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Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/17 10:15 am Title: Chapter 10

Ahh yay a nice ending!! ^_^ They've been through enough, don't need anyone to get murdered :3 Such a great story ^_^

Author's Response: Mostly happy ending! I figured people could use a break from me killing everyone off all the damn time. ;)

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/17 10:08 am Title: Chapter 9

I had to laugh at "I want it. You’re going to give it to me.” (':

Thank god everyone is okay! < 3 (I mean there's still time, but I'll worry about that in a minute)

Author's Response: Mmmmm, potential double entendre! Gotta love em.

So far, so good.

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/17 09:43 am Title: Chapter 8

Yay! ^_^ The "two of you" was a bit ominous o.o

Supernatural is definitely a good source of information, even if most of it is not real. Good on Bill for paying attention (':

Hopefully the Gs aren't murdering each other while we've been looking for Bill.

Author's Response: Well, the Gs are sort of menacing each other. Go with the pair that's already out and cut your losses, the ghosties say.

Supernatural's research (generally) isn't too bad. I've been impressed more than once (and maybe paused it to explain why them saying *whatever* was super cool to the gent). Plus you know Bill probably sits around at home soaking up TV like it's going out of style.

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/17 06:24 am Title: Chapter 7

Spoopy skeletons giving directions, fun >.> Bill is not going to be happy with all the footage being destroyed though

This is great reading but I have to leave it there for now, my stomach is protesting rather loudly D: More later, hope everyone turns up!

Author's Response: Spooky, scary skeletons send directions to the door.

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/17 06:02 am Title: Chapter 6

Georg, stop flirting with the house, you're making the occupants want to keep you. Hurry up and find Bill already >.>

Tom better not get lost, we don't need both twins missing D:

Author's Response: But how can you expect the house to resist those strong arms?

But if both the twins go missing, that'll give the Gs a chance for more quality time with the house!

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/17 05:47 am Title: Chapter 5

There, interesting enough for you, Bill? (':

Tom, stop playing jokes on your brother, it's not nice >.>

I'm not scared, honest

Author's Response: Ha ha, spooky tub hands are just Tom, right? RIGHT?

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/17 05:37 am Title: Chapter 4

Sleepy twins are so cute :3

Peanut butter and marshmallow is an odd combination for a sandwich, is this a delicacy where you live or what? (':

Hopefully they get something soon, I bet none of them want to be stuck with a grumpy Bill all night xD

Author's Response: I like sleepy twins. :)

Fluffernutters aren't really something I like overmuch, but the kid and the gent LOVE THEM. So to each their sugary own.

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/17 05:17 am Title: Chapter 3

Ooh, Tom and Georg alone the back of the house, interesting (':

Gustav most certainly did not knock that sheet off by himself >.>

Creepy :)

Author's Response: Getting all spooky up in this joint!

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/17 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

Okay, fine, one more chapter.

Georg is such a goof, but he's right about houses not being as well built. I love old architecture :3

Everything seems to be going rather well, how nice :)

Author's Response: Georg loves him a nice house. He'd spend months hand carving crown moldings if he got half a chance.

Well....FOR NOW.

Reviewer: VierAchtDrei Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/17 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

I needed more Gaja before bed (':

Ooh, I actually felt Tom glare at Georg :O He would definitely not be pleased with someone talking about his brother like that. >.>

Looking forward to reading the rest soon, probably tomorrow night :3

Author's Response: Bedtime stories from Gaja!

Yeah, you don't murder Bill and fold him up like a shirt, at least not on Tom's watch.

Reviewer: HellsDell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/16 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 10

I read all THis story over THe course of two days, and I loved how dark it was. I have to admit I was wondering where it was all going at first, but once all THe paranormal stuff started happening, WOW, I couldn't read it fast enough, THis sort of THing is right up my street.

However, mow THat we're at THe end I'm left wiTH a lot of questions, and wondering if I somehow missed a massive clue along THe way THat explained everyTHing, or THis was left so obscure because THe point is for readers to make up THeir own minds?

THis is all so interesting once you realise THere's more to it THan meets THe eye and now I can't help feeling curious about all THe who? What? When? Where? and why? of THe situation. THe only THing I THink I know for sure was THat Georg and Gustav were somehow possessed or taken over by THe spirits of women in THe paintings THey found, but I'm wondering what THat meant, who THey were? Who dragged Bill THrough THat baTH-tub because he was snooping? Who was THe girl who helped him escape?

I enjoyed THis a lot, it was so interesting and gave me loads to THink about as I read. THe dark tone was great, awesome job.

Author's Response: Ghost ladies were people who lived in the house once upon a time. They didn't get along at all. One thought she was entitled to the house by blood (marriage, really), and the other by love. It didn't end well. Bill got sucked down by the painting lady (thus Gustav 'remembering' dealing with 'the blond'). Annabelle was one of the children murdered in the house.rnrnHope that helps!

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/16 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 10

A finale chapter would be nice. Did Gusti sell the house? Burn it to the ground? Bulldoze it? Did he ever go back there again? Did anything happen to any one else that went into the house?

Author's Response: I figure that Gustav did what his great uncle did and just kind of left it to sit. Which isn't the best use of the land, or the safest, but what do you do with a wacky ass ghost murder house?

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/16 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

I was fully expecting someone to leave with a glint of possession in their eye. It almost went there with Georg, but I'm kind of glad that it didn't. Too predictable.

You know I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it! ♥

Author's Response: Hey, maybe the servants' quarters ghost DID go with him and is now having an awesome time putting in marble countertops and hand carving new bedposts. Everyone wins!

Reviewer: anemone Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/16 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

You gave them happy ending, awesome :). This story was really fun to read. I enjoyed it very much, thank you for that!

Author's Response: You're super welcome, and thank YOU for reading it. :D

Reviewer: ANTi_POP_CHiC007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/16 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 8

Salt packets will never fail to amuse me.

Author's Response: Salt: the unsung savory saviour!

Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/16 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 10

That was awesome and I am thrilled that they all lived through it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't want to go murdering people. THIS time.

Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/16 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ahhh...this is where I thought things were headed when I read the last chapter

Author's Response: Off to SCARY GHOST LAND?

Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/16 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 5

Argh! I thought that I knew where this was going until Bill got grabbed. Now I'm not so sure.

Author's Response: *yoink!* Gotta keep people on their toes. And in a tub.

Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/16 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

Excellent! The Bill problem has been resolved. And now I really want a fluffernutter. Oh my God it's been YEARS since I had one.

Author's Response: Yeah, he's just a pokey little puppy. Fluffernutters are delicious, even if they are an utter and complete sugarbomb. Or maybe BECAUSE they are.

Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/16 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh no! Not a missing Bill! Unacceptable. Fix it!

Author's Response: He's hiiiiiiding.

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