Date: 02/06/16 02:13 pm Title: Happy Halloween
Motherfucker! At first I thought Tom was just a cynical yet normal guy. Then he turned into one of those "candy from the van kidnapper" type guys that he was complaining about. Then holy shit! Bill's his husband! That was crazy...but I liked it :) Great job!
I am glad you liked it. I tried to make Tom as bad as I could think of. I wanted him to be redeemed by the end and the prompt gave me the perfect oppurtunity to do this. I am glad you liked ti and found it surprising.
Date: 02/05/16 07:08 pm Title: Happy Halloween
At first I really thought of Tom as a horrible man xD but then it turned out that Bill is his husband xD and I loved it, I loved the way you wrote it,and the sexual stuff, really amazing :)
I love writing stuff like this. I wanted people to think Tom was horrible intially. I wanted people to realize that he wasn't horrible by the end of it. I am glad you liked it and the sexual stuff was fun to write.
Date: 02/05/16 06:56 am Title: Happy Halloween
This was really good! :-) I liked the build up. And how you didn't give it away that they were husbands until in the middle somewhere. Clever writing! I really did enjoy this, I have to say. (I wonder if that makes me twisted?) Mostly I love how you pointed out that if you trust one another, talking about kinks and living them out is not that hard to do. :-) I just overall liked it. ;-) I'll definitely rec this in the future at my community TokioHotelSlash.Livejournal.Com. THANKS for the read!
I am glad you liked it. I worked really hard on making it real but also making it what I wanted it to be. I have a rathe ecentric love life myself because I trust my partner absolutely. I am glad you enjoyed it enough to give me future recommendations. It does make you twisted that you enjoyed this but what does that make me since I wrote it. I think we're all twisted at least a little bit. We write stories about four people who we borderline stalk. Like I said I am glad you enjoyed it. I look forward to seeing you reviewing some of my future stories. I made a new series called kink were I put all of my risque stories.
Date: 02/04/16 08:35 pm Title: Happy Halloween
You really used this prompt perfectly and turned it to an amazing story. Great job!
I'm guessing you're the orginal poster. If so I am glad you liked this story. I have a couple more prompts saved on my computer that I am workng on. Most of them will turn out to be one shots. I am very bad about writing one-shots that are anything other than smut and fluff. So keep your eyes open for that.
Date: 02/04/16 08:25 pm Title: Happy Halloween
Thank you for making it turn out that way. Dominant aggressive Tom is hot.
I am glad you liked it. I was a little worried that people wouldn't like it or I would be considered more twisted than I already am after the story Forced. I am glad some people are taking a liking to it. Look for more one-shots in the future.