Date: 11/27/11 07:46 am Title: Chapter 12: Under the Table
Awwww, I actually liked the ending. I think it's kind of realistic, it fits, it makes sense.
I know there's a sequel to this fic, but u havnt finished the sequel!!! Grr. :( I want to read the end. *whines* lol
I like the emotions in this fic, I think it's really cool how you can portray different nuances so well. Even though you never said what Tom was thinking or feeling, u kind of just get a feeling of it. Interesting. I'm curious to know what Tom is feeling. He's my fav character in this fic, every scene, I just wanted to see more into his psyche.
I think this story is amazing and more complex than at first glance. I think I've read it before, a few years ago? I'm not sure TBH. Lol. I know I love this story though. Very well done, a few typos/grammar but it's no problem, it's well written and superbly engaging. I think you're an amazingly skilled author, you know how to convey emotion, feeling, unspoken words. Loved this. Keep writing, finish the sequel, I want to read it!!!!!!! :)
Date: 08/18/09 07:29 am Title: Chapter 12: Under the Table
Yesterday night I've just found this amazing story! Like first, I read something else from you, but then... I have to read this and all I can say is: AMAZING, FASCINATING, BREATH TAKING, PERFECT!
You got a talent for writing and I already love your stories! Really, this story was perfect! Sometimes lil' bit depressed, but I loved it!
Date: 02/05/09 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 12: Under the Table
I don't know how I stumbled to this fic this late but, this is fucking killing me. This is so beautiful. I'm so getting into cheesy hurt/comfort fics..
Author's Response: Wow, thank you SO SO much! :D
Date: 10/02/08 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Fight
is there going to be a sequal soon !.
please say there is ive been checking every day for 4 weeks straight ! X)
Author's Response: Haha there is one! It's called "Forever Fades Away" if you want to check it out. I'm writing the second chapter ^^ Thanks for the review :D
Date: 09/29/08 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 12: Under the Table
ahhhh! i can't wait for the sequel. this is so well written, you express bill's pain and anguish so well. keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^^ It makes me happy that people think I can write :P The sequel is up! Well, the first chapter of it. Thank you for the lovely review ^^
Date: 09/24/08 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 12: Under the Table
THIS WAS A FANTASTIC STORY!. I COULD'NT TAKE MY EYES OF IT, !!! THIS IS AMAZING YOU HAVE A REAL TALENT DEFENETLY MAKE A SEQUEAL.
AND THE ENDING BRUNG ME TO TEARS....FABULOUS STORY!
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you SO MUCH! Your review made me grin like a goof. It makes me so incredibly happy that you liked this and that you think I have talent for this *blushes* I'll post the first chapter of the sequel as soon as I can! Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^^
Date: 09/16/08 12:41 am Title: Chapter 12: Under the Table
....Wow! Hey, this is a little late, but can I make you banners? One for this story and one for the sequel? Btw, is that out yet?
Author's Response: Oh, that would be amazing and I'd be forever grateful! Nope, the sequel's not out yet, but it will be soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^^
Date: 09/15/08 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 12: Under the Table
Thank you for the happy ending and the promise of a sequel. I like how everthing ended on a positive note but there's still plenty of places to go. Looking forward to your next story!
Author's Response: Awww, thank YOU! I'm so glad that you like this ^^ I'll write the sequel as soon as possible! :D