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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/12 03:52 am Title: Chapter 10

nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: It's up...did you wait too long?

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/12 02:31 am Title: Chapter 10

hahahaaa, oh, Bill...why do you keep answering the phone from bed?

Author's Response: *sighs* Some people never learn! ;) *huggles you* Hope you liked it, and the next chapter is up!

Reviewer: Muffins Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/12 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh yeas. I'm also guessing that the thing that Bill is keeping from him is bordering around love.
Like when they were talking about Tom reading his words. I'm guessing that only the person you fall in love with -Your soulmate- can read your words.

...Yeas. I got this all figured out. Now I'm waiting for his reaction xD
Mwahahahha. -Evil laugh-

Author's Response: ;) *offers you some candy*

Reviewer: Muffins Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/12 01:43 am Title: Chapter 10

Oh. My god. Oh. Mein Gott. Bill. Oh. My.
He. Ohmygod. Sleep humped him.
What the actual fuck. What the hell. Sexy hexy, and awkward.....At least Tom got a yummy breakfast. c:

Author's Response: LOL @ your reaction! *huggles you* That he did, indeed. PS- next chapter is up, hope you like it!

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 10

Bill, Bill, Bill, what are you keeping from Tom?! I hope he comes clean and explains everything soon, AND I hope Tom admits to himself soon what he really feels about Bill. Halloween is almost here! :D

Author's Response: YES, Halloween is almost here! *huggles you* Thanks for all your awesome reviews! *hands you some Tootsie Rolls* PS- there's a new chapter up. Only two more to go!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 10

Anything can wait til after pancakes. Mhm *nodnod*

Bill's mom was wrong. She wanted Bill to tell him, she needs to let him do it his way, on his time. Unless of course there is some sort of time-is-of-the-essence thing going on that we don't know about yet.

Fantastic work! I'm so excited to see tomorrows update!

Author's Response: I want pancakes. :( I'm so hungry. Anyways. The new chapter is up! :D

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 10

okay, the trumpets in tom's ears part was my favorite. and i also enjoy bill's way of saying he's sorry.

Author's Response: Honestly, I don't know what made me think of that, the whole trumpets thing. (PS- there's another update) and I will leave you with a bowl full of Halloween candy. *flies off on a broom*

Reviewer: zeph317 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 9

Aw, this story is just so great! I love how you're making them adjust to each other a little more, like Bill is really becoming a constant in Tom's life even with his mystery. That last line was just perfect!

These guys continue to be sweeter than all the Halloween candy I bought and didn't give out to the kids so I have to eat it myself. At least your story won't make me put on extra pounds! xD

Author's Response: *gobbles up some of your candy* I am so glad you liked it! Anyways, I updated again, cause you know, this has got to end on Halloween. :)

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 9

Yay fireworks

Author's Response: *huggles you* I am glad you liked those! ;) PS, I updated again. Trying to get this story out of the way, k?

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 11:36 am Title: Chapter 9

aaww! they totally like each other!

*waits anxiously for the big secret*

Author's Response: *leaves bowl of Halloween candy out* Errm. You have to wait some more? *bats false eyelashes at you*

Reviewer: nyxleigh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 06:18 am Title: Chapter 9

This story is so cute. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really love the chitters! They're darling!

Author's Response: I am glad you like the Chitters! *sends you a few* Anyways, I updated again. (1 Chapter a night until Halloween)*huggles you*

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 04:30 am Title: Chapter 9

nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I hope I didn't make you wait TOO long,did I? (It's up)

Reviewer: Muffins Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 04:13 am Title: Chapter 9

Moar? :3
Time for sexy time, yet? Muffins is getting impatient. xD Nice chappie, too. Good t se that they're bonding

Author's Response: There is more. :D It's up and ready to go!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 01:25 am Title: Chapter 9

Wow...lucky me! It was like magic! I said I can't wait, and there it was! *gigglefit*

Handholding leads to bed. It almost feels wrong when that doesn't lead to sex, yet in this...it works.

WE NEED TO KNOW BILL! Stop being selfish amd keeping it to yourself. This involves more than just you and Tom, and you'll never be a lost witch with nowhere to go. You're always welcome here, or any number of fangirls and boys wouldn't turn you away. Lol

Fantastic work. I'm sad that we are getting close to the end.

Author's Response: I'm sad we are close to the end, too! They've worked their way into my heart. :/ Anyways, new chapter up, hope you like it! *shares Halloween candy with you*

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/12 12:14 am Title: Chapter 8

Ahh bros via foster care...cool-ish.

Aww why was Bill chatting up the Chitters and being all sad? He should never be sad!


What is Bill keeping from Tom? Are they soul mate or something?

I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Well, you didn't have to wait long, I juuust posted again. :D

Reviewer: Becca_178 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/12 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1

You know what! Just because of the incantation you used in this story's summary, I like you already! Fan of Charmed??!! Me too!!! I absolutely love Charmed and it is one of my deepest regrets the fact that they didn't bother to make a season 9... :P

Author's Response: Well, I like you, too! *huggles you*

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/12 01:06 am Title: Chapter 8

nice chapter!!
i cant wait for for the new chapter!

Author's Response: *huggles you* Thank you! I just posted the new chapter, hope you like it!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/12 12:43 am Title: Chapter 8

Tom's very slow. And not very aware of his attraction. :) anyway, cant wait to see how they deal with each other. Little suggestion: you may want to try italicizing the emphasized words instead of putting them all in caps, it'd make the dialog less crazy sounding. It currently seems like they shout random words xD

Author's Response: They DO shout random words. (TBH, that's probably just me. Some random writer with a case of tourettes) Anyways *huggles you* Posted again, so I do hope you like the new chapter.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/12 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter!

Author's Response: *huggles you* Thank you! The new chapter is up!

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/12 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 8

XD Tomi still hasen't lurned XD

Author's Response: *huggles you* Nope, he sure hasn't. :D Anywho, thanks for the review, and PS- I posted the next chapter...enjoy.

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