Date: 03/12/23 07:02 pm Title: Part One
I have left a review on another story of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 04/26/20 11:02 am Title: Part Fifteen
I am so happy for Tom, I get Bill to trust him and accept the true love he wants to offer him. Hopefully one day after having an intimate meeting they can take a shower and smoke a cigarette, without any procedural impediments, both will be free (tears are running ...) because they definitely deserve it ...
Write the epilogue please !!
Thanks for this wonderful story !!
Date: 04/26/20 12:33 am Title: Part Thirteen
I am a new reader and I am very happy to read your story. I am sorry for your complications but it is good to know that you and your baby are well and that things have improved. Thank you for coming back to continue with this beautiful story, you really suffer when a great story is paralyzed and reviewed and there is no update and it is like that for months and even years, it is very sad, and when the story is taken up again it is a great happiness, because finally it can have an ending and a closing, which is a great relief, for all this, thank you very much for coming back.
Date: 04/25/20 10:40 pm Title: Part Eight
Bill also has a history and sad until now ... and apparently he is a cat lover and that his pet was drowned, he must have created in him sadness, rage and helplessness for not being able to save him, maybe ??? I want to get to know Bill more on his human side and personal. Thank you!!
Date: 04/25/20 10:24 am Title: Part Six
Bill made his way under Tom's door and I think Tom got under Bill's skin too, although the latter doesn't know how to recognize it. There is already some news of Tom's crime, but details are still missing. Thank you!!!
Date: 04/25/20 09:57 am Title: Part Five
Tobi ??? that it will be up to you, I hope you will not come out with something ... I really want to know why Bill is in prison and so is Tom ...
Date: 04/25/20 09:33 am Title: Part Four
Bill has many faces ?? I'm just like Tom, direct Saky who also can't read between the lines ... It seems that Bill earned a bad reputation in prison, but as Tom says, it is prison and there it is time to put on the best possible face to survive and even more so for a vulnerable boy like Bill.
Date: 04/24/20 11:35 pm Title: Part Three
Oops, Bill is already attacking ... and Tom is all nervous and worried. It will be that Saky opens his mouth and betrays that warden, if he does not harm Bill.
Date: 04/24/20 10:47 pm Title: Part One
I honestly did not read it because of the warnings (rape, abuse ...) the stories with those warnings are usually very sad or tragic, but the clarifications you put me are encouraged and here I am reading. I go to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi, yeah the warnings aren't so clear until you actually click into the story and see the story notes, but I didn't want to not put them and have people come at me with "you mentioned rape", etc. Sorry for the confusion, but I hope that's all now cleared up and you enjoy the remainder of this story. Thank you < 3
Date: 04/13/20 03:14 pm Title: Part Fifteen
AHHHHH!!!! this ending was absolutely brilliant. god, I love your style and words and details. fucking amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 04/13/20 01:05 pm Title: Part Fourteen
Man, this is... god. So beautiful. You have SUCH a way with words that just makes everything flow so wonderfully, and it doesn't feel like work at all to read. There's so many lines I want to pull out of here and print them out and frame them because they're just wonderful and artistic and lovely! I cannot -wait- to read the final chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of this wonderful praise! And I'll get it up asap < 3
Date: 03/29/20 12:23 pm Title: Part Fourteen
Soo, I have never read this fic when it was first published, I just found it in the "recent stories" and decided to give it a go and OH BOY, I'm glad I did!
I loved Bill's character from day one, you could really see he went through a lot and had to build this persona to protect himself and fight.
I'm also really sad to see there's only one chapter left? They just REALLY opened up to one another and I thought so much more was coming?? Like I totally wanted to know more and see the story develop :( so sad!
Anyway, I'll wait for the end I guess!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad to hear that you decided to eventually give this a go, also really happy that I was able to build Bill's character up so well for you, too. I'm so sorry to disappoint you with how abrupt and short this story may have seem. It was literally supposed to be a two-shot and evolved into this from there. I think my intention when first writing this was to show Tom accept himself and the situation he's now in, understand Bill and his complexities then eventually have them both end up on the same page as one another after so much misunderstanding, etc. I haven't honestly given much thought on what could happen next for them, but it has given me something to think about. Thank you!
Date: 03/24/20 07:53 pm Title: Part Fourteen
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 03/23/20 10:22 am Title: Part Fourteen
Oh, darling, I cannot wait for the next chapter! I just read everything and i've missed and caught up and it made me realize how much I've missed this. So you gotta give me more!
Bill doesn’t even bat an eyelid at the loudness of Tom’s voice, he simply just smiles. “Why can’t you just accept that I don’t have feelings for you?”
“Why can’t you just accept that you do have feelings for me?” -- I loved this exchange. Honestly. It was just something about it that really gave me a good impression!
So yeah. I need more. This whole exchange where Bill explained stuff from his past and Tom tried to make him see that he is different was really, truly great! You've done well and I am glad you are back!
Author's Response: Thank you and it's so good to be back, I can assure you < 3
Date: 03/13/20 07:49 am Title: Part One
Oh my god , I can't ,I've been waiting for this for a long time it's just incredible ,I love you
Author's Response: Love you, too. Thank you for following and sticking with me < 3
Date: 02/28/20 03:51 am Title: Part Thirteen
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
I am really happy that you are back
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 02/23/20 01:51 pm Title: Part Thirteen
So glad to see this updated! :)
Author's Response: So happy to have updated and finished it, believe me! It feels like it's been a long time coming! Thank you < 3
Date: 02/23/20 07:52 am Title: Part Thirteen
To be honest I never expected to ever see you back here, but I'm happy you are back!
I also followed macys spectaculary start into life on facebook and gosh, this little peanut ... unbelievable she is so healthy and big now :D
Author's Response: Thank you lovely! And Macey's doing so unbelievably well < 3
Date: 02/23/20 07:09 am Title: Part Thirteen
So happy you are back!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to be back < 3
Date: 02/23/20 05:17 am Title: Part Thirteen
😍😍
Author's Response: < 3