Date: 01/02/17 06:22 am Title: Chapter 5
Bill needs a mental assessment.
Date: 01/01/17 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Glad to read a new chapter in this story :) Great chapter :)
Date: 12/31/16 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww, you are welcome :)
Yeah, I think its maybe even a bit of racism, that makes Bu in most of the storys a bad guy. I dont mean it in a bad way, but I think it could be true :O
This thing is for sure so weird :D But not just that. Bill seems to be a pretty normal guy, but it seems that he dont think its that weird. All in all i dont understand why he is with Anis and why he is doing these thing. Sure he likes him, but he even dont seems to be in love. At least not much.
I'll see what is behind all that ^^
Date: 12/31/16 09:34 am Title: Chapter 4
This Kitten-Thing and 'I'm talking about myself in third-person' is really weird and kind of dismatches the beginning of the story.
And I still dont understand what people have with bushido. He is married for 4 years now and is father of 4 kids (or more?) The only thing he had done is, that he said many years ago, that he liked the femalesinger of tokio hotel. Unbelievable what one sentences can change :'D
Yeah, what ever, I will never be a friend of BillxBushido, but still I liked the beginning of the story.
I just hope Bushido and the weird and unfitting 'Kitten' and 'I talk about myself in third-person' thing will not last that long. Because everything else I liked really much. Tom seems to be a nice, little rebellish but still sweet dude, and Bill seems to be a nice and adult person, who is calm enough to not freak out when tom does something stupid :D
Please dont be mad at me and I hope you understand my not so good english :'D
I'm looking forward to a new chapter.
Author's Response: Of course I'm not mad at you! I will never be mad at people who are kind enough to take the time to review my work :)rnrnI am sorry you're not a fan of BillxBushido. I personally have nothing against the man, but he does make for an enigmatic character and I am aaalll about the enigmatic! So that's why he's here, but I appreciate that it's not for everyone and thank you for taking the time to read something you're not too keen on. I'm actually quite glad that you feel that the "kitten" thing is strange and mismatched, that's precisely what I'm going for, although maybe I have taken it too far? I have not yet written the rest, so I will keep in mind that it might be pushing it a bit and take it from there.rnrnThank you for your lovely comments! I'm so happy that, even though you don't like parts of "Suburbs," you've kept reading. It means a lot to me :) I shall update as soon as I can.
Date: 03/30/15 03:11 am Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm, interesting. Looking forward to seeing what kind of dynamic they really have.
Date: 03/27/15 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 03/26/15 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
I don't trust Anis, I don't know why, but I just don't trust him xD and besides that, Bill belongs to Tom of course, but I guess Bill will realize that later, and I hope he isn't to scared to break up with Anis at that time. Great chapter :) I can't wait for more (I will wait patiently ;) )
Date: 03/26/15 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm scared of Anis and I'm not even in that story :D Poor Bill, it seems that Anis is complete manipulating him :(
Date: 03/17/15 06:23 am Title: Chapter 3
Great story! I like it! Can't wait for more :)
Date: 03/17/15 01:31 am Title: Chapter 3
Bills emotions matches the sea.
Can't wait for another chapter!
Date: 03/17/15 01:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh boy...from 0 to 60 in a heartbeat
Date: 03/17/15 01:20 am Title: Chapter 1
No idea how I missed this before! On to the next chapter...
Date: 03/16/15 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's a great story, I hope for more soon :)
Date: 03/16/15 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great story so far. Kinda makes my stomach turn tho hearing how Anis has Bill controlled. I didn't expect that at all.
Date: 03/16/15 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Woah. Poor Tom... I really liked it :)
Date: 03/05/15 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Mmm I love it ;). Aww cute :). I have 6 cats and yeah. Is this set in the UK? Like cos it menyioned scotlabd and truro (I recoginse that name...)
Date: 08/19/13 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jesus! Poor Tom, 3.5-hour trip back home? Afternoon, perhaps, but in the morning? Tying it has poor closer to the school, they will just go through the entire story, and you will feel tired.
The story is really like. I wonder how this will go through a ten-year age difference. A teenager and an adult man are two different worlds.
Date: 08/17/13 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
uuulalala hahah i like that Bill offered Tom ride and it went crazy hahah i wonder what they will do from that point they are now