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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/23 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/18 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 8

Wonderful ending, even if its sad that they both dont have contact to their mom - their family anymore :(
At least they have each other now - and the little lilly.

Author's Response: Happy to hear that you liked this sequel and especially this second ending ;) I have to admit it feels good to wright them a happy ending after all. Even though things won't be all easy for them in the future most likely... For now I've made them suffer far enough right? ^^ They deserve to be happy at least for a while. Thank you for having followed this story till the end :)

Author's Response: Happy to hear that you liked this sequel and especially this second ending ;) I have to admit it feels good to write them a happy ending after all. Even though things won't be all easy for them in the future most likely... For now I've made them suffer far enough right? ^^ They deserve to be happy at least for a while. Thank you for having followed this story till the end :)

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/18 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great last chapter :) I enjoyed this story a lot :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for always being so kind. This really means a lot to me. I'm glad you liked it till the end :)

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/18 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you! For keeping readind and letting me know you still like it, I truly appreciate

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/18 11:41 am Title: Chapter 7

Perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you :3 I'm glad you like it, I was a bit worried about this one

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/18 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks :) only one or two more left

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/18 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/18 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks for keeping reading and reviewing, I'm glad you still like it I hope it won't change ^^ thank you so much

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/18 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for posting this chapter :) I'm so curious for what will happen next. Great chapter :)

Author's Response: You should find out pretty soon ;) next chapter's on its way, will be posted tomorrow at the latest. Thanks again for supporting this story!

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/18 05:32 am Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you like it

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/18 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Haha ok you win, I was about to complain and threaten to not post the next chapter I've just translated because I had no review on the last one but here you are :) Thank you, I trully apreciate and therefore here comes the next chapter!

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/18 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think your answer is not fully posted :O

Author's Response: Yep you're right and that crappy connection messes with my head right now --' Still it's not my first issue so I savec it all once again before submiting it! He re it is along with your review since it once again managed to be deleted ><

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]

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Date: 01/18/18 09:55 m**itle: Chapter 1

I read the first story of this, and at the end I wasnt sure if I should comment, because there were so many things that I head to fight in this story, and also I was so angry and sad because of the ending (I wrote you why ...) but now I hope for a hapoy ending and because of that I want to tell you what made me so ... gnh in the first part ... And dont be angry with me!

1. The whole story was for nothing because of the end(because ... what was the point) But with the sequel I hope this will change!

2. As I understood Bill still lived in the house of the mother and Tom in his new house ... why didnt tom go to bill?

3. How the fuck could tom buy (or just rent?) a whole house, when he just came from school(or college?)

4. Why did Toms wife dislike bill so much? She obviously didnt knew about their relationship.

5. What did she when Tom came back home? She did see them kissing and maybe the family too?(She said in front of the family) so did she just let it be, or did they fight, or did she even left him?

6. How the fuck can this idiot think that he just should stay with his wife because she is pregnant? I know, many perents think so, but ... how the fuck can you just want to try to play happy family for your whole fucking life? (Or at least the next 18 years ...) And does these poeple think about what is, when the child gets to know? I wouldnt want to know that my parents stayed together, unappy and unable to look for a new love, just because of me. Also childs gets to know anyway ...

I think there where more things ... more in the logical section, but that was all what I remembered.

When I really remember more, I will write a second comment.

A, and btw, good first chapter :)



Author's Response:

Wow you're really not going easy on me right now eh? But I kinda like that you are so pissed about all this haha ^^ ok so let's start answering that :)

1. I get the "this story had no point" thing but it wasn't meant first to be a whole story but more like fragments of their lives. I don't know if it makes it any better but it makes sense to me at least ^^

2. You understood well but Tom didn't go to Bill because he was ashamed knowing that something was wrong and probably by his fault and he couldn't help hoping that things would arrange somehow at first and when they finally didn't as the time passed by he just couldn't figure out how to deal with the situation anymore. At his place, would you go to the person you love and is already mad at you and ask them what's wrong when the answer is probably you're a fucking asshole.. I'm not sure I would dare to :/

3. Haha I like this one because it just made sense to me but I totally understand that it doesn't to anyone else! Actually they both made studies in the estate real and the house is an advantage from the agency Tom had been hired by. That's something one of my cousins had, he could pay every month for less than the real rent and then after a few years the house was truly his. I guess I had planned to mention it at first and then I forgot because it wasn't that important for the story.. maybe I was wrong about it, but still here is the explanation :)

4. What if she did but didn't want to see it? My opinion is she has always known there was something going on but tried to avoid it. And since Bill wasn't really part of their life anymore she could be ok with that.

5. For that one I guess you're gonna find out pretty soon :) but the way I see her reaction when he comes back is that she sees how defeated he is and that she had won for good so she just let it be.

6. And finally the last! Well to that one I have to say I totally agree with you about that people shouldn't mess up their lives for this kind of reason and I particularly appreciate that you put it on the children's point on view saying that they deserve to know and they'd probably prefer their parents to be apart and happy rather than unhappy together cause.. well that's what told my mom the day I found out I was one of them. For Tom I just figured he felt guilty for messing up the people he loves' lives and after his brother's and his mother's he couldn't bare messing with his to be born child's life too.

Let me know what you think about all that and if you want to make more remarks sure do it :) I hope you're not even more pissed about me now ^^ Thank you

Reviewer: leidyaradia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/18 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Thanks...!!!

Author's Response: You're welcome! :)

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/18 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

I´m glad there is a sequel! Thank you!!!

Author's Response: I wasn't sure about it first but then reading at your coments I just figured out I would hate it to end like that too as a reader, so yeah let's catch this up! ;)

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