Date: 05/25/17 06:39 am Title: Day 30
Perfect final chapter. No questions, just do what needs to be done and get on with life. Fantastic work, I enjoyed this so much :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! And thank you for all the comments. Absolutely wonderful! :)
Date: 05/25/17 06:35 am Title: Day 29
Fascinating! Really enjoyed the description of his turning :D That was great :3
Date: 05/25/17 06:29 am Title: Day 28
Sucks to be Bill right now, I hope he gets better .-.
Really good chapter, lots of drama, I like :D
Date: 05/25/17 06:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Woo, sources!! No one does that, for some reason.
I thought that name sounded familiar. It's been a while since season 1.
This was a good chapter, I'm glad they're getting help, even if it's not going to work out very well.
Date: 05/25/17 06:00 am Title: Day 13
I'm concerned for Tom .-. Bill needs to figure out what's happening before he hurts someone >.>
I like this chapter :)
Date: 05/25/17 05:54 am Title: Day 6
Oh dear D: Poor Bill. That steak sounded good though. Made me hungry >.>
Date: 05/25/17 05:49 am Title: Day 1
Ooo I think I know where this is going :O
This is so well done! The characters are so lifelike, and that conversation with David was so realistic :D Looking forward to the rest ^-^
Date: 05/25/17 05:39 am Title: Prologue
Okay, not what I was expecting, but really good! Well written, and an interesting plot :) Nice ^-^
Date: 11/18/13 02:34 pm Title: Day 30
interesting story but a bit too rushed. Still good tho :)
Date: 01/22/12 01:13 am Title: Day 30
this was a nice story!
Date: 12/29/10 03:25 pm Title: Day 30
A M A I Z I N G . ! . !
Date: 09/26/09 05:17 am Title: Day 30
good story :)
Date: 01/08/09 03:49 am Title: Day 30
that can't be it....more?
Date: 12/19/08 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is spooky, but good.
Date: 06/16/08 08:54 pm Title: Day 30
I love this story :D It's a little weird but really good :D keep up the good work
Date: 06/08/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
sounds good so far :)
Date: 05/21/08 03:48 am Title: Day 30
i did but if he was afraid of killing Tom y wasnt that part in here i mean its kinda a Tom/Bill right?
Date: 05/17/08 11:03 pm Title: Day 30
This is very good, or as German's say, sehr gut. =^.^=
Date: 05/14/08 10:11 pm Title: Day 30
i liked it alot'....the ending wasn't what i expected....toad honest i thought there would be a little more. but i love how you described him changing. i give it 2 thumbs up!