Date: 05/09/08 03:31 pm Title: Outside, inside
you have an interestingwriting style. I read the story first as Bill's perspective then as Tom's. It was interesting. I got different meanings from both. It's pretty cool. I like the end. But I predtended the person was only one story up. But looking back they were probably way more than that. It's still a well written ending though.
Author's Response: Thank you! I used to use this style a lot before I took a break from it. I love how open to personal interpretation it is. Glad you liked it!