Date: 10/14/17 06:16 pm Title: Tongue Tied
Seriously??! You must be the queen of cliffhangers! HAHA. You've taken such a serious approach to this story and I kept waiting for it to lighten up and get to the smut. HAHAHA. Jeez. Ok ok. I won't ask for a sequel, because at least this time it feels more complete. Like maybe Tom really is getting better. Hopefully Bill can lighten up a bit because he actually annoyed me a little in this story. His protection feels more like self-righteous hovering syndrome. .... In reply to "Call Me Daddy": you're so sweet to dedicate something to me. Too nice. I don't feel I've done anything to deserve such a gift, but thank you!! That's too nice. :) Seriously though- I didn't do anything. Haha. ... but because you said that, I thought "who is this girl?", and I looked at your profile. We're both Canadian YAY! (I'm from Toronto), and apparently we've both been on THF for a million years, and both only write twincest (though I like mine in the First Time variety). Nice to know we have some stuff in common. hehe. Anyway. Thanks for updating so quickly-- I'd never be able to do that. HAHA. Also, I don't particularly feel my reviews are that great. I try to write what I feel in the moment, and I think I was actually pretty harsh on you, when mixed with my mood, sometimes the result isn't "OMG AMAZING FIC" Haha.
P.S.- Actually when I write for other fandoms I write first-time slash instead of twincest, cuz you can't really write twincest without twins. HAHA. I find established-relationship to be boring, and making up drama for them to go through isn't my thing. .......OH! That's what might have been bothering me about Off Days/ On Days... maybe the simple fact that the tragic rape scenario isn't part of their real life. Maybe that's what feels off. Hmmm. That's pretty unfair to you to impose that kind of obvious bias when critiquing. *sigh* Never mind. Turns out I'm just a curmudgeon. HAHA.
Date: 10/13/17 09:59 am Title: Tongue Tied
Glad they have a second happend. Thank you for showing us more of their feelings and thoughts :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you for sticking around and reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 10/12/17 07:35 am Title: A Silver Suit
Anxiously waiting for more < 3 I love your story.
Author's Response: Thank you d84;a039; More will be posted today. Was supposed to be yesterday but I went to a concert and didn't have time.
Date: 10/11/17 01:39 pm Title: A Silver Suit
Thanks for continuing this story! I felt so anxious while reading this, because I knew what was going to happen, I just wasn't sure how it would happen. Wondering how Georg feels about giving him that beer... if he's even aware of what he did. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter! Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Well, let's just say we haven't heard the last of Georg. ;)
Date: 10/11/17 01:07 pm Title: A Silver Suit
Thank you for continuing this story!
Good to have a flashback showing what happened. I'm wondering if Georg is feeling guilty, because he gave tom the beer, without telling him that someone else bought it.
Let's see what chapter two will show us :)
Author's Response: It will be posted tonight so you'll find out soon! ;)
Date: 10/11/17 12:47 am Title: A Silver Suit
Wow. I just read Off Days yesterday! I found myself growing anxious as I went through this one, and felt Tom’s agony, I sure did. So Bill finds out about all this from the stranger?? I’m quite mad at Georg right now.
Read you tomorrow. Xo.
Author's Response: All shall be revealed very soon! :)