Date: 03/12/23 04:26 am Title: SUDDENLY
Ahh, oops, I totally need to clarify! I did not mean it in the sense of teen sex in general, sorry! Like, I wouldn’t have read so many for a year+ if that bothered me hahah!!! No no no - I meant how this story could make a pretty cool MOVIE since the plot/idea is interesting and fairly original! However, if this did become a movie, the age difference would have to be scaled up a bit because the audiences of today would be in an uproar over 15yr olds having sex with 25-ish age adults. I re-read my review and I can totally see that I didn’t explain that very well at ALL xD ((this comment is part of the HUGE reply I just sent over on A Wrinkle in Time -- Just want to say that in case you read this post first))
Author's Response: Sorry. In fact, I was the one who was unclear, not you. I perfectly understand the problematic issue is the 15yo minor being sexually involved with a 25yo adult. I chose to whitewash my reply to you, and you didn't pick up on this. Thanks anyway, for thinking the plot could be a movie.
Date: 03/05/23 06:48 pm Title: SUDDENLY
This was such an original idea and in spite of the age difference being an issue for most audiences today I feel like this could be an actual movie plot! Bill and Tom are both so sweet here, too... makes such a cute fic!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you said that!! Thank you for the wonderful compliment. :) I hope the ending wasn't too anticlimactic. As for the age thing, I'm old enough to have witnessed this change in audience also, but still... if you're reading TWINCEST then you can probably handle a little teen sex, right?? haha. TH were teenage rockstars, if all romance fics were age appropriate nothing would ever be written.
Date: 12/10/17 12:07 am Title: PROOF
i’m crying what the fuck oh my god oh my god i just read this in like an hour it was that good holy shit??? oh my god??? i’m crying??? so good,,, so sweet but also AHHHH FEELS... i loved it...
Author's Response: OMG, I think this is one of the funniest reviews I've ever received!! Thank you so much for your support, you made me smile this morning. I'm so glad you liked it! :) Just a hint: if you like first time twincest, it's kind of the only thing I write. ;)
Date: 06/04/17 01:21 pm Title: SUDDENLY
I loved this story so much !!!
This time travel thing was a VERY VERY good idea. I loved Tom being afraid at first and then very into his relationship w/ Bill. I nearly cried as well when he was so scared of the future he knew he was gonna have. And the end... I had to read the chapter twice 'cause I was a bit lost between 2004 and 2014 lol But it is happy end and it all that matters !!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review. :) I'm glad you liked bit, but honestly, I re-read this story recently myself, and I feel disappointed in the ending. I wish it was more dramatic somehow. I could feel this climax building and then I let it flop. I wish I could come up with something better, but I still can't think of what. I love the time travel thing too though. Hehe. Thank you!!
Date: 04/05/17 11:03 am Title: PROOF
I've just finished reading this and it was amazing ! Thank you for writing it < 3
Author's Response: YAY! I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing! ;)
Date: 04/02/17 08:13 am Title: PROOF
that story was a rollercoaster of emotions, but I really liked it. it was an interesting piece to read, very original.
maybe the ending was a little predictable, but still, great work :)
Author's Response: Rollercoaster of emotions? Oh boy. Haha. I'm very glad you liked it. The plot of the switch was what captured my interest to write this thing, so I can't really imagine a different ending. Predictable, you're right, but I hope it tied up the story well. Thank you for your review! :)
Date: 04/01/17 11:26 pm Title: PROOF
aaae nice this was a good ending and i really enjoyed the story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews! They're very appreciated. :) Glad you liked the ending. In my opinion, it's a bit weak, but I can't think of anything better and I didn't want to drag it out. Thanks again!
Date: 04/01/17 11:11 pm Title: OLDER NOW
what hahahaha omg this is so amazing :D
Author's Response: Hahahaha!! Did you expect the twist at the end or not? hehe. I'm glad you liked this chapter. In my opinion, it's the most emotionally dramatic one. It kills me a little when Bill puts his trust in Tom to fix their lives and find that missing piece, no matter how.
