Date: 05/12/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow.
I've seen this story like four times in the random stories thing, seriously, and I've kind of made it a mental note to write it down but never have. And so I saw it today and I was excited and clicked on it right away, and...
I absolutely adore how spot-on their personalities were. I tend to change the twins' personalities to fit my freaky supernatural stories and such and to give them different character traits in each story, but I don't think I've ever seen a oneshot with the twins' personalities as close to the real thing as this. Everything seemed perfectly in-character and I could see them doing every single thing, saying every single word, that you made them. Even Monica...I even liked her even though she was an OFC and she got Tom's number and everything. That idea has been done so many times but the fact that you didn't go into it past the phone number and the fact that you had the conversation leading up to it just shows how talented you were at portraying this.
I loved this. I'm serious. It's going in my favorites :)
And the last line was priceless XD
Author's Response: thanks sweetheart! =D
Date: 01/13/09 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
aweh, that's actually pretty cute for a one shot. very nice job.
Date: 01/06/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg tom's attitude is so hot here x3
monica is a lucky girl
Date: 12/29/08 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1
awww! thats soo nice, you should so carry on with another chapter i really wanna know whatll happen next!
Date: 10/26/08 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ha! funny!!
Plz continue!
Date: 06/12/08 09:37 am Title: Chapter 1
aww that was a great one-shot but i dont like how it ended or i just dont understand it??
Date: 05/21/08 01:15 am Title: Chapter 1
what do the numbers mean??? totaly blonde moment her (i am a blond) i liked this it's cute and well written
Date: 05/16/08 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha i enjoyed it...its cool how you actually have Tom's signature at the bottom
=D
more?
Date: 04/29/08 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
If this is your first fic, I can't wait to read more from you. This is a promising start.
Date: 04/29/08 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1
hey girl that was the best story EVERRR. keep writing, ja!
Author's Response: i know, i know.rni thought the same thing myself.
Date: 04/27/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
annndddd i love it. make it moreeeee.
Author's Response: i knew you would dirty filthy whore. thanks!
Date: 04/26/08 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
DAMMMN!!! For your first fic this was awesome!!! :) Great job. I'm adding it to my favorites.
I love the lil signature at the end from Tom. :) AMAZING JOB!
Author's Response: thanks a bunch hun, that means a lot! thanks girl!
Date: 04/26/08 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
this cannot be a one-shot...you
need to continue with this, you have to
:D
Author's Response: thanks! :)
Date: 04/26/08 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Didn't really look finished to me, so you might just write this as a chapter story and add chapters :) ahhh jealous Bill *-*
Author's Response: i don't think it's finished myself. i'll see what i can add, thanks!
Date: 04/26/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
holy shit continue please
Author's Response: only because you asked so nicely. i'll think about it ;). thanks!