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Reviewer: Grisia San Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/18 10:24 pm Title: The release

It was really interesting and exciting work!!! Tom was such an awful kid, he really pissed me off. Bill was a little too kind and merciful that too irritated sometimes. Anis was too confident about himself, his God complex led him to this so had no sorry for him at all :p
I enjoyed so much for your story, thank you)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/15 05:59 am Title: Carnival and More

I wonder what Bill do when Anis comes back. The both boys live on the edge, and Tom doesn't know the whole truth. It is really weird he doesn't want to know more about what happened when Bill had disappeared for two months, where he had been, with whom and how he is planning to arrange his future. Silly boys:-)

Author's Response: Hey... Thanks alot for reading! :) umm... Let's hope he doesn't go mad over Bill. :( hope u r enjoying the story so far :)

Author's Response: Hey... Thanks alot for reading! :) umm... Let's hope he doesn't go mad over Bill. :( hope u r enjoying the story so far :)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 04:28 pm Title: The Truth

I am not getting Bill's intentions at all. He is clearly drawn to Tom and can't resist him, especially now when he is caring his child, but at the same time he carries on with his life as if nothing, says Bu that he has been missing him and stuff...? Does he even know what he wants? One day he wants to take care of Tom, and be close to him, then he acts like Bu's husband.... so bloody frustrating. Grrr.

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 04:11 pm Title: Dad

Messy, messy mess.

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Date: 01/18/15 03:58 pm Title: Sick

They are on better terms but I guess it won't last too long, huh?

Pooh is such a nice name for the baby to come:-)

Author's Response: Yeah... But u gotta find it out :) pooh is cute n soft, just like Bill, right. :) thanks for reading.

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 03:40 pm Title: Meet me *REPOST*

And Tom still doesn't know that Bill is a married, taken man.... when is he going to tell him?

Author's Response: Omg..!u read them! I am so pleased:) infact happy! Thanks alot for reading. Umm...yeah..you'll get to know ;) keep reading, gurl.

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 12:28 pm Title: Our eyes met

When their eyes met at the red lights my heart almost stopped beating:-) Yeap, I am biased, can you tell, lol:-)

Author's Response: Sweet , yeah. I love such moments. I wish it happens with me in reality. Someday ;)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 12:07 pm Title: The change

Tom's part was quite difficult to read. Poor lad:-/

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Date: 01/18/15 11:54 am Title: Chapter 24

That was a pretty interesting chapter. Bill is rendezvous-ing with his husband in Paris and pays 600 fricking euros for three t-shirts whereas Tom ended up on the streets and penniless.

Simone is an angel but I wonder how common it is in suburban Germany to offer a sleep over to a complete stranger... well, she must have a heart of gold, I guess.

Another thing... did Tom leave Simone's house in pajamas:-)

Author's Response: Emmm.. Simone is an understanding carefree mom. She's modern types.

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 11:09 am Title: Gone Forever

Where is he going? Silly, impulsive Tom.

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Date: 01/18/15 10:36 am Title: Let me go

I am shocked that Bill is staying with Bu and even considering to rebuild their marriage. Is he that blind that he doesn't understand Anis is just using him? He may love him, in the most bizarre and twisted way, but he is still using him. Poor blind Bill.

The same goes for Bill when he gave the names pf people who had attacked him. I didn't expect that. I mean, what happened to him was wrong as wrong can be, but still.... I hope he understands that Tom and his academic future is now done for. Maybe that's what Bill wants? He goes on a month long vacation and when he comes back, Tom is possibly gone for good? Hmmmmm.

I also think that both Anis and Tom are fucking hypocrites. Anis is pushing Bill to be confident, to go and befriend Tom, even to test the waters elsewhere and then when exactly that happens he goes ballistic. Tom declared love for Bill and he even said that he is ok with knowing Bill's secrets, that he loves him with all flaws and self-imposed restrictions and limitations and then he turns to a sadistic bully when he learns that Bill has someone else too? How come gentlemen?

Author's Response: I dont want the characters to be all fuzzy with bill just cos he's half feminine n all. I want to express how men really. Also, Tom's a spoilt teen,so he's all cool n doesn't like it when someone messes up with him.

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 09:38 am Title: STOP!

Anis is one sick fuck. Manipulate his "beloved" husband like that is beyond cruel. If I was Bill I would divorce him immediately. Ego driven, success hungry basterd like that is repulsive and Bill should run as fast as he can.

As for Tom... Hm. I have to say that all that pointless beating and aggression is kinda over the top. I found it very disturbing. Kicking a pregnant person on the ground is demented and heartless thing to do. On the other hand I think as a woman and I keep to remind myself that Tom and Bill are two males and when guys disagree they tend go throw punches, so maybe a guy kicking another guy is "realistic"? Idk. Anyway, Tom needs to come down and start using his brains for once. I liked how you wrote his initial reactikn to the news that the baby is his ( what is dad going to say), haha. He is still a teenager and it shows.

Author's Response: Thanks for ur reviews. You wil' get to know the reasin y anis behaved so bad with bill n Tom's just being rough n tuff. Guys get really over possesive or even beat the shit outta someone who hide alot...so. I want tom to see bill as a man not just a feminine type person. That's y

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 08:16 am Title: I cry silently

What a mess.

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Date: 01/18/15 03:54 am Title: The revenge

I don't understand why they are so brutal. I kinda get that Tom must be furious and is possessed by his jeloysy after what he has witnessed in front of the restaurant but still... They act like sadistic psychopaths and I am not sure if it adds up with their characters.
Anywayyyy... I hope Bill doesn't lose his baby and I also hope he will understand Tom's reason for lashing out at him like this.

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/15 06:46 pm Title: Affair

Ok, here we go. Tom knows and he is ballistic. God help him and god help Bill.

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/15 06:31 pm Title: Please Mom

Drama, drama, drama :-)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/15 05:43 pm Title: The result

Ok, this chapter was really intense. First the beating and Bu's rage and now Bill's pregnancy? Oh my, the guy has simply way too much on his plate right now.....

But seriously, do adult people beat each other like that? A belt? Really? Hello there, Mr. Fercicci, it is not dark ages....

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/15 05:11 pm Title: I love you

Bill's past is really puzzling to me. What kind of life has he lived? You mentioned his loving mother and his father who left them but otherwise I can't imagine what his world must have been like because he is kinda... I don't know how to put it.. unknowing of the wordly things around him. He has lived with Anis but he doesn't know the society? He feels uncomfortable and strange in a grocert store because he never shops himself? Also, his hinting at lack of freedom, is really bizzare to me. He is such a puzzling persona:-) Like an alien from another planet:-)

I am also waiting when Tom realizes that Bill has been married all along and gets really, really hurt by that. It looks like he really fell in love with Bill and learning such fact is going to be devastating for him. Hm....

Other than that I love their interraction really much. They are totally different, have lived very different lives but somehow match perfectly together.

Why is Bill bleeding? Was he pregnant and he just misscarried? Running to the next chapter:-)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/15 04:13 pm Title: The Fest

They canīt resist each other, it is so obvious. But the whole balance of their "relationship" is very fragile, their harmony so volatile. The flame of their passion burns so bright, I hope it doesn't die in agony as quickly as it was born...

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/15 03:30 pm Title: Real eyes and real lies

What is THIS stuff? Can Anis really influence on people's actions? Does he really have a power over other's minds? That is so chilling, gosh, I am getting worried:-/

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