Date: 10/23/16 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 26: New Year's Eve - Berlin, Germany
Reading the stuttering parts was quite weird.
Author's Response:
even weirder to write! thank you so much for reading!
Date: 01/01/16 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 4: Travel Brings Power & Love Back Into Your Life - Rumi, Luxembourg City, Luxembourg
Yay I have another chapter to read! I know Harlow has a lot of problems and to be in a popular band must take a lot of courage on her part. On to the next chapter. :)
Date: 01/01/16 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 3: Week One, Done - Amsterdam, The Netherlands
Well you better love me then because I'm reviewing every chapter. lol On to the next one because I can! :)
Date: 01/01/16 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2: Rehearsals - Hamburg, Germany
Hmmmm, I agree, maybe the tour won't be a good thing. Wow, Bill sure has a temper. Poor Harlow! :)
Date: 12/23/15 09:50 pm Title: SECTION I, EUROPE Chapter 1: October 2018, Washington D.C.
I'm liking the story. I'm a bit confused but that just makes me want to see what's in the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: whats confusing you? anything i can try to help?
Date: 12/20/15 08:31 pm Title: Prologue: 20/20 Hindsight
Good start. Some grammatical things but I'm gonna stick with it and see where it goes. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what sort of grammar things? (probably a result of NaNo) Thanks!!!! MORE TH to come
Date: 11/06/15 09:14 pm Title: Prologue: 20/20 Hindsight
I think exactly what I thought about this the first time I read this. Happy NANO. You're welcome for writing this damn review.
Sincerely,
Your roommate/sister/nano writing buddy/I swear to god/I'm so mad/you're damn right this is a long ass review/I hope you're happy.