but I figured I should write something to you before heading to bed.
Thing is, I have so many stuff to say I don't even know where or how to start.
So let me just thank you for the beautiful journey you've led me into, thank you for sharing what your creative mind has to offer and thank you for all of the care and love you've put into each chapter. Thanks, dear.
This had been so good for my soul. My only escape from all the trouble I'm going through lately: curling up in bed and reading my heart out.
If you'll ever read this, just take all of my gratitude and compliments. They're yours. It had been like falling in love with Tokio Hotel all over again, under a new perspective.
Keep it up, girl.
Greetings,
-Ria.

Reviewer: th_l0ver Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/14 01:55 pm Title: Partner in Crime

Let me just say that... I cried... a lot... Right when Bill was supposed to die, I mean, I was bawling at that scene. It was heartbreaking...
I'm so glad I came to finish this because this story was amazing. I wish this was published because I would so buy this and cherish it forever.
Ok, thank you for your amazing work. :)

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