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Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/20 02:22 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh no. Bill aceptó stay in the house with Jost :( Bad for him but good for us ;).

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/18 10:08 am Title: Chapter 5

Just read this and I love that Bill found a place to hide. I just really hope he can tell someone soon. He obviously has severe ptsd. Poor baby. I want Tom to find out but I know you have to build up to thay. I really hope Gordon and ria get him!!!💚💚💚

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/18 10:07 am Title: Chapter 4

I really hope Tom finds out soon. Sorry I haven't reviewed. Been super busy. Your story is awesome. Really enjoying it! I just read the other chapter too. Will review asap!!!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/18 09:09 am Title: Chapter 4

:o

Author's Response: 😮😱

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/18 08:51 am Title: Chapter 3

The descriptions are just...wow. I just got to read this. Don't worry I'm a tad sick in the head myself and put Bill through some pretty savage shit in my writing. The realism is awesome since this kind of thing happens in real life which is awful. I think many times writers do this out of pure emotional outlet rather than it being some kind of weird fetish. Well, most of us. If you've never read it I wrote one some years back called The Playhouse Palace and if you like stuff like this for rainy days you could check it out. Not trying to promote my writing on here at all. This is about your story. But, just a heads up. Not sure if it's this well written since I was a bit younger when I wrote it and it's not finished but just thought it may be something you'd enjoy. Anyhow, so sad that Bill has to endure this while Tom has a good life. Nearly drives me to tears. I hope one day that Tom's family will see what's going on and the twins can be together. But, keep it coming and I'll continue to review!!! Update when you can hun. Really loving this and very well written. Kinda getting inspired over here with so many new stories on this site and yours is one of them!!!

Author's Response: Glad to hear I'm not the only one! There's just something so enchanting about the bond between Bill and Tom, so one or the other having to hide such trauma and abuse is a very interesting concept, because naturally one of the twins will sense something is off. I absolutely love what you said about this being a pure emotional outlet, cause for me and for you, it is. Songs and stories give us a chance to slip in little windows to the authors world, and it brings more realism to the table. Just as soon as I finish this reply, im going to read your story. I hope your inspiration drives you to create and enjoy more content on this website. I love it here, it's like a safe haven. Thank you so much for your review d84;a039;

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/18 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm sorry for bothering you, but according to site rules if story is het than can't be general too.Maybe you could remove general genre as it's misleading in this case?

Author's Response: Hi Ewa. You're absolutely right, i just changed it. I guess I clicked both somehow when uploading the story. Thank you so much for pointing this out to me!

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/18 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love the dynamic of Gordon, Ria and Andreas as a family. Seems like such a good place for Tom, well for both of them to be. It is just what they need to heal, but Bill needs to move over their ASAP so that he's not gonna suffer one second longer. And holy shit, that asshole, i can't believe how fucked up and cruel he could be. But oh God, if he can only make it through to school tomorrow and tell Tom, then it can stop happening. Praying for him... and can't wait for the next chapter to come out!

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/18 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm so hooked. So sad what is happening and every time that Bill makes an excuse to Tom, my heart just aches. I want him to tell him everything so that Tom can help him because i know he would do anything to get him the f*ck out of that place. Scared to see what comes next and if Tom and his new parents will work out what has been going on to B. :(

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/18 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh shit, those poor boys! After all they just went through and now they've been seperated and Bill's already in an abusive household again. How the hell did the child services let this happen? :( Your writing is really descriptive and enticing, i like it a lot!

Author's Response: I'm really trying to put the reader into the characters shoes with the way I've written this story. I want it to be, just as you said, descriptive and enticing, so that each chapter leaves you wanting more, I.e why I work to upload new chapters so quickly. Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you're feeling the story! 💕

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/18 09:04 am Title: Chapter 3

Jost is a sick. Love it! Bill was so happy after see Tom and this animal(Jost) bring him back to his nightmare. Lovely chapter! So intense!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/18 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

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That David needs a big punch on the head. Jajajajaja. Lovely

Author's Response: What a sadist, am I right? 😂😂

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/18 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love this story. Keep writing! So glad that the twins get to see each other for now and I love the unique pairings!!! Keep going. This is amazing. Jorg is awful and I'm terrified for Bill after being forced that bottle of liquor. No telling what he'll do. Next chapter, please!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to write this story like a fanfic I'd binge on a rainy day, so I want to keep the chapters flowing but not make it seem too rushed, yanno? More to come very soon! 💕 Ty!!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/18 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Great! I love it! I’ll always love Bill suffering. I hope next chapter is up soon ;)

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