Date: 03/12/23 07:03 pm Title: Prologue
I have left a review on another story of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! Tom was such a LITTLE SHIT (even though I guess it was for a good reason... pfff) but I am glad that they overcame it all!
Date: 04/21/20 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
I am so happy you had a chance to finish this. I think it ,ay have been done for a few weeks but I have finally been able to read it. I did go back and read the two-shot again, where it all began and re-read every chapter because it is so good! I loved the ending and you had me grinning from ear to ear! Stories like yours are what I love; long and full of so much! If you do write an epilogue that would be cool and if not, I think this ending was perfect as well :)
Thank you for this wonderful story! I hope you are staying safe and healthy!
Date: 04/18/20 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Write an epilogue, please. I love this story so much!
Date: 03/23/20 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Okay, so I finally caught up on this and Shannon, I am so going to need an epilogue!! for reals! You've done so well, I love how you actually came back and continued this! I mean, not just for this, I'm glad you're back in general! But FUCK. the way Tom finally told Bill how things are, how he said HE'S HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE WITH HIM! i mean??? yes??+ YES
so yes. I absolutely adore this, and i love how bill squishes him so hard. it makes me hopeful, and warm. but yes. I do want an epilogue!
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 03/20/20 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Okay, so I had to reread the entire thing, from Stay the Night and through the prologue and everything. Took me 3 days inbetween exam papers and whatnot, but holy fuck...
I had forgotten what a masterpiece this was, and I absolutely love it!
I have been in this position before (or something similar - best friend, but no feelings or sex, a lot of shit happened and we tried to find our way back together) so it's really hard to read, but it's so amazing.
Personally I would absolutely ADORE an epilogue - because it hurts me a lot how Bill has been so crushed and devastated, and how Tom has been trying to right all his wrongs - I would absolutely love an epilogue where there was no more awkwardness and no more avoiding each other and giving each other "space" and whatever. Just pure love and for Bill and Tom to finally be happy together the way they should've always been!
Amazing story. Simply Amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your kind words < 3
Date: 03/20/20 01:09 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
That last bit...so sweet :) I felt so much relief for Tom. Really hope there will be an epilogue!
Date: 03/19/20 10:36 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
Epilogue please !!! I am a new reader of yours and I like this story very much. They suffered a lot but after all the sadness they can now move on. I love soccer, so seeing Tom in that role is really great. Take care of yourself too, these are very hard times that we as humanity are going through and we must continue together and maintain hope. Thank you!!! beautiful history.
Date: 03/19/20 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
As long as you return and don't abandon history, there will always be followers here.
Date: 03/19/20 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I am so happy to have found your story !! It made me cry ... that breakup was really devastating ..... Now at last both begin to break and give in, hopefully they find the way back and can correct their mistakes and move on, but together ...
Date: 03/19/20 05:39 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
Omg stop! This last chapter was too adorable and I'm so glad I read the whole story... and its prequel... in one day... At least quarantine has been good for something! Honestly, I loved this whole story and I hope you write an epilogue but if you don't, this has been a wonderful ending all on it's own.
Date: 03/18/20 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Six
I am so sorry for your mother's health, strength and to continue fighting.
Date: 03/18/20 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Okay, so this is my first review on this story (I think)... I've been lurking and I'M SORRY and I was going to review when I got to the end but this chapter is so good, I had to say something. Ugh. I'm addicted. SO freaking GOOD!
Date: 03/18/20 10:24 am Title: Chapter Fifteen
I love seeing this story updated! I’ll write a coherent review later, but for now will just say that I love it!
Date: 01/29/18 02:15 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Please update this story. It is such a great story! It deserves to be finished.
Date: 01/30/17 01:14 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Okay, I don't know why I have missed a chapter. Probably 'cause I've been too busy writing my own stories to read much of anything. But anyway. I'm back now and going to read the chapter I've missed. I was sure I hadn't read all of the new chapters, but then turned out I only had one chapter to read. I'm kinda sad about that. But I will skim through the previous one's so it'll all come back to me. :D And I'm gonna say this now before I forget, but I really hope you'll be writing more of this soon, 'cause this story is just mindblowing!
Oooh, this one was so good! I'm so happy they're kinda friends again and taking baby steps so they can get back what they once had! And I'm happy Bill is finally showing his true self, the way he used to be and not hiding behind snipe comments, seductive actions and sarcasm. And seriously don't worry about the smut not being good, 'cause it's always awesome! I loved the smut in this chapter. I'm so sorry it took me such a long time to come and read this and there isn't really any good excuses. I've just completely forgotten about every story when working on my own. Anyway, I still love this story and hope to god you will update the last few chapters soon, 'cause I think bunch of us would be really happy!! :D Though if you don't update this, it's alright too, I mean I would be super bummed out, but the story kind of works like this too. I mean it would be nice to get closure and find out how Tom and Bill will be in the future, but this isn't the worst part to leave the story. But I would still love it to have the few chapters that you have planned to write! :D This story is seriously one of my favorites, though I won't add it to my favorites yet, 'cause I don't know if I've said it already but I kinda have a weird superstition that if I add a story to my favorites before it's finished, it'll never be finished XDD So I'll add this when it's completed :P Anyhoo, I think I've blabbered on enough, don't you? :D Great work once again and sorry I'm only reading this now and hopefully we'll hear from you soon! :DD
Date: 10/17/16 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Hi! Today marks a year since you last updated this and im losing hope about you ever doing it again but I still couldn't help reading this fic :'( I loved Stay the Night even if it broke my heart and this sequel is completely worth of it. I'm really grateful this latest chapter got a closure of sorts in case you're not planning to continue it - I can't even imagine my shock if you did end it on the chap before this one OMG - but I'd really really really love to know where this story was going in your mind. I'll keep an eye out hoping you'll finally finish it if you feel like it d84;d84;d84;
Date: 04/09/16 12:52 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
AAAHHH!!! Please next chapter!! I want to know what happens next
Date: 03/23/16 05:05 am Title: Prologue
I read the first part and before I am reading the second part I would like to know if that is still closed. Because I'm really curious if and how it’s going on with the two. Of course, I 'm hoping for a happy ending between Bill and Tom.