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Reviewer: Billitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/15 09:25 am Title: All It Was

My gosh!My sides hurt.This one's so...ooo..oo funny-the ending I mean.It's realistic too and near reality fics are what I go after.I love it:)

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/14 01:47 pm Title: All It Was

Ugh, I've read this fic like a million times before and have no idea why I apparently havent reviewed before... strange. I love this. I love the feelings you make Tom feel, and I love how open-ended the end is... it could be real or it could just be Tom wishing that's all it was in that moment. Love it. It feels very real, possible, even probable for this to have happened at some point IRL. Really well done!! :) :)

Reviewer: TinkyWinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/13 12:34 am Title: All It Was

Way to ruin the moment Tom!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/11 11:28 am Title: All It Was

nice

Reviewer: nnniiinnnaaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/10 05:54 am Title: All It Was

so awesome

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/10 02:03 pm Title: All It Was

I love this, haha the end made me chuckle xD

Reviewer: SoberVictim Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/10 01:51 am Title: All It Was

:D this is the second time I read this. And I still love it!

Reviewer: MadiKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 11:40 pm Title: All It Was

Too funny! Very well written. :)

Reviewer: myv-th-princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/09 05:52 pm Title: All It Was

Loved it
very believable to me.

Reviewer: TKBKGurl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/09 10:51 pm Title: All It Was

"Because these reek of fart!"
That's funny...

Reviewer: Nyah Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/09 12:26 pm Title: All It Was

great turning in the end.

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 01:42 pm Title: All It Was

I’m sure I’ve read this before but I can’t find a review for it so I’m doing that now!

He watched the way Bill’s long, slim fingers glided slowly up and down his length, and heard the heavy breathing coming from Bill’s mouth, his lips moist and slightly parted. Tom watched the graceful movements and blushed, partially because he knew he was seeing something he wasn’t supposed to, and also because he was embarrassed to think of his own sloppy stroking when he did it to himself. – that’s hot!

Tom was getting hard; Bill looked good, or more to the point he looked as though he was feeling good and Tom was sure that was what he was reacting to. Bill was in the throes of pleasure and Tom got some sick satisfaction watching it, knowing that he was witnessing the most private moment Bill would have, Bill had no idea he was being watched. - *smiles* very voyeuristic!

Tom did look away then, he knew that watching Bill come was just too much, it was crossing the line. Tom didn’t even know if he wanted to see it, and of course it could never be unseen. He dropped his head and turned away, ready to sneak out of the room. But then he heard it.
Bill’s strangled little cry sounded almost desperate, and Tom cringed at the way his cock practically jumped in his boxers in response. He was shaking as he turned around again, just in time to see the first thick, white globs of come landing on Bill’s pale skin, more following it as Bill’s hand clutched the head of his cock, squeezing and releasing it rhythmically through his orgasm. - *shudders* very hot!

Try as he might, Tom couldn’t get the noises Bill had made out of his head, and they only increased his excitement, enticed him to grip his cock just a little harder. The longer he stroked, the less he cared that he was thinking of Bill as he did it, he was too caught up in how good it all felt. He looked down at where his fingers wrapped around his shaft and moaned as suddenly his fingernails were jet black and shiny, the skin of his hand slightly smoother and more delicate. It was so bad to think about, but Tom couldn’t stop, didn’t want to. He bet Bill could make him feel so good, he was better at the feather light touching than Tom was. – HOT!!!!

When he opened the door he was surprised to find a small plate sitting right outside his room, with what looked to be one of Bill’s strange sandwich concoctions sitting on top of it. Tom smiled and felt a rush of affection for his little brother, he let the feeling warm him a little before it turned to guilt. The guilt just got worse when he picked up the plate, and noticed that Bill had left a note, written on the napkin beneath the bread. Tom slid it out from beneath the sandwich and read it, his gut twisting.
I’m sorry :( - awh!!!

Ewwwwh the fart is gross!

The ending felt like an unending like there should be more to the story...or like you weren't sure how to end it so you just made it funny.

I was funny it just feels unfinished.

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/08 04:13 pm Title: All It Was

Really?! *eyebrow wiggle* That's all it was? lol Some how I think not. he he

Reviewer: icemint Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/08 06:19 am Title: All It Was

I never get tired of reading this one. :)
Thanks again

Reviewer: Macbeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/08 09:48 am Title: All It Was

I kind of want this to continue really badly. Oh well...

Reviewer: mrowski Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/08 07:03 pm Title: All It Was

nooooooo! there needs to be a sequel xD that was too cute

Reviewer: TokioHotelfanSam Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/08 09:52 am Title: All It Was

Aaaw. I love this b29;
I always read your name everywhere,
but I hadn't read so much of you..
Maybe one other story.
But now I know why everybody loves you :P
Your choice of words is perfect and it almost give you the feeling that you're actually there. Well done!

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/08 03:34 pm Title: All It Was

I really liked this fic! Very cute and hot. :)

Reviewer: Made-Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 12:36 am Title: All It Was

Yay fluffy angst! I loved the characterization you gave Tom.

Reviewer: Hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/08 04:36 pm Title: All It Was

ooh i think this deserves a sequel ;P

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