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Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/17 05:25 pm Title: Birthday Blues

Hiiii!!!

I'm so so so sorry for being so late to leave a review on this, but better late than never!

I'm so proud of Tom for trying to be a big boy, even if he's not making it at the moment. He does seem more mature and being close to Bill has changed him a little, it does him good.

Well I hate to say it, but I liked that Simone got what she deserved for treating her own son like that. Why send her to Mars when Hell is too an option? : P

I would like to see a pregnancy chapter, Bill will be like THE most protective husband for his sweet Tomi and Tom will have al sorts of weird cravings... ah my two lovebirds will have such a blessed life from now on #.#

You're amazing, keep going!

Reviewer: leidyaradia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/17 03:39 pm Title: Birthday Blues

I am between wedding chapter and pregnancy procedure chapter, hahaha

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/17 12:43 am Title: Birthday Blues

Hey!

Good One Shot!

I would like to see a Pregnancy Chapter or/and/also with at least a part of a lemon. Not for dirty reasons but because I cant imagine these both having sex in this story :D

Also I would like to see a changing in Tom. A 'getting stronger' 'getting more manly' he is like a child and very very insecure. Sure he has his reasons, but now when the reasons are away, he should get better. At least I would like that :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'll take your vote into consideration during the writing process. Sex with these two would be a nice chapter to write because I can imagine Bill being gentle with Tom. Look at me, I'm the writer talking about this like I don't write it lol. rnrnrnYeah there is some change. I'm trying to show some maturity while keeping in mind that some child like responses are going to occur. Hence why in this chapter during certain moments I had Tom make mature decisions. The whole getting lost thing was supposed to be sort of like he's never been to town or really out of the house for that matter so if he got turned around it would be hard to get out. Also Tom for this series has a lot of immature responses because I took some personality inspiration from my mom. She has her moments where it's like mom, you can't act like that because you're an adult. So I'm kinda planning to force him to "grow up", I guess you could say, by making Bill get a little frustrated with him. rnrnI'm also trying to make sure he doesn't move on too quickly considering he's been abused pretty much his entire life even before he can remember. I know a lot of victims hold that in and it can cause mental illness. I'm gonna stop rambling because I shouldn't put this much into a response. You know spoilers and shit but I wanted to make sure that give you sort of an insight into where I'm taking this. rnrnThanks so much again for this review, I really appreciate it. Your opinions are really greatly appreciated and I hope to see your name on future reviews.

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