Date: 12/27/15 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank youuu! I hope you'll like the new version even better ^^ ........when it's finally up I mean. o_O
Date: 07/02/15 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
Happy to see an update. I don't think Tom will be able to hold out for long with Bill so determined to get laid. I'm dying to know what Bushido has Tom doing for him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hah, but Tom is pretty stubborn too. n_n Thanks for reading~
Date: 06/28/15 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Date: 04/25/15 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
looking forward to more
Date: 04/25/15 03:01 am Title: Chapter 11
This story is reall good so far!! Plz write soon
Author's Response: Thank you! :) We've already started writing the next chapter, it'll hopefully be up faster than this one... ^^
Date: 03/29/15 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
Woah THAT WAS SO GOOD Jesús christ I barely started to read this story but I'm already hooked update soon I can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: We'll try to get it up as soon as possible. Unfortunately Onyx is busy this week, so can't say when it'll be done... Anyway thank you for the review. :)
Date: 03/26/15 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh no they do horrible things to the boys there :'( But greatly written :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 03/26/15 06:49 am Title: Chapter 10
Omg branded like cattle😨
Date: 03/26/15 01:08 am Title: Chapter 10
Omg poor Bill!!! Plz write soon !! This story is really good
Author's Response: Thank you! We're in the process of writing the next chapter. :)
Date: 03/17/15 10:56 am Title: Chapter 9
MOOOOROOOOROOEOEOEOEOEOOEOE oops i mean MOOOOREEE
Date: 03/16/15 09:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Omg I wonder what will happen !!! Plz write soon
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. :) We're currently working on the next chapter.
Date: 03/12/15 05:19 am Title: Chapter 9
Well, now I´m terrified too...
Author's Response: Haha x) thank you for reading!
Date: 03/12/15 05:05 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh Oh, can't wait to read what happens next :) great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed!
Date: 03/11/15 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ohhhh my gosh so excited for the next update!!!!! :)
Author's Response: Which will hopefully be soon... ^^ Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/03/15 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
So I am completely in love with this fic!!! I've seen it multiple times but didn't really get what it was about.bu boy was I wrong this is amazing!!! I freaking love your writing style and I read all 8 chapters today! Only break I took was when I was in class hell I was even in the library reading it!!! I freaking love this and can't wait until the next update!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah looking at the summary now it doesn't say much about the story, hm... Anyway thank you for reading and reviewing! We're currently working on chapter 9 so it should be up by tomorrow. :)
Date: 03/03/15 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great chapters :D I'm scared that more bad things are going to happen :( And I hope that Bill is going to lose his virginity to Tom one day, I don't want Bill to get raped before that day :$ And after that day I don't want that either of course xD
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you for your reviews, they're really appreciated. ^3^
Date: 03/03/15 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
I only just found this and have read from the beginning. You really should have more reviews for this story. Bill and Tom's relationship is so damned sweet and loving. I'm looking forward to seeing where things go for them now they've hooked up with Bushido and the gang...oh, and I'm hoping that eventually something really bad will happen to Jorg as payback for how he's treated Tom.
Author's Response: Thank you! You'll just have to wait and see. ;)
Date: 03/03/15 11:05 am Title: Chapter 8
Interesting. I read it all today. But I hate when they are hurt...
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :)rn[I hate it too but Onyx is heartless x)]
Date: 03/02/15 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hiii < 3
I'm just swinging by to say that I really love this so far. It's heart breaking and gut wrenching, because nobody should have to put up with this type of abuse, much less from their own father. Tom is really strong, but even the most strongest people crack at some point and you've highlighted that so well with this chapter in particular. But despite the dark parts of this story; there's still some light too, which is amazing. There's something so refreshing and pure about Bill and Tom's friendship/relationship in this, it seems so sacred and that's so beautiful to read. I'd say it kinda balances out all the sad, abusive angst and I think you've got the balance on point.
(~I also wanted to say that on the first chapter of this I noticed a sexual/non-con scene between Tom and his father. I think it's best that you add that in as a side pairing, because somebody may come to read this and won't be expecting it as it isn't listed as a prior warning. Not everybody can handle that pairing and I don't want you to get into trouble if people are offended/upset by it. Just a friendly warning, anywho~)
I love this anyway, regardless of pairing and warnings, it's such a beautifully written story and I'm excited to read more of it. Thank you for uploading this here ^-^ < 3
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words and advice. ;_; b29; We really appreciate it!