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Reviewer: Gol1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/13 02:04 pm Title: one.

thanks for the update, I loved it :)

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/13 01:18 am Title: seven.

I'm so glad you updated! I love this story so much. Rae seems like one sick and twisted b*tch. I like her character, and it's interesting that it's a woman who was the worst master rather than the usual man. But then again, women are pretty creative so she was probably really good at the mind games. Poor little Bill.

I'm really glad he's willing to go to therapy now. Therapy and accepting help is really frightening because you can no longer pretend that things aren't wrong. Bill has spent a long time blocking out his pain and now he's going to have to face the music in order to heal. But he has Tom's full support! YAY for update :)

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/13 11:46 pm Title: seven.

oh wow im really happy im Reading this because i love it!! its sad but very good history :D

Reviewer: Lady IF Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/13 11:04 pm Title: seven.

Same here. Really bad procrastinator. But to get back to the story, I really love it. I think you did a good job introducing Rae, and I can tell you had a lot of fun doing it too. Can't wait till the next chapter! Hopefully I don't have to wait to long!

Reviewer: Lady IF Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 03:53 pm Title: six.

Amazing! The closeness that Tom and Bill have is so adorable! But then the therapists just had to ruin it. That piece of crap.

Reviewer: Gol1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 03:06 pm Title: one.

I'm so glad that ur back again :) I really love this story :*

Reviewer: SunMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 01:53 pm Title: six.

Yaaay ur back

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 01:44 pm Title: six.

for sure Tom wants for Bill best and maybe he will understand that. well, he is doing good after what happened to him

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 01:41 am Title: five.

God I can't wait for the next chapter. So emotionally raw I can almost feel his pain and inner battle. Great job.

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/13 01:44 am Title: five.

Poor Bill. He's been throught too much and still.... He really does need help to get through this. I have a bad feeling that he will try to withdraw all thoghter. I Know he won't be the same Bill as before. The sweet, happy and energetic Bill we all know but if he could just let someone... Tom even help him to open up. Not just bottle it up and pretend for the sake of others. He has to deal with it or it will deal with him. The outcome of that will not be good.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/13 11:09 pm Title: five.

I know what you mean about writers block
I have had that for over a year and now my life is full of problems that i just cant write anything cause im so stressed out

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/13 07:43 pm Title: four.

i love this story

Reviewer: Gol1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/13 02:04 am Title: one.

perfekt story, please update the next chapter soon *_*

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/13 08:24 pm Title: five.

Great that you updated this story! Also, I'm very happy about Neue Erde, first I really like sci-fi, second, even if I adore your stories, and this one is very good too, I can't stand reading anything in first person, so Neue Erde is perfect for me.

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/13 06:45 pm Title: five.

Omg! This is amazing! Poor Bill...

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/13 07:59 am Title: five.

Yaaay ive been waiting for u but I love u so it's all good :)))

Reviewer: HarpAngel999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/13 06:26 pm Title: one.

you're welcome! sometimes reading it out loud helps- that's what they tell us here at college- if you can't get someone else to read it, read it out loud. The brain auto corrects little things for us, but when we read out loud, we're forced to read every word and it helps us catch mistakes. I've never done a beta, but I suppose I could try, if you like o w o

Author's Response: If you're interested, feel free to email me. I've never done anything like a beta before, so it'll be new for the both of us.

Reviewer: avrenix Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/16/13 02:04 pm Title: one.

keep going...please

Reviewer: SunMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/13 04:40 pm Title: four.

yay i

Author's Response: =3

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/13 01:30 am Title: four.

I just don't have the words...great portrayal of Bills inner struggle!

Author's Response: Thank you <3

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