Date: 05/27/12 08:23 am Title: Chapter 5
This is a really great story, but you could do with a beta reader to help with your grammar and phrasing to make it easier to understand (English isn't your first language, right?).
It is a good story, the idea is fantastic.
Keep going :)
Date: 04/22/12 02:32 am Title: Chapter 5
This is really awesome. Quite a shame it isn't continued. :| Anyway, awesome story is awesome. xD
Date: 08/13/11 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
ok i just started reading your fic but im kinda confuse so um can explain whats going on plz and thank u
Date: 01/24/11 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
did you write more?
it is intresing story.....so if you did i would like to read if you dont mind ...:)
Date: 01/14/11 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
mm i saw a guy jack off during it. i ended up sayin, "DUDE! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"
Date: 02/02/10 06:11 am Title: Chapter 5
I love this story!!! I really do, it fills my head up with thousands of questions, just like the Harry Potter books. I can't wait to read the next chapter, to find out what will happen to Bill, Tom, what their families past were, and what Bens role really was in it all, seriously without doubt one of my top fanfics yet. And no, I've never seen a guy jack-off to Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets, that sounds a little weird though... xD
Love the perfect balance you have between the feely, touchy parts, and the humor. I hope Bill and Tom will have a clearing talk though, getting all their cards on the table.
Now I will return to my everyday life checking out this story, hoping that I'll see a new chapter in not to long time, as long as I don't have to wait 6 months for it, I'm HappyHappyHappy :D
Author's Response: You totally made my day (:rnThis story has been on hold for so long unfortunately but stuff has happened, and right now I'm in the midst of exams, I'm barely here any more, which sucks! =/rnBut these exams and the ones I have in April are entirely too important or else I'm stuck studying all summer for re-sits :/ So you have to wait a lit bit I guess, but I promise I'll try to get to the next chapter really soon =)rnThanks again for making my day, I needed it after 3 whole exams :]rnThanks for reading and reviewing ^^rnStay tuned (:rnrnPS: Yes it is a lil weird and I LOVE the Harry Potter books :3
Date: 01/29/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
greatttttt!!! I wasn't expecting all of this. so let me recap to see if I've understood everything.. gordon and anna are tom's parents, while bill's are dead. So ben is older than bill, he has gordon's age? And who's the Tom , Gordon used to go with when he was younger??
Date: 12/19/09 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
must fave story...... oh sory more please
Date: 12/07/09 07:11 am Title: Chapter 5
This is an amazing story but it hasn't been updated in so long....I miss reading it so often can't wait ferr the next chapter, you're so talented, keep up the good work
Date: 10/28/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
How come u gave up on the story? PLZ update!
Date: 10/28/09 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
W-O-N-D-E-R-F-U-L!
Date: 09/24/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
i luv it i want more!!!
Date: 09/21/09 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
i'm slightly confused on this one...oh, wait...nevermind, it's a flashback...duh...
Date: 09/21/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
i understand where ben is comin from now...revenge is a dish best served cold...
Date: 09/21/09 11:55 am Title: Chapter 3
i agree with bill...what the fuck?! i'm glad i don't have to wait though to find out what happens...
Date: 09/21/09 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2
isn't it kinda like false advertisement? i do like though...
Date: 09/21/09 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
it's amazing what people will do for the almighty buck...
Date: 08/22/09 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my God.. Poor Bill //.T