Date: 05/27/12 08:23 am Title: Chapter 5
This is a really great story, but you could do with a beta reader to help with your grammar and phrasing to make it easier to understand (English isn't your first language, right?).
It is a good story, the idea is fantastic.
Keep going :)
Date: 02/02/10 06:11 am Title: Chapter 5
I love this story!!! I really do, it fills my head up with thousands of questions, just like the Harry Potter books. I can't wait to read the next chapter, to find out what will happen to Bill, Tom, what their families past were, and what Bens role really was in it all, seriously without doubt one of my top fanfics yet. And no, I've never seen a guy jack-off to Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets, that sounds a little weird though... xD
Love the perfect balance you have between the feely, touchy parts, and the humor. I hope Bill and Tom will have a clearing talk though, getting all their cards on the table.
Now I will return to my everyday life checking out this story, hoping that I'll see a new chapter in not to long time, as long as I don't have to wait 6 months for it, I'm HappyHappyHappy :D
Author's Response: You totally made my day (:rnThis story has been on hold for so long unfortunately but stuff has happened, and right now I'm in the midst of exams, I'm barely here any more, which sucks! =/rnBut these exams and the ones I have in April are entirely too important or else I'm stuck studying all summer for re-sits :/ So you have to wait a lit bit I guess, but I promise I'll try to get to the next chapter really soon =)rnThanks again for making my day, I needed it after 3 whole exams :]rnThanks for reading and reviewing ^^rnStay tuned (:rnrnPS: Yes it is a lil weird and I LOVE the Harry Potter books :3
Date: 01/29/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
greatttttt!!! I wasn't expecting all of this. so let me recap to see if I've understood everything.. gordon and anna are tom's parents, while bill's are dead. So ben is older than bill, he has gordon's age? And who's the Tom , Gordon used to go with when he was younger??