You must login () to review.
Reviewer: sarah99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/15 08:15 am Title: A New Mission

My goodness...please update woman.

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/15 05:22 pm Title: A New Mission

I live this so much. Please update soon? ;D

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/14 01:51 pm Title: A New Mission

eek! danger! the good guys will be okay, right?

Author's Response: Lol well it wouldn't be suspenseful if I told you! We'll see if two pirates can take down one mermaid king!

Reviewer: GeeWay23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/14 11:49 am Title: The Crying Angel

I did think this one would be the last chap!!!
More action yeeaaahhhh o/
more :D
Pearl is stuborn just like Bill hehehe

Author's Response: Thank you for stopping to review! haha i know, I thought this story was going to be over a long time ago, but it just got away from me! The next chapter should be the last, but I can't make any promises lol rnrnI find that funny you should say Pearl is more like Bill, because when I was writing, I actually tried to make Pearl more like Tom, and Kai like Bill lol Whoops I guess both Tom and Bill are stubborn when they want to be! Anyway, I'm glad you can see the fathers in the children:D

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/14 12:45 am Title: The Crying Angel

they are or were happy together with their children and now it is kinda destroyed. well...hopefully at the end they will be happy again

Author's Response: haha aww you sound so disappointed:( lol trust me, I won't end this story with Tom and Billa unhappy! They only have one more adventure!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/14 12:18 am Title: The Crying Angel

The twins sound adorable. And I love how Tom is still willing to do anything for Bill.

Author's Response: Aww thanks:) Yeah, I kinda wanted to make a point that even though Tom wants to be selfish and stay with his family rather than fight for the mermaids, he knows that Billa would never be happy with the knowledge that his people are on the verge of a civil war. He has to make his Billa happy, or he never will be!:)

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/14 12:13 pm Title: To the Death

After all the drama there is a happy moment ;) and they have twins ;) amazing

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Yeah they have been through a lot! It's not over yet but I'm planning on having them somewhere wonderful like a house by the sea at the end;) as for the twins, I was hoping to surprise people, pleasantly of course;) I hope it worked!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/14 11:40 pm Title: To the Death

i knew it!

Author's Response: Lol did you? I was hoping to shock someone! Oh well I had fun building up to it!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/14 04:12 pm Title: Compromises

not much of an mpreg fan, and not much of a mermaid fan, but i just read this whole thing and i can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Wow I'm glad you gave this story a chance! To be honest I was originally really freaked out by mpreg but I'm willing to give anything at least a try lol it really paid off with this story because I'm totally in love with it. Also, the story to me is more about family and unconditional love so sometimes the setting and conditions are just background:)

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/14 02:39 pm Title: Compromises

nice :) i can understand both but hopefully they would not have fights like that in the future. oh, Billa is hiding something?

Author's Response: Yes we'll see next chapter what is going on with the baby!;)

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/14 01:59 am Title: Harbinger

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME YOUR AMAZING OMG UPDATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNN =D

Author's Response: Wow thank you! I'm flattered:) I've been a little busy with my family for the easter holiday but I am determined to sit down tonight and get something accomplished!:) it helps keep me motivated too when I get such wonderful reviews;) thanks again!

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/14 09:54 pm Title: Harbinger

Rants so sad what Tom had before but now he has Bill and so much love to give him just like he would give Tom everything should be good. Bill can be human now so it also gives them ability to live far from water and have a nice life together with theirs baby.
Also he has now Jorg....that can be interesting chapter

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing faithfully!:) I thought it would be good to give Tom some more back story besides his merchant life; it kind of reveals his reasons for the way he is . . . And hopefully I'll be updating again soon and we'll see what happens with Jorg . . . or whoever it is;)

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/14 12:41 pm Title: The Deadly Lagoon

wow, this is for sure not a easy journal Bill and Tom have but i'm sure at the end it's gonna be worth all the drama

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, i intend to give them a very happy ending!:) Updates will be coming soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, i intend to give them a very happy ending!:) Updates will be coming soon!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/14 12:01 pm Title: The Deadly Lagoon

It's funny how in the end Tom sounds like a husler ... ............XD ok stupid me but yes you are absolutely right this has been my favorite chapter to read I hope you update soon this story is so amazing I can't wait for the next chappi

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I promise to update soon!

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/14 11:52 am Title: The Mermaid's Child

nice :) they really didn't have a easy way to get out of Bill's father. well maybe with time his father would agree to what happened.
i like it how Tom is taking care of Bill and his yet unborn child :) he's gonna be a good father

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! We've got a long way to go with jorg... But I'm glad you pointed out tom's fatherhood skills! It's one of ky favorite aspects of the story, which I intend to explore in more depth when the human/mermaid baby is born:)))

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/14 10:38 am Title: Siren Song

that was awesome :) i wonder why Bill acted like that but Tom definitely didn't mind...and now mermaid and pregnant...that's interesting :)

Author's Response: Yes that's the big question! We'll find out soon when I update... Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: Annie Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/14 04:36 am Title: Siren Song

Omg this is so exciting ^^ can't wait for more :3

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I promise I'll be updating soon with more exciting adventures for Billa and Tom!:)

Reviewer: judith182 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/14 02:02 am Title: Siren Song

I love it. Gosh its been so long since I've been hooked to a story. I can't wait to to read more. You are awesome.

Author's Response: Aww thank you:) I'm pretty hooked on it myself but it's really awesome to hear someone else is! I promise to update soon!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/14 01:44 am Title: Siren Song

OMFG.........XD THIS IS SO COOL I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT .....!!!!!!! I'm so excited please update soon beautiful girl .....I can't wait to read more and see where this story goes ........=D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your sweet review! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I promise I'll be updating very soon with more exciting adventures for Billa and Tom!;)

You must login () to review.