Date: 08/11/10 03:39 am Title: ...30 Minutes...
yummy I've always loved gummi bears. yes I would love to see more of this series. Seeing as we have one of Bill's dream and one of Tom's is the third going to be a dream that they both have? this is a really great series so far I canot wait for more.
Date: 04/05/09 11:41 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
i loved its so sweet and different at the same time
im now i noted fan of your work
Date: 12/26/08 11:08 am Title: ...30 Minutes...
This is '30 Minutes' by Tatu
Date: 12/18/08 01:55 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
I reeeeeeally like these! I deffinetly want you to keep going with these! You're an awesome writer!
Date: 08/14/08 12:44 am Title: ...30 Minutes...
THAT WAS EPIC. PURE EPIC.
Date: 08/09/08 02:14 am Title: ...30 Minutes...
this is really a avery interesting story
you gotta cont
just for me plwese?
Date: 07/31/08 10:57 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
I loovvee it!
Date: 07/20/08 11:15 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
That was sickk.
loved it.
Date: 07/06/08 08:41 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
damn I was scared that Tom actually killed Bill so I'm glad that you put the last part in cause now I'm happy, and this is nicely written.~_~
Author's Response: 10x for your feedback =]rnIt's something I can't do without...rnI'm glad you like =DrnStay tuned for the last part xD
Date: 06/25/08 07:53 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
Nice story ! First part was shicking, haha.
Author's Response: lool i guess it was a bit xDrnI'm glad you like =DrnStay tuned for last part xD
Date: 06/18/08 11:55 am Title: ...30 Minutes...
Oh I like it! I'm not sure how to tell you I like it, which makes me feel bad since I like to leave reviews! Although maybe the fact I'm at a loss for words is good feedback? I don't know, nice job!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like...thrid part got really delayed O.o still isn't up...lost everything "_"...but I'll put it up ASAP...and i guess yes it is good feedback =D
Date: 06/16/08 09:25 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
You need to add me on MSN, I'll explain there.
dont_jump666@hotmail.com
Date: 06/16/08 02:16 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
It is very difficult for me to believe that Bill and whoever the other guy was/is, would do such things in public, even though it was only a dream. Also, you've yet again only retold the video of the song. I have noticed that in this story as well as in the previous one, you say "supposedly God". You opinion on religion truly is of no matter in the stories, and is not necessary.
On the other hand, the ending was cute again, and I like the idea of switching from first person, to third.
Author's Response: As you said, it is a dream...it's Tom's mind playing with him...when the last one of this series will come out everything will be explained...rnrnAbout the video, I dunno but if you didn't look at the story notes, it said clearly that it is based on the song and the VIDEO so yeah...there was a warning if you didn't want to replay the whole video on your mind...rnrnThe "supposedly God" issue is once again, Tom's thoughts/dreams...I'm not implying he's like that in reality... it's just for the fanfic...This was put in, because Tom and Bill are worried they will be taken from each other, and when they see hatred about these kind of relationship, they can't help but wonder about it...rnrnLong response ever xD...anyway I like that you like those things...but i think you completely misunderstood some things in the fanfic...i dunno =/
Date: 06/15/08 05:02 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
its really good
dont quit please
Date: 06/15/08 03:35 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
its really good
dont quit please
Author's Response: ohhh sacred i m glad you like =]rnrnbut you shouldn't quit either then... [if i remember correctly u said u wanted to right?]
Date: 06/12/08 07:34 pm Title: ...30 Minutes...
God this scared me. I should have know basecd on the first one that is was a dream, but still. wow...
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you like =]rnand sorry for scaring you...rnrn*hands out gummi bear pkt.*