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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/23 12:31 am Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

OMG. This was hot with a great little twist ending!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/18 11:25 pm Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

this was a really good story!
you should do a sequel to this

Reviewer: Schmingg Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/16 03:45 am Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

Well damn! Thank you for making my insomniac woes a little more entertaining. Nothing wrong with a little heavy kink now and then. ;) I really wasn't expecting the little twist at the end, but it actually made this little story all the more perfect. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, thanks so much for sharing!

Author's Response:

As an isomniac you are in good company. I enjoy writing stories like this occasionally. I have a hard time writing straight up noncon as I have seen the damage of rape so I always try to make it consenual. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/16 05:08 pm Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

I'm so glad I made it through to the end. I was reluctantly finding it hot but feeling guilty. It was so relieving to read that last part. Definitely a favorite!

Author's Response:

I have a hard time writing non con so I always put in a twist that makes in cos play or something similar. At least most of the time. I am glad you like it enough to make it a favorite. I hope you will continue to read my stories. Thank you for takin the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Deca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/16 05:00 pm Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

I dont beta myself but my friend Zarlina does when she got time =) throw away a message to her

Author's Response:

I will do so thanks for the suggestion.

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/16 03:24 pm Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

Oh! That was fun!

Author's Response:

I am very glad you had fun. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Deca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/16 01:33 pm Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

This is good, but I really think you should try to get a beta. Maybe ask someone from the staff team or popular writers if they have time. The story is good but there are many things that a beta can help you with to make it go from good to amazing, because really, the idea is really really nice, the writing is... not bad but with quite a few mistakes and things that having someone read it through for you could easily fix.

Author's Response:

I have had a few betas over the years and most of them ended up no longer being able to do it. I am currently in the market. Could offer the job to you if you're interested? I am glad you liked the idea and felt the writing was at least decent. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the constructive critcism. If you would be interested in being my beta shoot me a message.

Reviewer: Skebe-Neko Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/16 01:11 pm Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

Uu! I really liked this! Though I would've wished for it to be longer :D More stuff like this! :D Good work!

Author's Response:

I am glad you like. I am worrking on a whole series of unconnected stories along the same lines so you should be seeing more stories like this from me. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: ElyaTranshy2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/16 12:10 pm Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

ohmygod i need more stories like this

Author's Response:

I love writing stuff like this. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/16 11:55 am Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel to this!

Author's Response:

I don't know what I sequel would be. If you have any ideas I'd be willing to consider it. Shoot me a message. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Kiks Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/16 04:45 am Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

Omg, that left me wanting even more?! Good job!

Author's Response:

I am glad I got you wanting even more. The sign of a good story it leaves you wanting. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/16 04:38 am Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

Very interesting beginning! Have not seen this idea yet. Cannot wait to know what will happen next.

Author's Response:

It's a beginning and an ending. There is very little likliehood that I will revisit this idea anytime in the future. I am glad you found it interesting. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/16 02:34 am Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

That was excellent! I didn't expect it :D

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Dark_horse Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/16 07:41 pm Title: Don't Make Me Hurt You

I liked it. It was dark and enchanting. The ending is very enjoyable to where it doesnt need any more..but as a reader, you definately want more. Two tumbs up yo.

Author's Response:

It was based on a SVU episode I recently saw about a female madame running female prositutes and she gets raped by an unsatisfied customer. It was terrible on the TV but it gave me a great idea. I am very glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

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