Date: 10/08/17 07:05 pm Title: 11. This is fucked up
I wonder if he’s going to try and get them to stop Bill, though I feel like from the sounds of it they can’t stop him. Poor naive Tomi, but I guess he’s reacting the way most normal people would if they were told magic exists...
Author's Response: We'll have to wait and see, maybe they can come up with something.
Date: 10/08/17 03:22 pm Title: 11. This is fucked up
oh dear, the deaths of bill's parents are somehow related to something he did? poor imp.
dude, i feel so bad for georg. i know you mentioned it has it's compensations, but their village still doesn't seem to be an ideal place to live. especially if one might end up married off on some witch's whim!
Author's Response: Let's find out!
Yeah, I'm sure it works out fine for some people, but for someone like Georg, it's not the best place to live.
Date: 10/07/17 02:47 am Title: 10. I'll think about it
There were so many things I loved about this idk what to do with myself! Seriously. This is wonderful!! I love Bill's argument "but he's pretty!" I LOVE IT. it is so me. I can so relate. He is adorable. And the nightsky?!??!?!?+??+ giiiiirl. You are a genius. Have I ever told you that? You are a genius!
Author's Response: But he IS pretty! Can't argue with that!
Date: 10/07/17 01:21 am Title: 10. I'll think about it
Wait what happened last time?!?!? Really whatta cliffhanger! Lol well this was good. I hope he does seduce Tom! Or maybe even gets close to seducing him...
Excited this was updated!
Author's Response: We'll get to know eventually! So much more to happen! (which wasn't planned but now the story has decided to be a whole lot more complicated than I had first planned lol. Good job, me.)
Date: 10/05/17 05:30 pm Title: 9. This isn't real
---There had to be, because magic was not the answer. ---
I love this, it's such a perfect summary of how determined Tom is to not believe it.
--- if it hadn’t been for the fact that he’d just made some kind of deal out of going outside, he would’ve turned straight back around and gotten back into the warm house.---
... I have done this so many times hahahaha
---“It’s true,” Bill grinned. “Spooky, huh?” ---
BILL I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
And then he went and did something creepy 😂😅
Someone needs to remind him that doing whatever you want is fine as long as it doesn't hurt others, and he maaaaay just be on the road to chasing Tom off. Unless, of course, he discovers a reason for not wanting to chase Tom off 8D
I love how weird and witchy Bill is, though, you're doing such a good job of making him appear one and at ease with his magic abilities, and in perfect control of them. That's the really difficult part with supernatural fic, making the supernatural appear natural in their own world, if you know what I mean, and you're doing that here.
And now I need answers. Go write, chop chop! -nudges-
Author's Response: Stubborn, stubborn Tom <3
Haha, soon enough, someone might ;)
Ahhh I'm so glad you think so! Writing the magic is SO HARD and I've been struggling like crazy with it. It's not an easy thing to do for sure.
Thank youuuuu <3
Date: 10/05/17 05:22 pm Title: 8. Plaything
BUT THIS DOESN'T EXPLAIN HOW GEORG AND GUSTAV KNOW HIM
It's like there's something personal between them and Bill, you know? Like he's played his game on one or even both of them, too. Hmmmmm.
Also I love the idea of Bill being more powerful than regular witches. I wonder what his backstory is now. Damn you, Sandra, you've really done it again. I'm hooked. Fuck.
(I love you though < 3)
Author's Response: HAHAHHAHAHA
I'm glad you're hooked, because I'll need you to ever finish this thing lmao!
I love you <3
Date: 10/05/17 05:19 pm Title: 7. What did he do?
---“We need to talk to you about witches.”---
Casual conversation starter right there xD
Okay but I'm super super curious now, HOW DO THEY KNOW BILL????
Author's Response: They surely know how to bring it up gently lmao!
WELL! I don't know leave me alone
Date: 10/05/17 05:17 pm Title: 6. Magic
----he had sure as hell never felt like his brain went on vacation just because someone smiled at him. ---
"his brain went on vacation" hahahaha, I love that
---“That if I want you, I’ll have you.” ---
okay but this is such a Rich Tom line and it's confusing me that it's Bill saying this! 😂😂😂
Okay Bill was a little bit creepy in this chapter, even though I love that he just outright says it's magic and Tom is probably not gonna want to believe that. But using magic to make someone want you is uncool, Bill! -wags finger- Just be your natural charming self, that'll be enough ;)
In all seriousness, I'm super curious about their next meeting and if Tom is going to tell his friends about this!
Author's Response: Bill's a bit creepy, but he's also adorable and we'll get to know him better and I bet we're all gonna fall for him because he's... well, he's Bill lol.
Thank youuuuu <3