Date: 05/06/08 08:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Hei, du er norsk jo ! :D
uansett, oppdater, jeg dør snart hvis du ikke gjør det snart : )
Author's Response: Jess, jeg er norsk xD Uheldigvis -_-' Jeg skulle helst ha vært engelsk.rnrnMen takk, og jeg har akkurat oppdatert! :D
Date: 05/05/08 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
i LOVED this chapter!!!! *squeels and jumps around*
it was awsome and i love colin =D i'm really glad he's here and that bill thinks he's cute =D (and most importantly that he's gay ;p)
i can't wait to read how this developes and how long it will take before tom finally gives in and tells bill how he feels =P
i also can't wait to see how long it will take before tom turns on the light after bill has taken of his make-up and is horrified by what he sees (making bill misinterpret it as him thinking he's hiddiouse without make-up...)
loved it =D and i thought it was really well written =)
Date: 05/05/08 03:11 am Title: Chapter 2
hahaaaaaaaaaaa great shapter love, really good !!!
“I don’t wanna cook!” I said, sneering. Tom just giggled. he giggled ??? that is sooooo cute *.~
his cheeks turned red, and he dropped my hand and stood up. oh my God what was that ??? is Tomi being all bad boy mean and then suddenly BLUSHING ??? god you make him so adorable, although the grabbing of the wrist thing was a little scary ;)
“Yes, I’m gay.” hahaaa Bill is so cool, you write them both so well love
“Will you stop staring at me?” I finally burst out, and Tom grinned. Tomi is being seriously scary...LOVE IT
and I really like the camp lady because she lets them do what they want to do and don't force them to go on a boat trip, love for her
Tom snorted, and I looked at him. oooooooh *does mocking voice* Tom is in looooooo-ooooooove :p
so when are we going to get more ??? because I hope it will be really soon, I love this sooooooooooo god damn much !!!
read you soon I hope
Author's Response: Aawh, thank you hun!rnrnHaha, yes, I like it when people giggle xDrnrnYes, Tomi is... confusing in my stories xDrnrnHaha, thank you :DrnrnTomi's being scary - just like me xD Almost...rnrnWell yeah, I figured she'd end up with a cucumber in her eye if she tried to force Bill into doing something... so I just made her nice xDrnrnI will post more tomorrow, because I have the whole story finished, so there'll be one chapter each day :D Though I'm going away on Thursday, and I'm not coming back before thuesday evening, so there'll be a little break there... but I'll do my best to post any day!rnrnYes, you will!rnrnSusan xxx
Date: 05/04/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
not even an hour since you left my house, and still I miss you ^^
Sooo... why am I reading this AGAIN? Honestly I don't know. But it's a good fic, so I'll probly enjoy it even more this time. But beware, you might get some more "I hate you"s as the fic progresses. But I still love you
Author's Response: I know you do, and remember... everytime you told me you hated me, I was laughing my ass off. I'm a badass motherfucker.
Date: 05/04/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
*laughs* This is shaping up to be a really good and funny fic. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well... fun may not be the word, maybe sadistic and macabre is more right xDrnBut thank you anyways! :D
Date: 05/04/08 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
oh yes, we love this !!!
give us more girl...pleeeeeeeeeease ???
and soon *grins* I'm not very patient when it comes to great fics like this one ;)
love your characterisations, they were really great
and also how you made the story flow forward without any clicheys, they are really hard to avoyd when writing fics like this, but you managed perfectly
hope you'll update soon
this is going straight to my favorites, just hope it won't get too angsty, that might be a clishey ;p
haha and don't be embarresed about the warnungs dear, I'm sure you'll make them worthy ;) sorry, perverted I know
loves from me
Author's Response: Well... it might get a liiittle [very] angsty, but when I write angsty, I write it in a way that makes people look at me like I should be locked inside a padded room... you see, my mind is very, very sadistic, so my stories happen to be a little... uhm, dark.rnAnd thank you so much! :D I loove long reviews, they make me happy :D Especially when they are good reviews :DrnI will post next chapter tomorrow, that's a promise!rnSusan xxx
Date: 05/04/08 08:14 am Title: Chapter 1
*big grin plastered all over her face*
i LOVED it =D
the summer camp fics always make me hapy and now i can't wait to read more of this one!!! (even if i'm kinda surprized that bill hasen't seen the likeness yet, considdering he's seen himself without make-up...)
but pretty please update soon? (A)
Author's Response: Well, about Bill not recognizing Tom... if I had met someone who looked just like me, I wouldn't have recognized them, just because I like being oblivious to my surroundings xD Or something like that... but thank you very much! :D