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Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/14 01:40 am Title: Ella

OtPie, I'm dying here D: i want to knooow I need to knoooowwww, what happens neeeext D:

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/14 05:58 am Title: Ella

I was so nervous when they brought in that baby. I'm glad she was able to fight that urge, It must've been horrible for her but I'm happy at least she can control it now. Hmm as afr as the killing go, now im confused, from the looks of it, it seems its someone who does not like Tom at all. On another note I'm so nervous as to what reaction Tom will have, I love me some hurt comfort! let him reject her at first! he should be surprised and somewhat disgusted.Then anger, you know the phases of acceptance/grievance sorta like that :P You know me hurt comfrot all the way. Cuz it should never be that easy ;) and then idk after a while when he can no longer control himself full on 50 shades of grey sexy time with Shy! XD lol did i just say that?! *facepalm* I loveeee your story. Update soooooon!!!!! I can't wait! :D

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/14 05:57 am Title: There's A Fine Line Between Hopeful and Hopeless

So she was finally turned and yess she should have said yes to Tom :( he asked so many times. Now look what happened. She keeps talking about this future with Tom but what makes her so sure Tom would accept her so readily? >_< I just love me so hurt comfort :P I hope she does get her revenge though, and I hope Tom isn't guilty on all these killings. What if he is??!! He will kill Shy!! :O on to the next chappie.

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/14 05:56 am Title: Whether I Like It Or Not

Ahhhhh! you're back QTPie!! You are a pieces of shit! *shakes fist at you* nah but its awesome seeing youupdate now. The fandom has been crazy, have you heard? lots fo changes. :/ get nostalgic just thinking about it, I miss 2009 :/
Ayway! OMG they are going to turn her! Tom will be so fucking pist! and woah! 4 more murders?! Man I want to keep believing Tom is innocent in all this but man what a way to test him, changing the person he loves into the thing he hates poor Shy. What happened I bet they heard she was going back and interfered in the pickup meaning she got into the wrong car. I'm off to the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: sandra21292 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/14 11:41 am Title: Ella

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! For the update lol. Awesome chapter. It was cool to see how they took the Tim to prepare her. Thought I was kind of scared about the baby thing lol. As for Tom... angry would be a natural reaction but I think some angry sexy time would be nice :-) and I think having it in Tom's POV would be a good idea. That way we can get the full affect of how he is going to feel when he sees Shy as a vamp. :-) update soon!!!

Reviewer: sandra21292 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/14 12:22 pm Title: There's A Fine Line Between Hopeful and Hopeless

You know how to keep people in suspense lol. Please update soon! I just want to know what Tom's feeling are going to be when he finds out what they did to Shy.

Author's Response:

Ask and you shall receive ;) I just updated!
Yeah, I wanna know that too, lol ;) So drop me some thoughts about it and I might just use them ;p
Thanks for he review, hun!

Reviewer: mariarenate Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/14 04:21 am Title: There's A Fine Line Between Hopeful and Hopeless

She should take them down. Hate that son of a bitch, Jörg. Tom should never forgive him for this. Curiuos to see how she'll be as a vampire, though. I also really want to know who the killer is! I mean, it has to be someone that's already in the story, right?

Author's Response:

Yeah, f*ck Jorg haha.
I just updated (sah quick, I know! ;)), and the whole vampire thing is discussed a bit :)
Urmm... maybe we've met the killer? hahah definately been mentioned, but now that she's a part of this world she'll (and we'll) discover a lot more in the following chapters :)
Thanks for the review, sweet! Good to know people are still reading :)

Reviewer: sandra21292 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/14 10:16 am Title: Whether I Like It Or Not

OMG!!!! That was worth the wait lol. I really really really hope that they don't end up changing her. That Tom miraculously saves her at the last minute :-) please update soon!!!

Author's Response:

Urm, for that answer you'll have to read the next chap, hahah.
Thanks for reviewing, dear.

Reviewer: orangechic5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/14 05:33 pm Title: Whether I Like It Or Not

I love this story. I hope that Tom will still love her no matter what.

Author's Response:

Thanks, dear.
Hmm, maybe ;) There's definately going to be some shocks
Thanks for reviewing! I just updated :)

Reviewer: loli2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/14 04:01 pm Title: Whether I Like It Or Not

Ooooo im so happy you updated the story! I love it! I really want to see the reaction of tom.. Maybe he can save her and finally "be" with him and she gets pregnant while being a human?

Author's Response:

Thanks, dear. I just updated :)
Hahaha, I love your thoughts, I'll keep them in mind ;)
thanks for reviewing! :D

Reviewer: AxelaPistol Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/14 09:40 am Title: Whether I Like It Or Not

Still here :) P.S. I love this because I'm a slow (sometimes even non-) updater, too! Inspiration.

