Date: 08/17/11 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
What the...?
The ending was a bit... /: hmmm.
I thought Tom really liked her? But he said to Bill it was nothing :(
*disappointed...*
But but but (!!!) the story was seriously hot.
Especially the beginning when Tom called her and spoke to her in German. When they had phone sex... ush!!
Super sexy.
I loved that creative and smart idea with the bold text!
The dirty talking was really hot!
Date: 02/28/11 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
aawh, fucking great story, makes me feel bad for tom though, but loved it anyway!
Date: 03/30/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my... I always have trouble with female OCs. Especially in this fandom. But this? This was so well written. She felt very very real. All of it did. And it was hot to boot. A brilliant job! Thank you for this!
Date: 02/09/10 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awe it's really good. But I'm disappointed. I hate that she's being a realist and decides her boyfriend is the better choice. She didn't even try with the rock star. He liked her and she liked him. Despite the fact that they weren't speaking the same language they were still communicating on the same level. Guys don't just call you obsessively especially ones who could get pussy on demand. If Jackob really loved her he could have shared or even forgiven her for her escapade. No it's not realistic but damn it sometimes you just have to leap and know that you aren't going to make it just for the sake of leaping. Arg. It was really good. I've been waiting for a good OFC, I've read some het and mostly I don't like the OFCs. They are either "shells" like Bella in Twilight someone anyone can become to enjoy the story. Or they are 14 year old girls using writing to work out their 14 year old girl fantasies.
Date: 01/08/10 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! I read this a few days ago and forgot to review. I am going to add it to favorite so I can read it again and again everytime I need something dirty. LOL..great ending..I absolutely love it cuz it's so different that I had expected before reading the whole story.
Date: 06/17/09 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1
i WISH THAT YOU WOULD ADD MORE THIS STORY SEEMS LIKE IT HAS THE POTENTIAL TO GO ON AND THAT REALLY MAKES ME HAPPY. AT LEAST CONSIDER IT. YOU R A GREAT WRITER AND I THINK YOU COULD MAKE IT INTO SOMETHING REALLY GOOD!
Date: 05/05/09 03:40 am Title: Chapter 1
kinda weird, i felt bad 4 jakob u.u
hahaha naaa loved the phone sex btw! ;D
Date: 04/08/09 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh geez. this was kind of unexpectedly sad. :| but i love the bill/tom brotherlyness.
Date: 03/21/09 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Arianne, this is the second time I've read this and I think it got better. Is that seriously possible?
A few nights ago I had a dream about this story and I freaked the eff out. I was dying to know what it was!
Really, you're amazing writer and I'm going to have to read more of your work.
♥ Erika
Author's Response: thank you, erika :) I'm glad you like it!
Date: 11/25/08 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sexy and very well written. I love it but it made me sad. I knew she had a boyfriend and all but I guess I was expecting a 'happy' ending. Not that this wasn't happy, I was just thinking... different. Oh nevermind. I loved reading it and thanks for writing it =)
Date: 11/05/08 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gah, this was so hot. I loved how Tom went back and from from shy Tom to sex-god Tom. I bet he's such a player IRL, lol. Thanks for feeding my obsession. :)
Date: 09/12/08 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg, so damn hot and I don't even like Tom that much.. x___x *cough* But that end made me seriously drop a tear. ;____;
Date: 09/06/08 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1
WHY ISNT THERE MORE!!!
YOU BETTER WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response: It was just a one shot, sorry!
Date: 08/30/08 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I lurved it!!
It was... awesome... lol
GREAT fic!!
Love, Emily
Date: 07/30/08 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOOOOOOOOVED IIIIIT!!!!
I laughed, I giggled, I got nervous, everything! Great job! Pleaaaase, please, give me another, pretty-please!
Kisses!