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Reviewer: keira Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/16 09:47 am Title: Chapter 9

At least! I waited so much!! Thanks...

Author's Response: I am so sorry for keeping you waiting like this. Thanks tho for sticking around and reading the last chapter!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/16 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

I enjoyed reading this story a lot :)

Author's Response: Thx dear <3

Reviewer: LuckyDeathStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/16 07:21 am Title: Chapter 9

This was a sweet end to an interesting story

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I glad you kept on reading

Reviewer: keira Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/16 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 8

Please don{t let us wait too much for a new chapter! I am completely crazy about it!

Author's Response: I am so sorry for letting you wait so long and putting this story on hiatus but I am back now, hopefully soon wirh a new chapter

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/16 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thx <3

Reviewer: LuckyDeathStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/16 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 8

This was a cute chapter. The twins need this- need each other, if they're going to get through this

Author's Response: Hello dear , yes I totally agree. They need each other but they first need to built on their trust and get to know each other properly again. They went through so much hurt and pain, its gonna take a lot of work. Thanks for reading on and leaving comments, that always makes my day <3

Reviewer: keira Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/16 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 7

great!!! as I thought...

Author's Response: Thank you :-)

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/16 04:26 am Title: Chapter 7

Amazing chapter. So much drama, so much emotion. Such sad and traumatic memories. Yay for Tom showing David he can't mess with Bill, and yay for Bill standing up to David and telling him how things are going to change. The twins are now going to be loving and supporting each other like they should have been all those years if it hadn't been for their monster of a father. And the Gs will benefit too from happy twins and a manager who can't bully them like he used to. Great stuff. Love Helen xx

Author's Response: Thank you dear Helen, I am so happy you like how things turned out. From now one things are going to change, David better buckle up haha :-) a vacation is exactly what they need to get over all of this.

Reviewer: LuckyDeathStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/16 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow. Poor kids

Author's Response: Yeah nobody should ever go through such horrible events :-(

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/16 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

Their memories are sad, but I love how their relationship is getting better and better...

Author's Response: Yes indeed, sad memories. But now they know what happend at least (or Tom does) so it will be easier for Bill to trust him again. Thanks for leaving a comment :-)

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/16 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thx :-) glad you liked it

Reviewer: keira Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/16 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 6

I think their father hit them for been gay. Tom get scared and try to probr he was not gay, avoiding to Bill and the real feeling that had for him. It is?

Author's Response: You are a little right (Check out the new chapter, posting it now). Its not so much that their father things it is gay, more like he thinks they are some kind of freaks for having such an deep and intense relationship.

Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/16 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 6

I just noticed that I was behind on this story - now I'm all caught up. Yay! I sense a trip to the Maldives coming up!

Author's Response: I am so happy you want to continue reading this. And yeeeees you are absolutely right, I am so obvious :-) but first a little drama Hahahaha

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/16 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thx dear

Reviewer: LuckyDeathStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/16 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

Something happened that must have been so awful that they had gotten a trauma which led to the burial of all their childhood memories

I'm pretty sure their dad came up, saw tom kissing bills cheek and took it as some "gay" thing and beat the snot out of them for it

Author's Response: You are pretty close :-)

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/16 03:14 am Title: Chapter 6

That was an amazing chapter! A little sad, but also beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you dear :-) yes the whole thing is sad, thinking about what they lost and how much pain it caused.

Reviewer: keira Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/16 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 5

Please continue when you can. I am crazy about this story!

Author's Response: Oh so lovely to hear that! I am sorry it took me so long but now the next chapter is online :-)

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/16 07:20 am Title: Chapter 5

I'm loving this story. I'm really intrigued to know what happened to the twins so that they both repressed memories of their childhood and Tom started a hate campaign against Bill.

Author's Response: Hello dear, I promise you will find out in the next chapter that will hopefully be up in a couple of days!

Reviewer: LuckyDeathStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/16 11:59 am Title: Chapter 5

.... Wow. I feel so bad for these kids. I can't wait to read more. I have a few ideas about what's going on but I don't wanna say anything until I see whether or not it's confirmed

Author's Response: Hellooooo and sorry for the suuuperlate replyrnOh now I am curious and would like to hear your ideas. rnTell me if its what you thought it was when I post the next chapter please.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/16 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 5

Loved it :)

Author's Response: Thx dear!

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