Author's Response:

Hahaha, it's just so hard to sit down and write sometimes, hey. lol
But I finally updated, hope you got the motivation to as well ;)
Thanks for reviewing! <3 

Reviewer: conner Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/14 02:20 pm Title: Eyes of Honeycomb

good story :D update soon cant wait to find out what her decision is :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I just updated :D

Reviewer: xSkittlesX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/14 09:27 pm Title: A Safe Place

GAH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I am so looking forward to the next chapter !:)

Author's Response:

Thanks, sweet :) It's F I N A L L Y here if you're still interested, eep ;)

Reviewer: orangechic5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/14 02:53 pm Title: A Safe Place

Awesome! I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :) The story has finally been updated if you're still interested :)

Reviewer: sandra21292 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/14 12:23 am Title: A Safe Place

Awesome update honey. Kind of sad that they split up thought. I wanted more sexy time between the two of them :( As for my stories... knock yourself out lol. I have 6 that are completed and one in the works. Please update soon. I NEED to know what happens lol and who killed the vamp.

Author's Response:

There will be plenty of sexy time in about three chapters time, and since I just updated that means in about 2 chapters time ;)
I will definately check out a story or two :) Gonna do it now actually :D
oxo

Reviewer: mariarenate Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 01:23 pm Title: A Safe Place

Please don't change her. Women who can't think past their boyfriends annoy me to no end. I don't see how changing into a werewolf would make her any less unsafe, at all. Plus, this luckily isn't Twilight, so she presumably wouldn't wake up with, like, magic selfcontrol, and be able to not kill people. It's also true that Tom is the one that put her in danger in the first place, and he is undoubtedly the one who's being selfish. I'm glad she stood up for herself.
And also, why would they kill her? Obviously she wasn't the one to rip that body to shreds... From what I gather, no human could do something like that with their bare hands - especially to a vampire...? So would they kill just for being with Tom? Is that illegal in that world or something? Surely that isn't that uncommon.
Phew, that was a lot of rambling, sorry.. Hehe

Author's Response:

Hahaha, I so appreciate your insight :) Spolier, she won't be changing into a werewolf ;) But Tom's whole justification for it is based on the fact that she'd be able to take care of herself a little better if she had all the strenght of a creature, etc. AND YES! THIS LUCKILY ISN'T TWILIGHT! Blegh! ;) 
I just updated, and I sort of explain some of the reasons why she's in danger but Idk if I do such a good job at it so if you're still interested in the story and read the next chapter and still want some clarification--which I totally get lol-- then I can explain it a bit better in a -reviewresponse if you want :)
And you're definately not rambling, I love long comments :D And it's good to understand what readers think :)
Thank you so much for the comment and I hope the next chapter fills in a lot of your queries :)

Reviewer: AxelaPistol Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 10:30 am Title: A Safe Place

Oooh, suspenseful! I like it :) Taking control over one's life can often be the thing that forces others to reconsider their own lives as well. Keep going.

P.S. following now on Tumblr :D

Author's Response:

Such a true saying :)
I think I followed you back :)
Thanks for the comment and if you're still interested in the story I just posted a new (and very belated) chapter :)

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/14 10:00 am Title: A Safe Place

I think hmm idk this was a cool update but I think she's being a little stubborn. And I think theres more reason behind it as to why Tom wants her to change...I still think he did it XD and I just think he has this plan i can't quite make out yet. I hope no harm comes to Shy, because she didnt ask to be introduced to that world and idk I just feel really bad fro her....but I just cant help but shake this feeling that Tom has a hidden motive, sure she'd be safer but he keeps saying how it would be so much 'easier for HIM' or at least thats what I'm getting from him. I'm not sure he loves her yet.

Author's Response:

That was an awesome review! I had a few people comment on how it's great that she stood up for herself and it's interesting to see that others perceive it as stubborness :) Hahaha, hmm, maybe he did do it, maybe not ;)
Maybe it'd just be 'easier for him' to get sexual & rough with her, idk ;) Well, i do know, but yeah lol. We'll have to wait, I guess :)
Yeah they haven't said the L word yet ;) I think it might have to get a little tense before it gets to that though...if ;)
If you're still interested in the story I just updated :)

Reviewer: AxelaPistol Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/13 01:56 am Title: The Party

I'm usually a silent, lurkish sort of person, but when I read occasional breaths of fresh air like this I just can't help but comment on the loveliness of it all :)

Author's Response:

Ngaw you're so sweet, hopefully I can convert you to a reviewer ;) I'm really glad that you like the story so much to review :) I just updated, and hope you like it {enough to review again} jk ;)
Thanks for reading, Sweet.

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/13 08:58 pm Title: The Party

I think Tom did it! I dont know its just this feeling. I actually got to know Stephan a bit more in this chappie. Since he had to go the bathroom he hates vamps and how stepahn wont bring hsi sister around because of Tom...its just so much is pointing towards Tom he just scares me sometimes also to be honest. It sexy when he gets jealous or possessive but sometimes i swear as i read i get shivers haha Anyway This wa a wonderful chapter!!! And really long! just how i like em *no pun intended* XD Update Soon!!

Author's Response:

Accusation! ;) hahaha, Myabe he did, maybe he didn't, we shall find out, cause things are about to get intense ;) Yeah, Tom does sexy very very well ;D And waht! No pun intended?! ;) jk.
Thank you for reading AND REVIEWING! Much much much appreciated, lovely :)
I just updated btw. oxo

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