Date: 02/12/16 06:13 am Title: Three
This is wonderful, I can't wait for more! (but it sounds like I'll be waiting awhile if you're anything like me 😂).
Author's Response: Haha, my writing wheels do indeed turn slowly. But I'm encouraged by reviews, of course. I'm actually working on chapter four right now. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^
Date: 02/10/16 05:19 pm Title: Three
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Date: 02/10/16 03:35 pm Title: Three
I'm so jealous of your writing, it's all so nicely described. Also loved the last lines, they are such sweet brothers.
Thank you for the update! I'll be waiting for more!
Author's Response: Well, *I'm* jealous of how fast you're able to write, hehe! Oh my gosh, I'm so glad you enjoyed the last few lines, because I was feeling really insecure with how to end the chapter. Didn't want it to be too cheesy. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^
Date: 02/10/16 11:08 am Title: Three
Ugh, so jealous of your detailed descriptions. I can easily immerse in the atmosphere and surroundings. As I read I felt wow, you're so knowledgeable of the customs and ways. Like you lived there. I even learn stuff. Love it. Hope you keep posting. It's a delight to read, and I just have to know what you come up with next :)
Author's Response: Lol, it just occurred to me that I think all of us authors are jealous of each other for various things XD Because I'm jealous of your sci-fi world-building ^^ And I might've actually gone overboard with the background research, but it makes me so happy that you feel the authenticity!rnI will indeed keep posting! Slowly, but I WILL finish this! ^^ Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/10/15 05:31 pm Title: Two
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Date: 10/10/15 09:00 am Title: Two
Nooo not boring! I love it! It's so different and so far I really like your characters. Also your writing style is to die for, I really enjoy the way you work with words.
I'll be waiting for more!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you so much! *hug* I've always felt my style is sort of clunky. And I try to put as few OCs in my fics as possible because I want to focus on the band, but I'm glad you find them pleasant anyway :) Gah, I'll try to write faster, lol.
Date: 10/03/15 11:38 am Title: One
Great start! The imagery is amazing and I'm quite awed at your writing skills. The action goes smoothly, I can imagine it perfectly in my head. I love the details in it, and how you describe the weapons, and the reaction of the creatures. Simply great!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you so much *blush* I was wary of writing an action scene for the first time. The second chapter is already done, but I'm still in the process of writing the third, lol.
Date: 10/02/15 06:02 pm Title: One
I already like this story :D
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! :)
Date: 10/02/15 03:10 pm Title: One
I'm torn.. I don't really like twincest, but vampires... I'll give it a chance but making to promises to read it all. Great first chapter though! It made me really curious and excited for more :)
Author's Response: Lol, I'm sometimes iffy about twincest-related myself. I can promise it won't be too over the top. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/02/15 01:41 am Title: One
very promising beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^