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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/23 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/13 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

Love this story! So hot and so romantic. Perfect!

Reviewer: AnimeMandi22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/12 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

Awe the ending was so sweet :)

Reviewer: Beyond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/12 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

the ending was simply beautiful

Reviewer: Adlene Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 07:47 am Title: Chapter 3

Such a cute story!I loved it,thank you.

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 10:23 am Title: Chapter 3

so glad Tom came to the rescue! Well, sort of. But I'm glad they both sorted each other out in the end :) They need each other too much. This was so lovely! I really really enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 07:33 am Title: Chapter 2

Aw, twins. I love them :) This is a wonderful read!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/11 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 3

this is a good story!!
the last is my fave!:)

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, Bill's sure getting a lot done! This is such a sexy fic :)

Reviewer: Analif Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

I had never read this one! Why I had never read this? My God, it was so fan-fucking-tastic! XDDDD
It is the funniest thing I have read in a long time! I really like this whore!Bill, hahahaha!
And Tom like and inocent and almost chaste boy? Cannot believe it! XD
But, I think it could be for real, hahaha. Could be! I will not be taken by surprise if someday Bill says he is the slut twin and Tom is the virgin one!
Ok, serious, I enjoyed the fic a lot! I hope to find more like this! ^^
Thanks a lot for join forces, guys, and share this pretty good reading!

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:43 am Title: Chapter 3

This was so good. I love role reversal fics, and I loved the twins in this - Bill irresistable, cold and self-assured, except when it comes to Tom, and Tom hesitent and shy and in love but still himself. Gorgeous.

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/10 02:12 am Title: Chapter 3

I've read this story twice before and I have no idea how I havnt commented yet. Oops.
Anyways, I love this story so much!!! I can never get tired of it.
There's a perfect balance of sexyness and mushyness and it feels naughty and real. I love how you developed Bill and Tom's relationship, esp how you describe it towards the beginning where theyre crossing proximity boundaries and its totally normal- Bill having just fucked someone, still half naked, and now clinging to Tom is amazing. It's just such a fabulous visual.
Oh, and then later when Bill is coming on to Tom is really sexy.
Bill telling men he's a virgin is so devious, it's intreguing and naughty and hot. Great idea.
The way Tom starts getting jealous and confused as the story goes on is awesome too, really cute.
I'm glad the twins realize they're meant for eachother in the end.
This takes me back to my virgin days actually, lol, I did things a bit out of order too........
(too much info? lol. sorry.)
But anyways, I LOVE this story to bits!!! It's pretty simple, but it's one of my favs you've ever written. Very well done. :)

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/10 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

OMG It was funny cute awesome at the same time.

Billiii was such a bitch.............lol

the ending was so lovly

Reviewer: Legna_angeL Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

I enjoyed the change Bill's and Tom's character went through. It was believable and quite hot, lol. Excellent read!

Reviewer: Legna_angeL Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Damn, made that guy lose his job! Bill a manipulative bitch who needs to be taken down a notch, lol.

Reviewer: mischadevi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 02:24 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow! That was super hot and amazing! And a little bit of a role-reversal. Totally loved it!

Reviewer: Sarajuly382 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

What!? Bill made Klaus fired!!

Reviewer: gmaine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 05:02 am Title: Chapter 3

best one i read

Reviewer: Emery Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

u leave me without words

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

lol that was an evil bribe. Touch me and I won’t let anyone fuck me while I’m here.

Poor conflicted Tomi not sure how to say no and not sure he wants to say yes. lol

Did Tom want to be Bill’s first fuck? And he’s sad he missed out?

There’s someone else…someone more serious? Does he mean it and doesn’t know it? hum?!

LOL Tom’s a crap fighter and Bill has a sweet right hook that’s awesome.

The I want you to fuck me/I want to fuck you conversation between Tom and Bill is very surreal.

Awe their first time and they are so sweet together!

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