Date: 04/01/17 11:00 pm Title: GIRLS
confused babies ;-; im glad they sorted it out !!
Author's Response: Yeah, definitely confused, haha. I was trying to show that even though they like each other at this point, they're coming into it from totally different perspectives. Hope it came across alright.
Date: 04/01/17 10:30 pm Title: BACK HOME
so cute!! and tom wass so desperate to be with him haha well, after that experience bwith the older bill 😏...love this chapter!
Author's Response: Awww, it broke my heart a little having to write Tom in this chapter. I imagine it must be hard going back to normal once you know the future, and know how amazing they could be together. Sex with older-Bill must have haunted him while seeing the love of his life so close yet so far. Glad you liked this. :)
Date: 04/01/17 10:01 pm Title: SUDDENLY
oooh the summary totally got me so I'm here 😍 ...nice first chapter!!! i'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Ha. Thank you! I would totally read a story with my summary too, eh? Time travel AND twincest?? Sign me up! hehe
Date: 04/01/17 10:32 am Title: PROOF
Very sweet and touching story. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you for saying that, and I'm happy you liked it! I really hope the emotion came across well (sometimes I'm not sure).
Date: 04/01/17 07:50 am Title: PROOF
this was a good story!!
Author's Response: Thank you again. :)
Date: 04/01/17 07:50 am Title: PROOF
this was a good story!!
Author's Response: Yay!! My faithful reviewer. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 03/31/17 05:29 pm Title: PROOF
Lovely fic
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Thank you. :)
Date: 03/24/17 07:07 pm Title: OLDER NOW
Aaww I love the way Tom tells us about his love for Bill. It is so romantic. I just loved it. Will we have another change in time? I want more. Thank you for these two chapters.
Author's Response: I know, right? Don't we all want a bf like Tom?? HAHA. I'm very happy you like my fic. Yes, there's another change in time and you get to find out what 25-yr-old-Tom did on the day he went back to 2004. Exciting!!! I love my own plot twists.. haha. Hope you like the ending!!
Date: 03/24/17 06:54 pm Title: GIRLS
Aaww, my babies. I love fics when they are starting their relationship. I love sweet kisses
Author's Response: Glad you like it. :) I also love fics where they start their relationship. I think that's the only thing I write about. I think starting in the middle of their relationship would be boring. haha
Date: 03/21/17 04:59 am Title: SUDDENLY
I'm really liking it! You developed Tom's behavior really smoothly, we'll just have to wait and see how young Bill reacts to this new young Tom... I can't wait for an update!! :*
Author's Response: Wow, I'm really glad you think Tom's development was smooth, because I was really afraid it was too fast and would end up coming across as sporadic and unnatural. I mean, I had to jam in Tom thinking of Bill as his brother with Tom suddenly having sex with an older version of this brother all in one day... that's a bit of a mind-fuck. lol. Honestly, I'm still worried about this fic moving too fast, but I have no time to write a novel, so I tried to cram in a decade of development into 6 chapters. lol. Hope you think it turned out ok. :)
Date: 03/20/17 02:25 pm Title: BACK HOME
Looking forward to tis story :D
Author's Response: I'm looking forward to finishing posting this story. HAHA ;) I hope you like it!
Date: 03/19/17 08:04 am Title: BACK HOME
Well, that's an interesting concept you have here; I'm enjoying this the story a lot, even though not much has been written yet.
looking forward to future updates :)
Author's Response: Well, I just added 2 more chapters to the fic, so enjoy!! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I love the concept of this fic too. hehe. Hope I do it justice..... even though while I was writing I was trying to move the plot along as fast as possible. I have a habit of starting stories too long for me to be able to finish, so if the plot moves too fast in this one, sorry!! I hope it's not too dry.