Date: 11/29/16 07:44 am Title: Chapter Four: The History
on the edge of my seat here.
Author's Response:
oh my gosh me too. i have no idea what's going to happen (well i know what i want to happen i just don't know how it will)
Date: 11/23/16 02:25 am Title: Chapter One: The Call
Also why did Georg lie to him about Hammond? Shouldn't he know that Bill might've killed a man who knew him from when he was a kid? Wouldn't that be important information? I mean, that could send Tom into a panic, so I can see why he wouldn't. But it's not like Tom's a baby or anything.
Date: 11/23/16 02:20 am Title: Chapter Four: The History
Yet another amazing chapter. I am so excited to see where all this goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you! This means a ton to me!
Date: 11/17/16 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Three: The Players
I love Criminal Minds, and this has a slight feel of Along Came a Spider but not quite. Please do continue. I love it.
Author's Response:
i am familiar (very much so) with Criminal Minds but i've never heard of Along Came a Spider - i'll have to check it out!
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Thanks so much for the praise! I will certainly be updating it. I did have a tragic harddrive accident in November and am trying to recover and save what i can so it's taking me a long time to find my muse again but i have ideas floating around.
Date: 11/16/16 08:52 pm Title: Chapter One: The Call
Hi, my name is Kari.
First off, I have to say I love this story so far. I love the characters and the whole Criminal Minds feel it gives me. I love mysteries and this one is going to be so much fun to follow. The writing is superb. I adore it. I cannot wait to read more. Uh, I also sent your a banner for it to your email address. I saw that you asked if anyone wanted to make one and after reading it, I was inspired to create a nice cover for it. Hopefully you see it and hopefully it works for you.
Best of wishes,
Kari ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! i am really into Chriminal Minds and so i draw a lot of inspiration from the show. i hope it resembles it's awesomeness but doesn't steal too much of it
Date: 10/13/16 04:04 pm Title: Chapter One: The Call
Amazing start. I love horrors and crime stories, so I look forward to read more. And I really like the phrase "cedar-pecan complexion", it's beautiful :).
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much! i didn't want to do the typical 'almond complexion' etc so i did a LOT of research into skin tones. ...i probably could have put out another chapter or two if i hadn't done the research but i was so fascinated! (Maybe this is why GRRM is taking so long to write AWOW)
Date: 10/09/16 07:23 pm Title: Chapter One: The Call
Sounds very interesting! Will definitely read it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Oh gosh, this means that i have to figure the plot out =)
Date: 10/09/16 05:23 am Title: Chapter One: The Call
Looking good! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so so much!