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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/20 11:51 pm Title: Epilogue

this was a good story!!
you should do a sequel to this!!

Reviewer: Grisia San Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/19 02:18 pm Title: Epilogue

Really interesting story. A bit simple and has few logical mistakes, but it is a lot more than I had expected. And I absolutely love cross dressing so you have my heart. Thank you

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/16 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful day... Beautiful Bride

I haven't started reading yet, I am going to, but I read your little note (please don't kill me etc...) Don't worry. Just write. I'm sure there will be folks on here who enjoy your work. That being said, I'm off to really read your story. I always love an Assassin Tom/ killer Tom story. *hugs an sprackles.

Author's Response: Awww thanks but erm... Prepare to be disappointed. There isn't any killing done by Tom in this. It's mostly reflective on how he USE to kill people but we never really see. Bill on the other hand we get to see a lot of weird shit

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/15 05:54 am Title: Chapter 15: confessions

Maybe nobody knew what to say? I'm sorry if there is no comment, but if you update, readers see there is a new chapter - but there is no new chapter, then they dont see it positiv :(

Author's Response: Yeah maybe. Still discouraging though. I'll see what I can do about chapter 16 this week. I'm almost done which is killing me. The end is so close, I can taste it and yet I can't seem to get off my ass and get it done.

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/15 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 15: confessions

The third time you posted this chapter ... :/

Author's Response: Yeah, I know, but it seemed like no one was reading it and once it's been up for a few days, it disappears off the 'recent stories' and I haven't gotten a new chapter typed up yet because I haven't got the drive for it. I'm sorta waiting for someone, anyone, to review something nice so I have the drive and will to work on this. :'(

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/15 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 14: Trust...?

😱😨😱😨😱😨😱😨 omg !!!!!!! I cried on this chapter Bill I feel for you babe 😭😭😭 Angry Tom sounds sexy for some reason 😁😁😁 update soon I wanna know what happens

Author's Response: Lolz, I'll see about typing up the next chapter as best I can tomorrow. Once I have all the chapters typed up (which given my speed shouldn't take too long) I'll finish the last three or four chapters I have left to post. Glad you enjoyed and trust me, after 'Bite me, Bitch' I think Angry!Tomi makes for a sexy tomi ;)

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/15 01:54 am Title: Chapter 13: Skeletons in my Closet

Omg you're back !!!!!!!!! I love this story so much I missed it 🎉🎊🎁🎈🎈🎈💜💗💛💛💙

Author's Response: *laughs softly and smiles* Yeah, I'm back but I need to get back on the stick and type everything up.

Reviewer: Mango113095 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/14 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 12: Stocking Up

Love love love. Can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Posting a piece of the next chapter now!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/13 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 11: Rediscovering Running

Whhoooooooo finally this story is back update soon darling

Author's Response: It's not really, sadly. I just had this chapter lying around. Like I said, I'm still scurrying to finish up Cream or Sugar... check my profile for more.

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/13 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 10: Really, Georg?

NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT THAT STORY ONCE IN A LUST MOON WERE IS IT I WANT TO READ ITPLEASE TELL ME

Author's Response: xD Currently, I'm still typing up the unedited version and then I will post both the sexually censored and uncensored versions. The link will be included once I do.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/13 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 10: Really, Georg?

AH,I still love this story. Bill is a bit of a firecracker, isn't he? And I'm glad Georg entered the story! Hopefully your temporary hiatus will be short :)

Author's Response: Yes he is and what I'll be doing is typing up the story I've got done currently and posting that (there will a link don't worry) and then I'll finish this story which is fortunately close to its ark so then I'll type it up and post it (one chapter at a time sadly) at which point, you'll get the whole story in one gulp. So yes, very short given how bored I get in class.

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/13 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 10: Really, Georg?

what is a rap sheet?

Author's Response: Basically, things he's done in the past. I.E. people he's hurt and/or killed in O'Donnelly's name, stuff like that. A rap sheet translates to everything some one has done illegally or immorally in the past.

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/13 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 9: Lost in Thought

aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omfg..!!!!!!!!!! you must update soon i swear

Author's Response: xO xO Don't pressure me! I've got like a 56 in Math! I will update as soon as I can! ;(rnxD Seriously, though? That was an awesome reaction X3

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/13 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 8: Tensions and Confrontation

I want more I will someday marry this story I swear :-D

Author's Response: xD Thank you!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/13 05:31 am Title: Chapter 7: A Stolen Moment

Nooooo........u always leave me with a hunger for more .....god I love this story

Author's Response: xD Don't worry. Today I should update.

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/13 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Hotels and Streetlights

Cute, fluffy chapter! ^^

Author's Response: xD Thank you! I was kinda going for that... Like I said, I was sick at the time. ^^"

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/13 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 3: First night out

Oh, yes, it'll definitely be a long trip! Well, I'm exciting. Is this really your first story? I'm impressed. It's really good! :)

Author's Response: Yup yup yup... at least for this pairing. I've done a few rps and other pairing oneshots but this is my first TomxBill pairing story. I hope I'm doing well!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/13 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: Deadly Secrets

Oh, wow! Bill's engaged to a fucking shark! Oh my god, I guess they are both in trouble now :O Oh this is gonna be good! Haha, he realized SHE is a HE. Oh, I wonder how he is going to react... But it's too late to back out now, like Bill said, O'Donnelly won't forgive him no matter what! Oh, I'm so excited for more!

Author's Response: Mobster not shark! xD Yup yup yup! Surprisingly, well. And there will be more! >:O

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/13 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 Re-vamped: A Bride, a Cigarrette, and a Gun

No, it didn't suck, it was cute! ^^ There's never ENOUGH love!! :D

Author's Response: xD Thank you!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/13 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful day... Beautiful Bride

Oh, this seems interesting! ^^ Funny how he just sees a beautiful bride and instantly wants to run away with her :) I like it! I LOVE romantic novels :) So this is going to be good!

Author's Response: *blushes* thanks, I'm one for the sap. ^///^

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