Date: 12/15/17 11:51 am Title: Chapter 16
this was a really good story!!i hope that u did a sequel to this
Author's Response: I did its called tainted hearts
Date: 09/22/13 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay
Author's Response: :)
Date: 09/22/13 01:29 am Title: Chapter 16
super :) i like this lonely chemistry between Tom and Bill.
Author's Response: Lonely chemistry or lovely chemistry?? And you're probably excited for the sequel and so am I. I hope it goes well.
Date: 09/22/13 12:58 am Title: Chapter 16
SEQUEL YAY
ty
cant wait for it
do you know when you will start it?
Author's Response: Hopefully the first week in October it'll be up. I am trying to figure out how to start it. But there will be a sequel.
Date: 09/21/13 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
cant wait for more
Author's Response: :)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 09/03/13 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to more
Author's Response: :)
Date: 08/19/13 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow
im glad she is better
yeah my mom had a meltdown too recently and had to go to the hospital for a few weeks but she is better now
cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: :) Thanks
Date: 08/18/13 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
omg
My mom has always treated me like a child (she is getting better now at treating me like an adult) but she never was that bad.
poor bill
please update ASAP
hugs
Author's Response: Yeah I used to be treated like a child this badly because my mom was sick most of my childhood and she had a little meltdown last year and every time I did something even relatively close to maturity she would get angry. But she's fine now so I took my experience and translated it to fit Bill.
Date: 08/18/13 10:39 am Title: Chapter 13
omg, poor Bill. his mom is even worst than Andrej lol
Author's Response: Well I wanted to show a bit more of his family being that I haven't developed them enough.
Date: 08/16/13 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this fic already:) and by the way, that is the most beautiful drawn picture of Bill I've ever seen. Did you do it?
Author's Response: Sadly no, I can't draw for shit. I found it online and thought it was amazing. Danke for loving the fiction for what it is now.
Date: 08/12/13 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah i know what you mean, its hard for me to write ANYTHING anymore
Author's Response: I look everywhere for inspirationrn
Date: 08/05/13 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
cant wait for more
please update soon
ok bed time for me
dr tomorrow
Author's Response: Thanks and sorry that it takes so long to post these but they're hard to write.
Date: 07/28/13 01:27 am Title: Chapter 11
God Lord, so much happened in this chapter..I simply can't wait for next chapter!!
Author's Response: I am in process of writing it now
Date: 07/27/13 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg
please update soon
and just cause someone is paralized doesnt mean they cant swim, but i know what you ment hehe
Author's Response: But he never learned because his parents were scared he'd drown. I should've included that but I wanted to make it liked he was so pissed he just yelled the first thing that came to mind.
Date: 07/27/13 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
Can I kill Andrej now, bittteee???
Noooo, Someone must find him (abouttocryhere)
You're gonna post more tonight right???
Author's Response: I'll see. Depends on if my computer is available.
Date: 07/15/13 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
ty
Author's Response: :)
Date: 07/15/13 11:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Date: 07/15/13 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
ok........first of all i think you are a great descriptive and narrative writer. Is that your major at NYC? I graduated from U. of the state of NY, Albany. It's refreshing. I am more of a screenwriter myself but before i publish something on this site i wanted to read as many stories as not to plagiarize anyone. I too am so sad about bill's new hair style but at least he didn't go all britney on us and shave his head!!! My only suggustion is that you find a beta on this site to help with small grammar errors. I love this story!!!!!!!(xxxxooooo)
Author's Response: I live in NYC or New York City. I haven't made it to college yet being that and this may shock you, I'm 15. Yeah, I know I am a pretty good narrative writer for 15 but I practice with Fanfiction and with my own original stories. Thanks for reading and enjoying and being that I was practically raised in North Carolina I speak a little differently. Like we use run on sentences and we use tons of contractions. But I try to break that. I'm starting to go over my work before posting it so it's better.
Date: 07/15/13 03:32 am Title: Chapter 10
Andrej is so getting on my nerves but he's jealous so being bitch is just priority for him now. I wonder how long he would behave like that, well, good that Tom is still by his side and his grandma likes him ;)
Author's Response: People are just so mad at him now. I know I know he's bitchy and it's getting annoying but you need that bitchy person in all good stories. You need your antagonists.
Date: 07/14/13 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
that was a beautiful chapter
it made me feel good
thank you and cant wait for more
Author's Response: I was hoping you'd like it. I took forever to find out how to introduce their grandmother that they talk about.
Date: 07/11/13 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow
thats great
Author's Response: :)