Date: 07/29/14 11:37 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh~ things are getting good.
Date: 07/28/14 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how Georg just put sugar in his coffee and drunk it.
Author's Response: lol i know!
Date: 07/21/14 01:42 pm Title: Poor Andreas
Jorg is so creepy and strange...in an interesting way. I don't know what he's up to, but it's definitely something dark and dangerous. Bill is treading in some dark water, and I don't know if he's going to leave his dad out of guilt. I feel like Jorg would guilt trip him into staying anyway, but who knows...well, you obviously haha. And the tension between Jorg and Tom is interesting, especially given the fact that Jorg calls Bill beautiful and tells him how much he looks like his mother...
I haven't read your other story Goodbye yet, but I will now! I love this story and all the other ones you've written so I hope you stay inspired to keep writing! :)
Date: 07/20/14 02:36 pm Title: Poor Andreas
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lord that was awesome in so many ways jorg s evil me loves this
Date: 06/25/14 09:12 pm Title: The New Apprentice
I hope Bill will move with Simone. Jorg and everything that is going on in his house is just too creepy. Bill needs to get out of there. Intriguing story!
Date: 06/24/14 02:13 pm Title: The New Apprentice
This story is so good. I already know it's going to have me completely riveted. Your imagery is fantastic and I'm so curious about what's going on! It seems like Bill is really starting to fall apart, and I'm pretty sure he's living in a house filled with murders. Bushido is definitely going to be a sketchy character. Great job!!!!! I am in love with this. You're so talented!
Date: 06/24/14 08:13 am Title: The New Apprentice
Loved it. Can't wait for more. I love how Bill seems to be cracking up, and his hallucinations.
Date: 06/16/14 03:03 pm Title: Death is Not a Choice
Oh wow this is fantastic. I love dark stories and you write this so well. Amazing job!!!! I'm excited for this!
Date: 06/15/14 11:28 pm Title: Death is Not a Choice
I like it. I want read more :-)
Date: 06/15/14 04:14 pm Title: Death is Not a Choice
I like the dark and demented feel the you put into the story, when you describe Bill's hallucinations or when Jorg says that death isn't a choice. Overall, very creative and unique plot. Never read anything like this so far.
Date: 06/15/14 04:05 pm Title: Death is Not a Choice
Nice, I'm diggin this fic already. I can't wait for more