Date: 05/01/23 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 11/19/20 07:14 am Title: Chapter 1
please do a sequel to this!
Date: 06/09/20 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is a really good story!
please do a sequel to this!
Date: 12/16/19 10:35 am Title: Chapter 2
i really like this story!!
please add a sequel to this
Date: 10/18/18 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
this was a really good! you should do a sequel
Date: 04/14/17 07:18 am Title: Chapter 2
i hope u do a sequel to this
Date: 11/25/16 01:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Sequeeeel yaaayyy, I'm so interested :D
Horribily? Dunno watcha talkin' 'bout. I was really good in my opinion, the porny part I mean. I wasn't corny, or too much, or anything negative. I was actually really normal, and realistic, considering that it was Bill's first time, I asume, since that's the genre. I really liked it ^.^
And the general outcome, I liked how you described his initial fear of going in the car and home with strangers. I love realistic fics.
The only critic I have is that you don't use commas, and I'm totally intrigued. Why don't you?
I would make the reading so much easier if you'd put some into the sentences. I found some of them a little confusing a times.
Only that. I do not wish to be rude o mean, I hope I was as polite as one can be >_<
So that's it. I'll be waiting the sequel. And this one goes to my favourites, 'couse tiny-sixteen-pixie-face Bill and mature Tom are love
Author's Response:
Sorry for taking so long to answer. Life caught up in a prety signifcant way. I might do a sequel to this I'm still on the fence. It tickles at me occasionally, so maybe at some point when the inspiration hits for more than ten minutes. I am glad it came across as realistic. As for the comma thing I have never really understood them. I am bad at them. I am unsure of how they fit in sentence. However, I have gotten better in the intervening time. That was a very good critique and polite. I usually warn any beta that they need to be the comma police. When I wrote this and most of time I am without a beta. Always in the market if you're interested in being my comma police. Again a sequel may at one point make it's way out of my computer. Thanks for the review and keep your eyes open.
Date: 10/06/16 10:58 am Title: Chapter 2
Ah, I read this again 'cause I just really like this. And I noticed you saying in your end notes that you might write a sequel and I want you to know that I would definitely read it and I'm pretty sure I'd enjoy it too! :D
Author's Response:
I appreciate the vote of confidence. I am working on a sequel but I wanted to come back and read this story again as well as all the reviews so I wasn't leaving out any really good ideas. Sorry I didn't reply sooner. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/01/16 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay! A sequel sounds great! Now... off you go to find more "inspiration"...and thanks for sharing! :)
Author's Response:
I am working on a sequel but I doubt it will be inspired by another porno. It will be fun though. Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate the support.
Date: 09/27/16 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved it...I really hope there will be a sequel :)
Author's Response:
I am currently workng on a sequel so I will try to finish it and post it soon. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the support.
Date: 09/16/16 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooh!! I really liked this! And the sex scene was awesome!! :D Though I would've liked to read so much more of this!! :D Great work!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it and thought the sex scene was awesome. I have trouble feeling confident when I write scenes like that because I am cringing wondering if the vocabulary is ok or sounds really bad. I am currently working on a sequel I just have no idea when it will be up. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I apreciate the support.
Date: 09/14/16 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
I would love for this story to be continued with one-shots. These characters need to be written in at least a couple dozen sequels ....pretty please?
Author's Response:
I will definitely try because I do have a lot of ideas for these characters. It depends on my inspiration for the day and what else I have to do. You know boring adult stuff like work. So I am working on a sequel currently it is just not currently finished. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the support.
Date: 09/14/16 10:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Cute story and I wouldn't mind a sequel.
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I will definitely get to work on the sequel. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 09/14/16 06:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Lol at the link. I refuse to follow that link my eyes may fall out lol.
This went different than I imagined. He barely had to face his mom at all and she seemed quite chill. But great story.
Author's Response:
I got a request for a link to the inspiration behind the story. I figured instead of sharing it with one person, I should share it with everyone who happened across this story. I doubt it would make yoour eyes fall out. I do recommend doing it when you have plenty of time by yourself.
rnIntially I was going to make her a total maniac bitch. I got halfway through writing that when I realized it didn't work and I changed it. She might make a bitch appearance in the sequels. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 09/14/16 03:34 am Title: Chapter 2
this was a good story!!
please do a sequel to this!
Author's Response:
I will definitely be working on a sequel to this. I am glad it garnered so much interest. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 09/14/16 03:12 am Title: Chapter 2
Ohhh so nice! I really enjoyed it all and would love to read more about these two! They are so nice together ;)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I will definitely be working on a sequel. I am so glad everyone likes these two together. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the support.
Date: 09/14/16 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2
O my God. This is the better porn that i ever read ! 😅 Me encanta que Tom is not a pshyco and Bill is ok. I was being so innocent thinking that maybe Tom only was to help Bill. Jajajajajajajajsjajajajsj but no and Its better. Sequel? Please?! ;)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I had alot of fun writing it. I will definitely be working on a one shot sequel. Thanks so much for the review. I appreciate it.
Date: 09/07/16 02:55 am Title: Chapter 1
What? No link to the inspiring porn? Heh, I'll be back later ;)
Author's Response:
I'm not sure inspiring is the right word but I will be posting today and I can see if I find it. I might get flagged though.
Date: 09/04/16 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg of course Im waiting for the nex chapter! Im dying here! :)
Author's Response:
I will be posting later today. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 09/04/16 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1
this sounds like a good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I will be posting later today.