Date: 12/20/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
where's the sex!!! lol
Date: 01/18/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhhh!!!!!!! That sooo sucks..... Great story though... i love the way you write.
Date: 01/18/09 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
A very good start... now were is the rest of it?
Author's Response: Good question! Lost when my PC crashed -.-'
Date: 10/29/08 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1
I think that was the first time I've ever gotten a nose bleed from a kissing scene! O.O Very well written
Date: 08/04/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I have NEVER read a kiss be wrote so erotically.
Date: 07/12/08 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
good ass details lol
Date: 07/08/08 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing...simply amazing. To think about a kiss that deeply...wow...
Date: 07/07/08 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That has to be the hottest kissing scene I have read. Ever.
Date: 06/29/08 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah *fans herself*
That was the longest kissing scene I've ever read. And I enjoyed every second of it...guhh.
Date: 06/28/08 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Totally hot twincest. Like woah! *begins wiping drool up off the floor* You rock!
Date: 06/27/08 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yummy^^
Sexy sexy xD
Date: 06/27/08 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
it's a little HOT in here don't you think? OMG i almost had a serious heart attack reading this. OH you have a very naughty, naughty mind.
Date: 06/27/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I never knew kissing could be written so erotically! Wonderful fic!
Date: 06/27/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmm, so yummy! I love kissing scenes and I think that this is probably the most detailed one I've ever read!! ;)
Pretty damn good considering you have WB Tink, lol! I loved it! It was really cute and sexy!
Date: 06/27/08 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
well, all right then. Honestly not my favorite peice by you. Too much smut not enough background info. It felt a little strange, like I walked in after missing the beginning and did stay for the end.
Author's Response: Lmao! Probably because it's actually just a part of a work-in-progress songfic xD
Date: 06/27/08 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yaayy that was a pretty kickass kiss XD
Loved it! :)