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Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/20 08:57 am Title: Chapter 14

Army!! oh ... I hope you find yourself very well in your new career.
I hate doing resumes and even more going through interviews ...
Success in your work and family.

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/20 08:11 am Title: Chapter 7

Congratulations for your kids!!!!

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/20 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh!!! Congratulations for your baby.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/15 09:36 pm Title: Prologue

lol

Reviewer: Bewitched Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/15 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

I don't know why, but I smell trouble. I want to read more, and see what will happen. I think that this love will be good, but not now. Put something soon.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/15 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/15 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh wow goodluck!!! The army huh bet that was tough!!! Loved the chapter tho!!!

Author's Response: Yeah. It requires you to have to learn things fast and learn to adapt. And thank you.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/15 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 14

Awh, they're so cute :) And Tom, telling him that you love him is not exactly taking things slow ;) hihi :) Great chapter again :)

Author's Response: He just needs time to be able to actually get down and dirty with Bill.

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/15 02:44 pm Title: Prologue

No, I don't think it's lame. For six years you had one of the best jobs ever. Protecting and serving your country. It may be scary switching but you definitely have more experience now then when you were fresh out of high school. I'm sure you'll do fine :)

Author's Response: I'm scared mostly of leaving behind the person that I am while I'm here. Being in this uniform, doing the job I do, is a huge part of who I am.

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/15 12:34 am Title: Chapter 14

I loved the chapter and how at the end Tom just kinda let go of his fears and went for it.

Good luck on your career transition! I hope it goes well :D

Author's Response: Thank you. and I'm actually scared. I joined right out of high school, so I've never had any other job. Lol. Lame of me, right?

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/15 06:33 am Title: Chapter 13

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Kvitka Heo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/15 02:43 am Title: Chapter 12

OMG!! They confessed to each other!! That was so cute and sweet, i love the way Tom just blurted out, and also Bill`s response.
Congrats for you baby first word.

And by the way, do you speak Spanish? because i thought i read a comment in espaņol.

I am from Argentina by the way!!

Author's Response: Indeed I do. This is why my baby doesnt talk much. I speak to her spanish and english, and her father speaks to her in navajo and english. She understands alot, she doesnt say much. But anyways, yeah, I wanted Tom to be...desperate to tell Bill how he fell, so as to not lose him.

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/15 12:17 am Title: Chapter 13

Literally all I am thinking now is GIMME MORE!!!!! GIMME MOOOOOORRREE!!!!! Ah! How will it work out?!?!

Author's Response: I love that Tom kissed Bill almost as a thank you.

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/15 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 13

Finally!

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Loved how your daughter learned the word "Gold".

Author's Response: Thank you. And yeah, that's really the only song she enjoys playing out loud and dancing too. Lol

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/15 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 13

Awh, their first kiss, so cute :) It will be hard at first especially with Tom being in love with a man for the first time, but I'm sure they manage it together :) Great chapter :) And I hope you had a great day yesterday :)

Author's Response: It rained, so no fireworks. :-( but my daughter and I made cupcakes from scratch. :-)

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/15 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 13

Awww...beautiful :) My favourite part in every story! :D But they didnīt talk too much :D

By the way, I read in the last chapter that your daughter is 22 months old. My daughters are also 22 months from each other. I have to tell you...the worst time was when the younger daughter started to move and take toys from the older... Now they are 6 and 4 and...well, itīs still the same :DDD

Author's Response: I hope its not the case here. I have a girl, the older baby, and a little boy, the 2 month old. Hopefully they're into different things, interest wise.

Reviewer: Bewitched Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/15 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 13

Honestly, I wonder have this is going to be for the two of them. I really want to see what will gonna happen, so please put something soon.

Author's Response: Thats why I focused in them talking about it.

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/15 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ahh man they are sooo cute 💜 ah happy fourth of July I wish we had a day like that here in England

Author's Response: You do. It was yesterday, it's called "Treason day". Lol. Kidding. It was raining here, so we just had fun baking and cooking. Not many fire works here this year.

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/15 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 12

Ah man this chapter was cute 💜 ahah that's funny. But three languages woooow!!!

Author's Response: Its cute when she shakes her butt to tokio hotel.

Reviewer: Kvitka Heo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/15 01:59 am Title: Chapter 11

wow!! so nice, please some more!! Tom is in love with Bill, they just need to be honest with each other!

Author's Response: I love how Tom gets mad and cuts him off, then turns shy again. Lol

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