Date: 07/25/12 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
All of my senses had to succumb to the intensity of this story. The visual I imagined, as I read, were so vivid and literally hot that it felt like I was in a sauna despite sitting right next to the AC. There's nothing I like more than combination of tension and sex and this story had both companied with alcohol! Sex on fire, one cannot get anymore hotter than that because one has basically created his or her own sensual inferno. Fuck, it's heaven. And Tom and Bill are going to have an blazing journey in flash and I can not wait to see how everything comes together. I wish you a fucking beautiful day, babe. I love you and this story.
Merry part,
Bluethorn
Date: 03/29/12 07:57 am Title: Chapter 2
this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 11/26/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
jfc, this is so crazy hot. It says it's incomplete, so I will hope for more someday.
Date: 09/17/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello you, I read your story and now I'm blown away. The topic with the fire is very fitting and you fret it again and again. The sexual tension between Tom and Bill is tangible and I really love the hanger with the twins at the first chapter!! Furthermore I like your writing style because it varied and its realistic. You use a nice change from direct speech and description. At first I had to get used to the frequent flashes but now I like it because it brings some life into the narrative. A very great story that I will kept reading!! (Although I figured out that reading in english is quite easy for me but writing is so much more difficult, sorry for my english at this point).
Best wishes from Germany, keep going!
Date: 05/07/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favorite stories on here, despite it being two chapters and unfinished. The emotion is absolutely incredible and the way everything is described is so raw and honest that it almost makes me feel sick, in the best way possible. Amazing story. I'd love to see more posted of it
Date: 02/26/10 10:24 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow ! I so wish you would continue this, it's really different from other stories... really good idea! I'll be reading it for sure if you ever decide to post more !
Date: 02/18/10 12:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Intense stuff.
Date: 11/20/09 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
*whines* I want more of this SOOO badly. like this is my FAVORITE story from you, and *whines* just. GAH. amazing.
Date: 08/26/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw. Happy birthday, by the way. But wow. I love the flame theme. I marveled at how 'Bill would be great kindling,'. Very descriptive.
I've yet to find a story that I can really connect with, but this is the exception. I feel like this story portrays that incest/twincest hurts, atleast in the end. I was touched. I can't wait to read more : )
Lucky Firelucy xD
Caylan.
Date: 08/26/09 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is intense... the imagery, the emotions, everything. I can't wait for an update.
Date: 05/19/09 02:13 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad you went on with this story. I adore the fire/flames/burning theme and the whole fic has this 'flash' feeling when you are blinded by a flash going off, leaving you totally disoriented and half-blind.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Hmm...maybe around December..? :P
Date: 05/17/09 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow... that's hot :) you're style right here, is so amazing!! I just want more, and more, and more :)
Date: 05/17/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
and by 'there will be more,' do you mean soon so that i don't die???
Date: 05/17/09 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is so intense. IDK how I missed it being posted initially, but wow, I just read both chapters. I found myself really caught up with their emotions, so much that I felt a little close to tears myself at the end of the second chapter. So good.
Date: 05/17/09 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this story so much. There's something so raw and intense about it--I've got goosebumps.
Date: 05/17/09 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
*_* Hopes for a quick update on this one :)
Date: 05/17/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 2
O my god. Wow. Srsly dont know how long I've been waiting for you to update this, and it was amazing. *_*