Date: 06/05/08 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh, but I wanted a better ending for Colin... Come on, don't end this yet!
Won't they have children and live happily ever after?? (okay, technically mpreg is not possible, but... You get what I'm saying.)
I loved it, but pleeeeaaase do an epilogue or something :D
Author's Response: Haha, better ending like him living happily ever after, or better ending like killing him? xD I'm up for anything sadistic and macabre, but don't tell anyone Oo But oh well, I'll let him live... if I didn't maintain some evil in this story, it would've been too sappy for me to bear xDrnrnAnd thanks a lot, but I'll have to think about an epilouge... I'm not sure if I'm able to write anything good right now ><
Date: 06/01/08 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
COLLLLIIIINNN!!! ARRRGGG!! You little son of a b----!! What you did to Tomi -- and Bill; you're going to pay. Poor tomi's lost his dreads. Aww. Awful brave of bill to aniunce he was tom's boyfriend and twin to the officer. Cute. Take care of him Bill.
Author's Response: Haha, I think people'll go on a hunt mission after Colin xD
Date: 06/01/08 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 12
WITHOUT DREADS =OOOOOO
I'd never imagine something like that...
BUT I WANT COLIN DEAD!
Author's Response: I can't imagine Tom without dreads, so I had to write it Oo Thanks! And I concidered killing Colin, but then I changed my mind... I'd only pull it out into the endless eternity Oo
Date: 06/01/08 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
I loved it! Amazing! Maybe you could write a little epilogue that tells us what happens to Colin and everyone if you get the chance?? Your choice =)
Author's Response: Hm, maybe I will :D Thanks a lot, you guys really make me happy n_n
Date: 05/30/08 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
very very good! and creepy as well.
the dream i mean.
my ex called me cake O.O that's what made it even creepier for me lol
but good job, good job!
i love this fic:D
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I am creepy, or at least that's what people tell me xD
Date: 05/28/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
Threewords = awe-some [well i cant count xD]
I think I know where Tom has gone ;)
Very well written and very sweet.
I love the fact that All of Tom's friends are hooking up too.
That Colins should be fucking tortured big time - he deserves to die, for doing that to Bill.
Gah !! I need more of this story though
please update soon.
Author's Response: Haha, neither can I x'D Aawh, thank you, reviews like that make me happy n_n I'll update on Sunday, if I remember... Oo I know, I should keep my promises, but I spend all my weekends watching anime xD So I forget easily...Oo
Date: 05/28/08 11:04 am Title: Chapter 11
that was really sweet =D
i loved it and can't wait to find out what it is tom's upto ;)
i liked the flashback too =D i hope we'll get more of them so that we can get to know more about what happened to bill!!!
and i liked the whole thing, even that last part =P hehe seriously, ur a really gd writer =)
hope you'll update as soon as you can =D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D As I've already said, I'm proud about the flashback... it is very sadistic and such, but I am pleased xD I'll update on Sunday, I think n_n
Date: 05/28/08 10:08 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh god :) I read it all for this time, and it's so good story... You must put here new chappie so soon as it's possible, I can't wait anymore ;)
Author's Response: Aawh, thank you! :D It makes me happy when people read my story n_n I'll add another chapter on sunday, probably Oo
Date: 05/28/08 07:48 am Title: Chapter 11
Awwwwwww. Tom and Bill are such abd adorable couple!!!! Tom is so sweet, and Bill is such a sweetie. I laughed when Bill was checking out Tom's ass. Lal. I'd do the same. =P
Author's Response: Haha, I know xD Who wouldn't? xD Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 05/25/08 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ey, that's not fair! :O I was waiting for some serious bed-action, and them you just cut it like that!? Man, that's un-fair xD
Well, I hope you'll make it up to me later! :O:P
Great chap by the way, totally loved it! :D Keep up the amazing work ;D
Author's Response: Hahaha, I thought it'd be cheesy with graphic slash in it, so I didn't write it xD