Date: 05/20/13 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Illusion
I loved this. It was really easy to get lost in the story and I liked how real it seemed. You should definetely write more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I may do after exams, thats the reason its a one shot, theres a probability I may write more. Feel free to check out my other stories though :)
Date: 05/20/13 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Illusion
That was awesome! Really well written. I hope you add another chapter or continue the story!
Author's Response: Thank you! Theres a probability I may :) rnFeel free to check out my other stories x
Date: 05/19/13 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Illusion
Whoa that was so hot and so romantic!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 05/19/13 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Illusion
Incredible! Your description and portrayal of the OFC's thought process was so realistic. It was easy to imagine this happening to myself.. Only wish it wasn't a one-shot!
Author's Response: These reviews literally make my day! Thank you! And theres a probability that I may continue with more chapters at some point but for now feel free to check out my other stories :)