Date: 11/03/08 05:00 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
OMG what a clif hanger...aarrg! What the hell happens?
Date: 11/03/08 04:54 pm Title: Stranger(s) to love
No it's good, a few gramatical errors and a few words that are more on the formal side but the english is good. And the story line is interesting!
Date: 10/24/08 07:19 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
OMG! lov ur story. ;D
Date: 10/07/08 11:39 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
More?
Date: 09/08/08 03:47 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
Keep writing please :)
Date: 09/04/08 01:22 am Title: Don't mess with the Devil
:O
u killzzzz Tomi
*le gasp*
xD
Date: 09/03/08 06:59 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
AWWW!!! Whens the next chapter??
Date: 08/23/08 07:28 am Title: Don't mess with the Devil
very different story. its cool. plz update soon
Date: 08/21/08 11:06 am Title: Don't mess with the Devil
keep going pleaseee! this is soo creative :]]
Date: 07/25/08 04:26 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
I like it, a lot.!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/23/08 02:57 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
Du schreibst sehr gut und interessant! Also wo ist das versprochene letzte Kapitel? Ich bin schon neugierig, wie es weiter geht. ;P
Author's Response: Danke, danke, danke!rnscheiße, hab immer noch nicht weitergeschrieben :S wird langsam Zeit xD
Date: 07/22/08 11:25 am Title: Don't mess with the Devil
wow...this is some weird shit! man you so better update soon or i'll set the devil on you. lol :P
Author's Response: lol thanks ill keep that in mind
Date: 07/22/08 01:00 am Title: Stranger(s) to love
Wow so i wasn't the only one who dreamt with the devil 0_o but in a scarie way though something u really don't wanna see or dream
Date: 07/22/08 01:00 am Title: Don't mess with the Devil
damn i almost had a heart attack there!! good it's not the end yet *breaths slowly in and out* okay well at less ur dreams are not that crazy and freaky like mine @o@
Date: 07/22/08 12:43 am Title: Stranger(s) to love
Wow so i wasn't the only one who dreamt with the devil 0_o but in a scarie way though something u really don't wanna see or dream
Author's Response: hehe good to know im not the only one with crazy dreams xD... thanks for reading!
Date: 07/18/08 07:13 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
Dead?! DEAD?! Wha-why-how? WHY DO I FIND THAT SO DAMN GOOD?! I'm usually not such a sadistic bitch but...god damn, I loved that! You need to update this soon. I mean, VERY soon.
Still can't believe you killed him. I mean, I love it, but I can't believe it. Kudos for doing that to me lmao
Author's Response: I can't believe that ppl like it so much XD thank you! I was expecting soo many negative comments for this chapter but... not at all^^rnI don't think i can update until next week but I'll try to hurry.
Date: 07/18/08 07:03 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
I figured that wasn't the end. The devil killed him so he could have him right? When he said he was glad the other guy was alright, does that mean he likes him? Also what was the point of the grandmother? A last goodbye or something?
Author's Response: Ok most of your questions will be answered in the last chapter... so you'll have to wait...rnrnthe grandmother... there is no real point in it xD you may have read that this story was inspired by one of my crazy dreams...haha... So i dreamt that there was an old lady so I also wanted an old lady in my story.... that's it XD
Date: 07/18/08 07:00 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
This is really really interesting.... I've never read anything like it before.
Its pretty good! :] I can't wait to see what happens next. :]
Author's Response: thank you soo much!
Date: 07/18/08 05:51 pm Title: Don't mess with the Devil
I want to know how it ends, go on!
Author's Response: thx I'm glad you like it!