Date: 04/06/15 05:38 pm Title: the escape
great story
Author's Response: Thank you😍
Date: 04/06/15 09:45 am Title: the escape
What a lovely, heartwarming ending! As a reader, I really am happy that despite the odds, Tom and Bill are able to achieve their dream of escaping and being together. I wish them both luck on rebelling against the system. Again, loved it! Love you, too :)
Author's Response: Thanks love😘
Date: 04/03/15 09:51 pm Title: the anxiousness
Nice chapter! Ah, I could see everything unfold before my eyes. I'm looking forward to the next - and last - chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you darling💖 cant believe it will be over soon
Date: 04/01/15 11:15 pm Title: the desire
Hi, a new reader here. :333 Amazing story, I read it in one day and I was fascinated by it. And I love this chapter very much, very romantic and beautiful. I can't wait for the next chapter. :333
Author's Response: Thank you dear, your words mean a lot to me. I am so glad you liked it.
Date: 04/01/15 08:13 pm Title: the desire
Ooh, lookie here! Nadja has gotten a little naughty xD Kidding! It's such a powerful chapter, about healing and rebellion and making love and passion and purity and strength. I loved it so much! And you dedicated the chapter to me... I am incredibly touched.
Author's Response: I dedicate it to you bc you give me so much strength and motivation when I want to give up on my writing. I love you so much. 💖
Date: 04/01/15 08:07 pm Title: the desire
looking forward to more
Author's Response: More is on the way, dont wirry. I may have the next chapter up tonight.
Date: 03/29/15 12:19 pm Title: the town hall
Ooh, I can feel the climax of the story inching near (pun intended)! I like how you elaborate on the history of the "new world" - how freedom and creativity and expression are all banished. Keep it coming! Love you!
Date: 09/19/14 09:54 am Title: the registration
Oh, it's not boring at all! I thought that the emotions in this chapter were strong, and I felt especially sad when Tom began comparing himself to Bushido... Perhaps because this has possibly happened to the real Tom (the insecurity), despite his jokes about being "the best," etc. Loved this chapter. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: I totally agree. I think when he was younger you coukd almost sense that all this talk of being the best was covering up something more serious, like an insecurity of some kind. But I also think he lost that, he still makes jokes and everything but you can feel that he is more mature now💖 rnHahaha was funny to write that tho bc I personally dont find bushido attractive one bit but ge is a good charakter for the story. rnThanks for the review dear, love you from here to the moon and back💖
Date: 09/17/14 11:59 am Title: The jealousy
Noooooo I need more to this story! *_*
Brilliant job, my darling! Can't wait to know what's next.
Author's Response: Thank you love for reviewing. This means a lot to me, that such a talented writer like you likes it😍😘 and yes I am going to continue and finish this one before beginning with the next. I think the storiy deserves it. And urgh there are more sex scenes to come. So difficult to write them without sliding down the highway of cliche.
Date: 09/17/14 11:57 am Title: the touching
The sex scene was pretty good, don't worry about it ;) We need more, haha!
Date: 09/17/14 11:33 am Title: the confusion
My heart aches for Bill and Tom :c
Date: 09/17/14 11:30 am Title: the control
Gustav is on the scene! This world is getting more interesting. :D
Date: 09/17/14 11:26 am Title: the hunger
"... he wondered what it must be like living in a world full of choices, where everything was available."
This sentence is genius, and so painful at the same time.
Author's Response: Even I have bright moments hahaha😂 but seriously wevsometimes forget what freedom we have by making our own choices, decide our own course of life. But as always with freedom comes responsibility
Date: 09/17/14 11:19 am Title: the heat of despair
The beginning is promising! This new world sounds fascinating and cruel. Can't wait to read the rest!
Date: 10/24/13 09:14 pm Title: the touching
Oh that was sweet. And I feel really badly for Bill because being touched is so personal to him, and he's going to have to deal with it when he's married. I'm glad Tom recognizes that and wants to be his first...maybe it will help Bill a little bit. Poor thing!
Author's Response: I have to admit it was difficult to write because I really wanted it to come across how Bill felt and that it just wasnt sex between them but Tom making him more comfortable for what is come. He really glad it came across:-)
Date: 10/23/13 07:32 pm Title: the help
That's a cool twist that they won't be able to get out within the allotted time. I wasn't really expecting that. I'm glad Georg can work some magic and isn't judgmental...I'm thinking Gustav will be weasling his way into more of the story now since both Bill and Tom will have to find mates. Hopefully they can find people like them, who want to escape, too. We'll see! Fantastic job :)
Author's Response: thank youu :-) and yes there will be see more of our all sweet Gusti. Yeah Georg isnt judgemental but he is a bit crazy, in a sympatic way...haha :-D I have to work in his natural beauty in the next chapter *lol*
Date: 10/20/13 01:51 pm Title: the hope
Whooo Georg appears! Well, almost. Bill and Tom are just so cute and sweet together. I have to contain my squeals because of how great this chapter was, but it's hard. I also like that both Bill and Tom are so brave in their own ways, and I really really hope they're able to make it through. I know it won't be easy. The system is just so interesting!
Author's Response: thank youuuu :-) awww as always your reviews make me so happy ...I really are glad that you liked this chapter...it took me ages to write ....rnHave a nice sunday evening!!rn*Waves*
Date: 10/15/13 10:08 pm Title: the revelation
alskdfja;asklfeij! Finally they kissed! Oh, how cute. I really don't know how they're going to get out of this, but I'm so happy for them for the moment anyway.
Author's Response: Thanks <3 I had to rewrite this a couple of times I wanted it to be good since it is such a important moment. Thankyou for reviewing as always you made my day<3
Date: 10/15/13 09:13 pm Title: the revelation
finally
cant wait for more
Author's Response: More is on the way! Lately work is keeping me busy! I'll update as soon as I can.... Thanks for reading<3
Date: 10/13/13 06:32 pm Title: the confusion
Oh these poor boys! I really don't know how they're going to make it through this with a good result. I'm worried for them!
Author's Response: Me neither... At least not yet:-) I havent decided on a good or bad ending