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Reviewer: loli2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/13 01:35 am Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

Love it!!!!!

Reviewer: candy98 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 04:35 am Title: From a Distance

gee, gave me a mini heart-attack.

Reviewer: Ariane1998 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/11 01:50 am Title: And It All Comes Crashing Down

This was a sad chapter.And I NEVER cried over a story before.but this.this totally made me burst into tears!You got a lovely story.You inspired me.I hope you keep it up!Holy Crap!It's 1:46 Am and i'm crying?!?ahahha:)This was just funny.I never cried....lovely chapter.Keep Up the good work!!

Reviewer: BethaanyKaulitzx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 04:39 pm Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

W-O-W A-MAY-ZING! LOVE IT! xx

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/10 09:46 pm Title: When Nothing Else Mattered

interesting...

Reviewer: JumbieDer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 10:35 pm Title: My Dear Cousins

tessa and tom!

Reviewer: bri 483 96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 07:21 pm Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

omg i love this story soo much when do i get a new chapter??

Reviewer: situations Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/09 06:24 am Title: When Nothing Else Mattered

Although this story was very iffy at first, given the initial plot I was presented with, and the grammar was sort of less than great, I thought you turned it around midway. It was absolutely hilarious, and I like the various twists brought in, especially with the whole sister thing.

Yeah, though, I do think your characters are quite under developed. You have the basics down, but there's so much more you can add to make them more life like. I also think the situation with Tom, Georg and Tessa is a bit, well, exaggerated.

A lot of your plot twists and whatnot do make up for anything lacking, and Break Away was an enjoyable read.

Reviewer: KuroHana Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/09 07:48 pm Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

naw they're fine to me, besides i'll have to read all over again.

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/09 05:16 pm Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

Not to be annoying... but I still miss this. So, so much. :(

Reviewer: LittleMrsTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 10:03 am Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

I just re-read the whole of this... heh. I remembered just how much I loved it, and have been grinning/laughing/gasping all over again for the past like, night and day.

I miss it real bad. I want to know what happens, lol. Any updates planned at any point?

Author's Response: Yeah, actually :P
I know i've been taking a really really long time to update, and i'm really sorry!!
School's been a freaking mess and i've been trying my hardest, so i should be updating soon!

Reviewer: wenny Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/09 01:13 am Title: Good Morning Sunshine

Dominican Republic? Awsome that's where I was born =)

Author's Response: omg really? It's such a beautiful place
You are amazingly lucky to have been born there :P

Reviewer: KloudKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/09 05:46 pm Title: When Nothing Else Mattered

YES YOU DO! (this is _Schrei on her alternative account w/ MrsTomKaulitz)


hahaa. :)
MORE COOKIES!
:)

whooop!
hope the update is sooooon-ish!

jess xx.

Author's Response: The update WILL be comming soon-ish, i promise!
I've been going kinda of slow because of school again -_-' and because my brother managed to download another virus, which of course I had to get rid of.
But I promise you, I AM working on it! xD

Reviewer: _Schrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/09 01:23 pm Title: When Nothing Else Mattered

YES! ITS WORKING! THE POWER OF COOKIES! AND MILK IS WORKING!

and if ANYONE even TRIES to rip your head off,
I'LL BIT THEIRS OFF FIRST!

no one touchie my friendsss. grrrr.
ruff, ruff.! ima bite chuuu!

:) i'll UPS you the cookies! and milk. now,
go go goo!
:D

jess xx.

Author's Response: LMAO milk and cookies is always the solution! xD
and WOOOOO!!! I have an awesome bodyguard :]

Reviewer: _Schrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/09 08:40 am Title: When Nothing Else Mattered

lol. oh dear. that happened to my computer. ¬¬ ughh. man.

it's really quite depressing! haha

+ the heart thing? lol. i guess. you can use it if you like. i really don't mind. :)

i hope that your ideas come flooding back to you!!

(can i ask... is Jessie really pregers?!!)

:D

+trust me about the whole MS + GS things. i'm a... blunt person? i just ask. or in this case... tell! ha

:) GAH. i reallllly want this to update!
pleasee!
umm... i'll give you a... box of cookies!
-gives cookies!-

cookies! and milk. mm.. cookies!

:D

byee
jess xx.

Author's Response: Yeah, talk about depressing :P i had so much stuff on my computer, now it just feels naked, like its not even mine :(
LOL and the heart thing was really cute :) i may consider using it soon, and if i do, i shall give you credit my love! xD
Though about Jessie, i cant exactly tell you just yet, but you will find out veryy soonnnn *cough*next chapter*cough*. :D

Cookies and milk O_O mmmmm cookies and milkkk
Well if you insist, then i shall be updating soon! HAH actually, Im working so hard on the next chapter so i can update soon so that people won't rip my head off if i don't :P
thank the lord ideas ARE comming flooding back to me! :D

Reviewer: Ciren Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/09 02:27 pm Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

hey! so wers da rest of da story?

Author's Response: lol yeah... im gonna sound like a totally boob, i had basically written most of the next paragraph and then my computer had to be restored, so i completely lost everything -_-'
I'm MAJORLY sorry, i know it's been taking forever, but i promise that i'm working on it and i'm not just gonna leave you guys hanging :)

Reviewer: _Schrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/09 10:21 pm Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

NO! No Mary Sues or Gary Stus as far as the eye can see!
+ i love Robert. he's hot :)

your idea, it's so original!
i feel so worried about Jessie.

i read this from start to finish and i had several heartattacks and died... twice!

this is absolutely amazing and i can't wait to see the finale.. just so i know what happens! but i don't want it to end!

and the love triangle keeps on turning. it's odd. like the triangle is in the center of a heart and everytime it turns, the heart is getting more and more damaged. that's tessa's heart. and the two boys are slowly demolishing her heart altogether!

oh dead. i'll pray fer thee, so get a few ideas + stuffs :)

byee
jess xx.

Author's Response: Omg, you're such a relief xD i was afraid my characters were awful and people were just too polite to tell me :P

I'm glad you like the story so much :D
And i'm really really sorry i haven't updated in a couple months! My computer had to be restored and the next chapter was close to done and i ended up losing it, so i have to restart it all now
-_-'
But i shall be updating soon! :)
And you're analogy of Tessa's heart is so true. They're just destroying her little heart. :(

Thank you for reading my story from the beginning! xD i'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: my_last_hope Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/09 01:12 pm Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

Crap I missed two chapters D:
Glad this story is still going strong though!

And there is no way in hell your characters are under-developed.

[conception for a pregnancy takes about two weeks though, just keep that in mind if Jess is going to turn out preggers :) ]

Author's Response: thank youu :)
I've just been having these feelings that maybe there's like major things wrong with my story and people just aren't telling me O_o LOL but i guess not xD.

And yup, after a bit of research I discovered that fact :P Thank's for reminding me though :)

Reviewer: lauren1234567890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/09 11:59 am Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

Your Characters arent under-developed
btw this is one of the best fics ive read

Author's Response: LOL omg thank youuu xD
I'm so flaterred!

Reviewer: IndigoKitti Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 01:30 am Title: You Can Sit Beside Me When the World Comes Down

Ha wow. :O
SO......they're all good???
Was jessie feeling morning sickness?
Or was that just a cover? :O
Great Update! :D
Please more soon??? :D

And I think the characters are perfect. :D

Author's Response: lol well, i wouldn't say ALL good, but they're okay for now.
And it's a little early for Jessie to be feeling morning sickness if she IS pregnant :P She was just a little nervous about possibly being pregnant.
and I'll try to update ASAP :)

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