Date: 04/21/23 12:37 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 08/12/16 01:51 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
I can not with you and your writing; I feel rather speechless once again. I simply ADORE the way you write. I have read almost each of your stories - 'cause I think I never read the Halloween one at least - and many of them YEARS ago, but I guess I have never left a proper comment. Shame on me!
I have trouble trying to put my thoughts into words but I'll try my best. I saw someone above on the comments referring to you as the "classic twincest writer of this fandom", and I think that was well said!
Especially nowadays, the way you write twins is so REAL. You write them the way one would imagine they are in real life; combining their characteristics with different details and a plot that makes the reader actually think this COULD be the reality. The way you include things from their real lives into your stories - e.g. something Bill has posted on his Instagram or mentions about tour/CD/etc - makes it all so realistic. There are few stories that makes one think that hey, this makes sense, twins could easily be together like this. And I LOVE that. I also like the way you include Ria - you write her as Tom's "girlfriend" but with an explanation that actually feels possible and does not interfere with twincest. (That sentence hopefully makes some sense to you I have trouble forming the thought into words)
Also, your stories are usually oneshots and contain a lot of smut (LOVE IT) but still, you have a talent of building up a story and plot behind it all in just one chapter - I adore the way there is always a story and feelings which make the reader more attached. Not to even mention how hot and perfect your smut is, haha. ;) You never disappoint.
Okay, now to this story.. I felt so, so bad for Tom in the beginning, it almost made my heart ache. Talking about characters that feel realistic.. Tom was so perfect in this. I liked the way you started this off with the feelings they had after filming FIA, and the worry Tom had for his baby brother. Hadn't thought about that before, to be honest, but now.. makes one wonder how it affected them. Aaaaand of course, the smut was deliciously detailed! What's better than Tom licking and/or fingering Bill!? (Well, the obvious, but apart from that.) It is also nice to have more stories which focus more on the licking part; often it is over rather quickly.
I am sucker for happy endings, so your hopeful endings make me really glad. And well, emotional at times, too. In your stories, you bring up nicely the way they do realize the problems they'd face if they were together, but also the way they are ready to get through them together. Those two belong together so bad. >_>
To conclude, no one writes the twins the way you do. I realize I kept repeating the same things, but I am way too tired (and caught up in thinking about the twins haha) to read this comment through. Anyway, thanks for the many moments I have spent reading your stories, and I hope you will keep writing because you are damn talented. Greetings from Finland xx
Author's Response: This is one of the best reviews ever, thank you so much! When I started writing again I had no idea how it would be received and I am just glad that people are happy to read about current twins as they were to read about teenage twins (which will always be my favourite I admit) and while most people have moved on to just AU I cannot leave these babies alone lol. It's the bond that does it for me and that's what keeps TOLL alive for me *_* P.S I was out with a friend the other night and we were talking about where we next want to go travelling because we both want to go back to Europe and I was like FINLAND, I WANNA GO TO FINLAND. :D
Date: 08/25/15 11:14 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
OMG, so sweet :D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Date: 05/24/15 02:57 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
This was perfect. I didn't want to read it at first because I knew it would hurt but then I just decided that, so long as you were breaking my heart as beautifully as you do everything else, it was fine. And it was so much more than fine!!! Beautiful story! You made me cry, laugh, squeal, blush - the whole deal. Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad it did more than just break your heart lol.
Date: 04/14/15 02:32 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
Oh God, so sad, touchy and romantic.
It would be so nice if they could just give up everything and go live on a desert island, don't? But I know that as we get older and older things around us keep attract us in our lives. Will getin more complicated. You can not just disappear or just ignore the world around us. Still, I hope they find a moment to be properly together again as they deserve, we can't live for others, just not worth it. And I hope you write a sequel*-*
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope they find all the happiness in the world :)
Date: 04/09/15 08:18 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
*cries in a corner*
That was one of the most amazing stories I've read in a while. Also I love the twins are 'actual' in this story. It's really rare to see this but I love it. It's something new in something old and I'm in love with it. Thank you for it. (Also this story seems so real I kinda wonder if one of the twins have written it ;)) haha ^^ anyway, love it!
Author's Response: Ya I am actually the twins, ssshhhh don't tell anyone. Thanks for your lovely review!
