Date: 11/04/16 04:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhhh, I freaking love the idea of Tom as Tarzan asking Bill to be his Jane. I melted, seriously. You wrote such wonderful tension between them throughout the story. Love this!! :) Really well done.
Author's Response: Aww thank you as always!! This was one of the MOST fun fics I have ever written t b h
Date: 10/27/16 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahah, their conversation in the beginning is hilarious! So brotherly teasing yet sweet. And aww their little crush throughout the story!
(Oh, and I liked Andreas lol he was hilarious)
I love the way you write, it's so enjoyable to read! You describe all so well; the feelings and all the little details that make the scenes so realistic and nice.
And LOL at the Bay Watch. Didn't expected that
This was so cute and I WANT THE 10 YEARS LATER ONE!
Author's Response: Hahah I love writing this sort of era twins, when they're just young and boyish. Thank you thank you! Maybe a sequel for next halloween ;)
Date: 10/26/16 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAHHHHH. So silly and so cute, teenage twinnies getting their first twin kisses 😍😍😍 I loved it. Thanks for the sweetness!!! And where's that epilogue? Hahah 😘 I still feel Tom deserves a little more punishment for wanting Bill to dress up like Jane, lol. Talk about the girlies of the girlies. Buuuut his intentions were good, so I guess Bill can't mind that much.
Author's Response: Hahah the epilogue is sitting on my laptop, it's shitty tho but maybe I'll bulk it out and add it in... maybe. Hahaha yeah I felt a bit bad because we we know, Bill is NOT a girl but it was fun. Thanks so much darling!!
Date: 10/26/16 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to admit I was absolutly sure you were going to give us a "years later/nowadays" at the end and I couldnt wait to get there, Your adult twins are my favorite....so..cant you surprise us and share the epilogue????
But anyway, this is so sweet I Love how you portrait time :) thanks for this!
Author's Response: Awww I'm so sorry to disappoint! Maybe I will add my little epilogue here sometime. It wasn't that good that's why I didn't post it. But don't worry I will be writing lots of adult twins in the near future :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 10/25/16 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yaaaaaaassssss this is the cutest Halloween story ever!!! And I loved the ending so much, you definitely need to write a sequel, I will hold you to it!
Author's Response: Awwww thank you!! Haha maybe I'll bulk out that epilogue and turn it into a sequel...