Date: 02/06/24 07:47 am Title: Actions Speak Louder Than Words
Hi there, I want to know if this story ist going on or did you stop writing at all?
Date: 04/18/23 01:14 am Title: Actions Speak Louder Than Words
So I almost neverrrrr read unfinished stories, but when I do I just tell myself to be prepared to kind of think up my own ending to whatever cliff I end up on at the last chapter written lol..... the concept of this was SO interesting and if y'all ever decide to finish it I'll def read it!
Date: 04/22/19 04:48 am Title: If it's broken...
Ooooh I’m curious on how things will proceed from now on. Interesting turn of events with Bill’s feelings. Great chapter again :) !
Date: 04/06/19 02:11 pm Title: All I'll Ever
Aw I hope you return to this story 😭
Author's Response: We have returned and updated check it out ;)
Date: 01/29/19 08:52 am Title: All I'll Ever
It took some time until I found the time to review. But please keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Awww thanks hon, the next one is up now if you wanna read ;)
Date: 01/16/19 07:08 pm Title: All I'll Ever
I'm not sure what I think about this story yet, but there is one thing you should take a look at. You switch between first person and third, and that's just... not something you should do as a writer. In this chapter you switched in the middle of it. It went from being "I should wake him" to "Tom growls." It just doesn't work. Pick one, either you write from first person or you do third, but switching between them makes an otherwise interesting story sound sloppy.
Keep writing! I'm curious to see where you will take this.
Author's Response: Hopefully you like the next one. It’s up and ready for your review ;)
Date: 01/16/19 06:54 pm Title: All I'll Ever
This chapter cracked me up
Author's Response: Hopefully the next one cracks you up too rnXoxornPLURrnKari ;)
Date: 01/16/19 06:48 pm Title: All I'll Ever
Awh :( great chapter, but poor, poor, Bill :(
Author's Response: Poor Bill indeed :( but there’s a new one up and hopefully you enjoy rnXoxornPLURrnKari ;)
Date: 01/16/19 05:48 pm Title: All I'll Ever
:O
I’m so intrigued by this story! Like it seems that it’s almost over but is it haha
I love your stories because they start with a glimpse of the future , and then you’re so curious as to what happened? How did it get this way!?!? Can it be fixed?!?? WHATS HAPPENING!
Poor Bill :(
Although I somehow understand Tom’s anger, but if Bill has no control over it, the poor thing is suffering for everyone’s else’s mistakes.
I can’t wait to see why Bill was so special to Tom. He’s so cruel.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. So sorry the update took so long but there’s a new one posted and hopefully you read and enjoy that one as wellrnXoxornPLURrnKari ;)
Date: 12/28/18 10:16 am Title: Prize of Revolution
Yaay angst, I love angst :D loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Ah we all love angst I think... more of it in the new chapter!
Date: 12/27/18 12:59 pm Title: Prize of Revolution
I love how Tom is cruel , not like other story’s where he suddenly sees him and changes his mind at first sight .
Hope to read you soon 🖤
Author's Response: Well we did try to make it genuine, writing has been quite a crazy ride! Thanks so much!
Date: 12/25/18 06:34 pm Title: Prize of Revolution
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks : )
Date: 12/11/18 03:06 am Title: This Is How You Get Their Attention
so far i like it looking forward to the next update
Author's Response: New update it up now. Check it out. And thanks so much for your love :)
Date: 12/06/18 06:09 pm Title: This Is How You Get Their Attention
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 12/05/18 12:20 pm Title: This Is How You Get Their Attention
Soooo exciting
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
Date: 12/05/18 11:59 am Title: This Is How You Get Their Attention
Oh, poor Bill. I understand why Tom did what he did, but after that he could treat Bill differently... :(
Author's Response: He could, couldn't he? Hmm. Lol thanks for reading. Don't forget to check out future chapters
Date: 11/25/18 12:04 pm Title: Actions Speak Louder Than Words
I love it 🥰
Author's Response: Thank you so much, stay tuned!
Date: 11/25/18 12:00 pm Title: Actions Speak Louder Than Words
Good start! It vill be exciting.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, your reviews are very appreciated!rn
Date: 11/24/18 09:45 am Title: Actions Speak Louder Than Words
I’m very excited about this, can’t wait to read more :D!
Author's Response: Yes yes you are... and we have a second chapteeeer!
Date: 11/23/18 12:21 pm Title: Actions Speak Louder Than Words
I just looked over the first chapter and I think it is amazing! I just cant imagine how this will continue ... I'm looking forward to the next chapters, but I will wait with reading, till there are some more.
I'm just wondering if there will be an end with Bill dying or if he can survive ... I hate sad endings and uselly dont read storys with an sad ending :O
Author's Response: Hi! It's so nice to see you on another story of mine! I know you weren't a fan of my Japan fic, so I hope you'll like this one more! Thanks!