Date: 04/08/15 05:08 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
I feel like this realy happens! Loved it :)
Author's Response: I feel like that too :) thanks!
Date: 04/07/15 05:25 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
I've been reading this on and off throughout the day and godddddd it's delicious all over again *_*
Never ever stop providing us with your wonderful, perfect writing of our favorite twins. HAyLEY POWER!
Author's Response: Thank yooooou lover 😘
Date: 04/07/15 11:11 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
wow, half my review didn't come up! I tried to make a heart thingy and I think that did it lol, anyway, loved the story, it is very well written, I had a huge smile on my face as I read it and then thought, now this is why I love fanfic! lol. It fullfilled my need for MOAR! so thanks. :)
Date: 04/07/15 11:07 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
This was really good!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 04/06/15 08:27 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
Loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 04/06/15 11:03 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
This is really well written, and I love the balance between emotion and smut, with a tinge of fluff. Definitely fucked with my feelings a little bit, and +10 for the rimming, which is important and should be included in everything, in my humble opinion. ;)
Author's Response: I am with you on the rimming, that's ALL it was meant to be but they had other ideas :)rnrnThank you! ^_^
Date: 04/06/15 07:27 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
OMG It 's so good to read from you again!!!! O.O This is so sad and cute and sexy and emotional at the same time...but more than that it's so realistic! I'd never stop saying how much I missed this kind of stories (and the twins) in the last years...and I find that there's so much material to write about lately...the new Bill&Tom are SO inspiring, in a completely different way than 2008-9!!! So...just thank you a lot...and I hope you're going to write many new fics in the next months because well, let's face it, TOLL is absolutely the best!!!! ;)
Thank you again and sorry for the bad english! ;)
Author's Response: Your English is great :) Thank you so much <3 I am finding them very inspiring!!
Date: 04/06/15 03:52 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
Oh man..... I love the emotion and the story in this one. It feels so real. They feel so human. It's heartbreaking. You totally took me on this ride with them. You're an amazing writer. ...Two new stories from you in one night. I'm really glad to see you're still around, and I'm loving the new more mature twins in your fics. Just... ugh, I felt this one. It's so raw. I love your Tom. Really well done. Love this so much it's hard to put into words. :) :) Thank u for writing!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3 I feel even more in love with their twinny love than ever before ^_^
Date: 04/06/15 02:44 am Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
Sex and fluff are life. :)
Author's Response: I like to think so! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 04/05/15 11:11 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
Well shit, my hearts didn't up.
Author's Response: I understood <3
Date: 04/05/15 11:10 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
BREAKING GLASSES AND SHIT, YASSSSSSS.
Ok, I don't know if I can even begin to write a proper review. I loved this. LOVED. d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039; The love, the sex, the angst, the REALNESS. It utterly WRECKED me. In a good way. I swear, Hayley, the way you write twins makes me CRY for these boys. I just want to snatch them up & run away to an island so their love can be FREE. Aaaand so I can watch uninterrupted, ahem. It was so hot and sexy, and loving and romantic, with just enough gut-wrenching angsty moments to make my throat get all tight, and just overall PERFECT.
And, as you know, TWIN RIMMING IS MY KRYPTONITE. What started out as a casual conversation between friends on the ultimate hotness that is Tom eating Bill's perfect ass, turned into this LOVELY work of ART.
You were my FIRST Bill/Tom fanfic (A Simple Arrangement) - I lost my twincest virginity to you. :).
You slay me. Every. Single. Time. And I am so glad you are writing twins again and sharing with us. d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
Author's Response: <3 <3 <3 I love our twin conversations about rimming and Billpussy. May they continue!
Date: 04/05/15 09:13 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
All hail the return of one of the pillars of THF! But seriously, thank you for this. I watched the video and had to take some time to digest it and then it hit me - how did Tom handle the whole thing? While that was not the focus of the story,I like that you touched on it. Loved it!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! rnrnOh man, I must admit I was thinking about Tom the whole time I watched the video lol. Hopeless. <3
Date: 04/05/15 04:30 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
I like fluffy. Fluffy is good. So is rimming. Damn, girl! *_*
Author's Response: ^_^ twin rimming is one of my favourite things. Thank you :)
Date: 04/05/15 02:15 pm Title: I Want To Lick You Everwhere
Amazing and a little bit sad. I love how it is everything like in their real life. It seem s to be so genuine...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :)