Date: 03/18/15 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why is this a dream?!?! It needs to happen for real!!! I'm literally almost to the point where I wanna turn Dr. Frankenstein and create a body for David and with some type of voodoo magic take his soul (if he even has one) from the story and put it in there just so I can brutally torture and murder him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/28/14 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh yes yes yes yes i wanted him dead too! such a good dream
Date: 05/10/14 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah tom!!! I wish he did it too! I hate david!!
Date: 01/08/14 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha omg I loved this, I literally laughed for 3 min straight. I think it's the title that is so hilarious, it was exactly what was going through my head when I was reading "I see you", and the banner goes perfectly. Okay I'm gonna stop laughing now xD
Date: 11/23/13 10:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Meep..... This is really good! And yes, many of us will be very pleased with this miserable death XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :) And well, yeah, I hope Zarlina is reading those reviews under this story then. She must know we want Dave DEAD! :DDD
Date: 11/23/13 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Just realized I never reviewed this. O_o Huh, I thought I did. Oh well. I LOVED IT I WANT TOM TO KILL THAT BASTARD SO MUCH OMG OMG OMG OMG! I almost hoped it wasn't a dream! Urgh! Shall we persuade Zarlina into killing David somehow? Naah, it probably won't happened, but i want it to, so bad!! This was great btw! AND I LOVED THE FACT THAT HE AIMED AT DAVID'S CROTCH! Hahaha, boom baby! :D
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!! :) We totally need to persuade her into killing Dave somehow. This bastard doesn't deserve to breathe! :D And yeah I HAD to aim his crotch, I mean, how could I not? /grins evilly xD
Date: 11/23/13 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1
I really wish he had too, and get away with it!
Author's Response: Absolutely! :D Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 10/28/13 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Haha I shouldn't laugh while reading this, but I totally did because of the unanimous feeling that we all have about David. He's such a horrible person and should go to hell! I don't know if I actually want him to die or rot in jail or what, but I can honestly say that he is a miserable human being. So naturally, I greatly enjoyed this story. And of course, we wouldn't want Tom to be a criminal, and he's too sweet to kill someone so phew! for being a dream. But what a good dream...
Author's Response: Hahaha, yeah I agree with the fact that he really needs to get out of there! Jail would also be good for him, but I just hate this guy so much I felt like he just deserves to die! And Tom... yeah well, I think it was kind of hot to make him kill Dave. xD
A good dream indeed! Now we both just have to wait and see how Zarlina decides to end David (I kind of hope she makes Tom kill David for real, hahaha, ignore my sadistic feels please! :D).
Date: 10/27/13 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
*insane laugh* I wish this wasn't just Tom's dream
Author's Response: Me too! *laughs as well* I WISH! But to make this real, Zarlina needs to make this happen, haha xD
Date: 10/27/13 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg! That was a perfect compliment to Zarlina's story. Fan fiction based on fan fiction... I love it.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah well, I really love her fic. Thank you! :)
Date: 10/27/13 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh this is amazing XD and ouch tom is not going nice on david! but hey i dont mind!
this was brilliant really, and sandra better kill david in the end, or i think i will hunt her down :D haha
but this was really nice written and a great side story, i liked it a lot!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :) It was really nice to kill David and well... from what I understood, Sandra is also going to kill him in the end (OR WELL, SHE'D BETTER DO IT!). :D
Date: 10/27/13 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was in a call with Zarlina when readin this and I was so silent and quiet and suddenly all you could hear was me yelling: "Omg wtf was just a dream? what the hell? Nawws I was so happy for a second but now Im so disappointed"
Seriously Im one of those that won't rest and stop bugging my twinny (Zarlina) to kill David xD IT'S MY DREAM! AND BELIEVE ME SINCE THE CHAPTER FROM "I SEE YOU" WHERE DAVID RAPES BILL I'VE BEEN DREAMING OF HIS DEATH!
Anyways this was really good xD I really loved how David died *-* I feel so mean though ... but geez seeing the man in pain was a pleasure after all he has done xD But was such a disappointment when he just WOKE UP! LIKE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY YOU DO THAT TO ME! I WAS HAPPY QQ
Anyways amazing side story ^-^
Author's Response: Oh my God, haha, whoever you are, I LOVE YOU. I've also been Team!KillDavid since the beginning, basically. I mean, I even wanted him to die so bad I had to write my own story! :D
Anyway, yeah I also wish it were NOT a dream! But you know, this is not my story... :( BUT we can now both go bug Zarlina to KILL DAVE, KILL DAVE!!!! hahaha!
Thank you so much though! xx
Date: 10/27/13 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tom is not a murderer. I'm glad it was just a dream.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah well, I guess. This isn't theoretically my story so I couldn't really write anything else except a dream. Zarlina will be the one deciding what will happen with David. :)
Date: 10/27/13 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
First I must say how extremely honoured I am that you wanted to write this xD If David has such a big impact on you it must mean I've done something right with my story, and that someone would want to write a side story just to kill him off? Oh my god, it is so amazing!
Secondly, I loved this side story! My own killing of David will probably not be like this at all, but this is plain awesome. I love it! You go Tom! Good boy!
I like it how you kept the part with David thinking Bill loves him, that is so important in my story and I love how you let it be like that here as well! Aaah you are amazing. And the part with David saying “Bill won't miss you, I promise you that.” - killed me. That was just so, so sad. Poor Tom. Omg Tomi, don't worry, Bill loves you more than anything! Omg.
Yeah, sorry this review is all messed up xD but I really, really liked this side story, and like I said, I'm so, so honoured! You have no idea! This is amazing and I love it! Thank you so much!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! LET ME LOVE YOU! I was so afraid you wouldn't like it, OMG! O__O
David really did get to me in your story, I must say. He just... I don't know. He's like all innocent and nice but on the INSIDE he's an ANIMAL. And this... idk, I just felt like he had to DIE a long time ago already. And you just keep writing and writing but Dave's still there LIVING, BREATHING what he in my opinion DOESN'T DESERVE! I just had to finish him off! :D
Now, I can't wait to see your way to end this. I'm sure it's going to rock as well. And thank you SO much again for not hating it and reviewing and yes, love you xx